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It feels very natural and close to reality. I don't know what the bad points are. The only thing that I think may be unpleasant is that Ye Zlatan is too unpopular. At that time, when I played black and white, I always used Sun Eevee.

Come on, author. I like this book very much. It's been a long time since I've had a Pokémon novel that made me feel so warm. Very attractive. It's not as tiring as those system novels. I really like the author's description of the interaction between the protagonist and Pokémon, it's particularly heartwarming.

Reminds me of Teacher Lu [cover face][cover face]

The author is quite poor, not many people read it, but his writing is really good (✪▽✪).

Very well written, keep up the good work

Just two words are beautiful

Can we arrange a Boss Cordora?

Author, you also read "I Really Don't Want to Be a Trainer"

Pretty good, come on!

Author, don't you want to write?

It looks good. I like it. Can I arrange a sword monster with a strong shield?

Should the author consider the first roaring tiger in the universe? Come on, who doesn't want a big red cat that's clingy?

It's very beautiful, but it's written too quickly and doesn't feel like it's been carefully described.

The author's writing is very good, but I can see the shadow of Teacher Lu in it. I hope the author can break out of Teacher Lu's barriers and write in his own style.

It's well written, and the combination of games and reality is quite novel. Come on＾0＾~I'm optimistic about you

Come on, give you 5 stars

Come on and write, author, I support you.

Not bad, come on⊙∀⊙!

Please tell me, the author, whether Ibrahimovic is a dream changer.

The writing is very good, but while imitating Teacher Lu, you must also innovate more. Even if you can't innovate, you can't make up the word count. I hope you can continue your efforts and reach a higher level.

It's very nice. I suggest the author gain fifty more livers and make 500 pictures a day [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This book is so beautiful.

It's a good book, but why is it so short?

It's pretty, but the downside is that it's too short.

Come on, author! Try to break through 800 words (come on, surpass Teacher Lu [laughing evilly])

It's novel, unlike other novels where the protagonist has an affair with a bunch of women. Personally, it suits my taste. The author writes well.