The Moment Before My Daughters Were Killed, I Returned from the God Realm

The writing is good. In this era, being able to write to such a level is worthy of encouragement. Come on💪, but the updates are a bit slow.

Update more every day, it's not enough! The male protagonist here is decisive in killing, and the female protagonist is not a virgin. The most important thing is to let the two children practice, which is very nice. Unlike other stories, the children are never beaten, scolded, or kidnapped.

A very nice novel about rebirth, city, immortality, daddy, and single heroine.

No Ink Blots, no Madonna, normal pacing, worth watching.

Good! Very good! ! Very good! ! ! I really like this book, especially the author's way of writing (inserting a few pictures in the middle) is also particularly loved by readers. I hope that the author's future books will be written in this way [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

Super pretty! ! ! This is the only book I don't find boring

Wow, this book is really good. I have read thirty-six chapters now, and I haven't seen a single poisonous point. The protagonist is decisive in killing, and he won't be **** if he can do it! And the protagonist has no hidden strength! It's really fun to watch, but it's too short! Just like the author [eating melon]

It looks good, I like to see this kind of stuff, but it's hard to find and not enough to watch.

This book would be a waste if I didn't add it to my bookshelf. It's really good-looking, and it kills decisively. It's so cool when you can do it without killing. It's so cool. It's not like other articles that talk a lot of nonsense before killing people. The plot is very smooth and it's very comfortable to read.

The writing is very good, the writing style is very nice, but the title of the book is quite discouraging, so I almost missed it.

The scenario is well thought out! The only shortcomings are: the mortal experience process is a bit too much, and the protagonist is a bit too lazy! I hope that in the future, I will talk less about everything and make more progress! ✍✍✍✍✍✍👍👍👍👍👍👍💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

I like it very much. It's not as grinding as other novels about nanny, and it's not like one thing that only covers several chapters. It's great, so go ahead for the author! ! !

It is particularly in line with my taste. The protagonist and the two little princesses are written vividly by the author. I hope the author will write more rebirth and cultivation novels in this style. I look forward to the author's creation [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's been a while since I've reviewed a novel, and this book felt like a real experience. Good

It's a rare good book in urban literature. I'm chasing 611. The author should hurry up and write.

The novel is very wonderful and fascinating. I can't stop it and can't bear to let it go. Thank you to the author for your hard work. Five-star praise!

Very good 👍, worth recommending, the only bad thing is that the update is too slow. [Cover face][cover face]

I finished reading it on August 18, 2023. I think this book is very well written. It is very different from the traditional fantasy immortality novels I have seen before. The immortality part is written to cater to the daily part. Many plots have a lot of reversals and foreshadowings. You need to use your brain when watching, otherwise it will not be easy to understand, including the part about Lan Keke's biological parents He Marriage and Nie Tianlong. Some plots can only be understood after watching the finale. Regarding the mechanism of time and space retrieval and reincarnation, this life is also relatively complicated but also very exciting. However, I think the author's ending of the book is still a bit rushed. Some things I feel have not been explained clearly, such as why the two worlds suddenly became poetic and harmonious, why the cultivation of the protagonist in no world is still there, the result of the Taoyuan Lord, and finally why the protagonist becomes the Lord of Ten Thousand Domains. Although I know this is a way to end the novel, leaving us with some suspense, but I still feel that the ending is a bit rushed. In addition, I think the author's naming of chapters such as "Preface, Beginning, and Conclusion" is very novel, and the naming also has profound meanings. For example, "Yanlan Xianghui" is not only the name of the four female deities, but Xianghui is also a homophone for "Xianghui", which reflects that the members of the Meridian Pavilion met again after many years. Also, "Yangliu Yiyi" didn't know what it meant at first, but later I learned that Yangliu and Liu Yiyi were the same person with different names, and the words they formed were more beautiful. In short, I still think this book is very well written, and I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The writing is impeccable, the plots are interlocking, and the plots are closely connected. It always makes people want to stop and be deeply attracted. Various foreshadowings appear frequently, and the transformation is ingenious. It is very good. Personally, I think the shortcoming is that Yun Lai has too few scenes. As the younger brother of the protagonist, he is not as much as a supporting actor; in addition, the ancestor who created the world of cultivation is mentioned briefly, which gives people a very strange feeling; and the process of Yun Mo getting the fallen flames is omitted, which makes people feel itchy; the last point is that the sword spirit Yao Ji of Shura Sword disappears after writing, which seems a bit abrupt. Overall it's well written and worth recommending!

At least it's not the same as other novels. Come on, author [laughing]

Each character in this novel has a distinct personality and full of emotions. The author ties their fate together to construct a shocking life trajectory. The author uses delicate description to express the inner world of the protagonist. The reader not only sees his appearance, but also has a deeper understanding of his growth process and life experience. The plot of this novel is ups and downs, sometimes full of suspense, sometimes magnificent. The reader follows the protagonist's footsteps and experiences love, hatred, and all kinds of life. Worth recommending!!!

The author works hard and has a very upright outlook on life. It's not watery, but it's still fun!

This book vividly describes the two little girls

The hero's family is happy and warm, with deep brotherhood. He treats his subordinates with kindness and love. At the same time, various storylines can reflect the various aspects of society. Author 666

Unknowingly, I finished reading this book. This is the only male novel that I read seriously without skipping chapters. I like the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the friendship between brothers and the affection for family members! ! And infinite love for my daughter! ! ! !

It's good. The structure is clear and the characters are outstanding. I hope you can see the ending. Please help the author and don't end it. This is the clearest book I've ever read. It's not like other novels where the author himself is confused [please update]

It's good-looking and exciting. I hope it will always be a single heroine. No ambiguity, no harem, no double cleansing. I just like this kind of unconditional doting on my wife [smirk][smirk][smirk][smirk]

This book is very good, and I highly recommend it. Although the first part is not very good, I had to endure it when I read it, but the later it gets, the more exciting it becomes. Until now, the updated part, I think it is particularly good.

I finally finished reading it, and it really appeals to my taste [Adoration] [Adoration] Waiting for the update

The control of the plot is quite good, and too much writing is used in the narration and narration, so that it seems like reading a script. If the author can put more effort into the characterization of the characters, and make more detailed descriptions of the characters' dialogue, demeanor, and even psychology, so as to make the psychological impression of the readers beyond the characters more profound, this book will be even more perfect!