Dark Survival: I Got a BUG When I Traveled Through Time

It's great, the whole process is exciting and smooth. The only negative point may be my first comment on this book. However, looking back, that poisonous point can also be regarded as a foreshadowing for the future, saving the "princess" [the characters are all clearly represented by code names in this book review], and adding support to his subsequent journey. The article also hints that although the protagonist is dull, we can see the heroism and savior in it. It may be a bit holy to say this, but I think it is the most vivid way to say it. The protagonist is written very smoothly, and his mentality secretly changes a lot, so the plot develops smoothly. It can be seen that a lot of effort was put into writing the book. It's actually great that the original protagonist is forced to prey on opportunities, but has another development. The image description of each character is good, very three-dimensional, and very mysterious (hhhh generally speaking, half of the background of the character is written [laughing evilly]) [Actually, it makes me very happy. In other books, the main character or supporting character who is easily beaten, and the main character who is robbed of opportunities can be written so harmoniously, you are the first] Perhaps what is most likely to be poorly written in this book is the protagonist's love scene and the solution to the "princess". If it is written too dependently, it will be easy to be criticized. If it is written too silly and sweet (a compliment), it will be easy to be criticized. If it is written too coldly and there is no interaction with the protagonist, it will be easy to be criticized. It will also be easy to be criticized. [Laughing evilly] Looking at it this way, it seems like there is nothing to write about hhhh. In fact, I have an idea. If I write it as a comrade, there will be nothing to complain about. It will not be too far away from the protagonist (convenient to repay the favor), and it will not be too close to make people have goosebumps. My idea is just a suggestion. It depends on the author. I hope I won't spoil it [laughs evilly]. If there are no big surprises (ﾟoﾟ; I hope the author can continue writing, this book is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, come on! If you think I may be too arrogant about what I said just now, I'm sorry and I hope you can understand me. Please don't report it. Your children are afraid of being reported If you want to read the comment area, you can take a look at my comments first. I am also an old bookworm. I should write fairly objectively. I hope it can help you.

Wow, this is the best survival story I've ever read, and it's also very original. The background is also quite clear, giving people a general understanding of the world.

I really like this book. Helping each other and uniting to survive in a dark world really impressed me. The setting is also great! Maybe it's because I really love this whole healing cleansing thing! It's a pity that it's not enough... I want to stock up on chapters w. Although I can't give any good advice based on my IQ, I still hope that the author will work hard (..›ᴗ‹..) In addition to being happy to find a book that suits my preferences, I also feel empty and lonely, because it is difficult to find similar books (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

How should I put it? You didn't read it and thought it was a Ke series. After reading a few chapters, you thought it was King Xin. In fact, he also has rules for ghost stories, which are a bit mixed, but it is really good-looking. The main character has a very good outlook on life. He is not a Holy Mother, but very kind. You may feel conflicted. That's because your definition of Holy Mother is too broad. This is a rare and good book. The rating should not be so low. In addition, when can the protagonist contact Lin Ye? Lin Ye's scenes are a bit lacking. The three market scenes are limited and cumbersome, but I won't deduct points. It's just for fun [making faces]

I like articles like this very much. When I clicked on it, I thought it was just a mindless article that I would slide in and read for 10 minutes before browsing. But after 10 minutes of reading, I couldn't put it down. Behind the stuck bug is the huge world view of this dark world. A series of events in the dark world have their own logic behind them. In a world of despair and madness, the protagonist is not at the peak of his combat power like the reborn person in the book, but he has indeed won our love. At least I like this character very much. He is an ordinary man, but he is also a great man.

The fusion of the Greek world view and the dark dungeon is really nice. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write the next masterpiece.

In my personal opinion, this book is very good. You can say that its shortcomings are as numerous as stars, but you can't miss the moon because of this. When I first watched it, the protagonist seemed a little overflowing with sympathy, but as I watched it later, I realized more deeply that this whole world is shrouded in darkness, without light or hope. Even the sun has fallen, and people are numb and struggling in pain. The protagonist appears like a sun, yes, a new sun. His love should be selfless and should bring light to everyone. I think this may be the mission that the author gives to the protagonist. He is also a pioneer, cutting off the thorns on the road to the future and passing on the fire to civilization. There is no road in the world. If there are more people walking, there will be a road. Maybe he is not that great, but I hope he will change this dark world. Before dawn comes, someone must light up the dark night a little, and I believe the protagonist is that kind of person I have to say that I think the author has developed a very large world view. I just hope that the author can work hard and I support you!

This novel is generally good. The most unforgettable thing for me is that in the novel, different people have different opportunities. Everyone is their own protagonist. There are time travelers, rebirthers, and many ordinary people. They have all gained a new life through their own experiences. Although the protagonist is Yasukawa, it still talks about the opportunities of different people. People are not cold-blooded here. In the subsequent development, there are still countless people who pave the way for others just like the ancestors of our country in the past. The protagonist and the reborn people all have one purpose, which is to survive with others in this dark continent and will not only care about themselves. The guides, information and strategies one after another in the domestic channels are exactly the experiences people have gained through continuous exploration and dedicated to helping others. As for why I only gave it four stars, the one star is because the protagonist at the beginning just looked pity on people and inexplicably gave away the sun oil that cannot be exposed to others, although he got very good things when he synthesized it later. But it's not reasonable at all. No one is a fool, she is too holy, and the author's description of the girl is either delicate or cute. I was a little speechless. I can't meet a girl. She is at the level of a fairy, right? Reduce unnecessary descriptions of those women (here, I always feel like you are trying to make up the word count) Come on, I support you.

A very excellent book. Both the content and writing style are very much in line with my taste. It can be seen that the author is a novice. There were a few bad points at the beginning, and the pace of the novel was sometimes fast and sometimes slow, which caused the novel to almost collapse later. The author managed to recover from this situation. I have continued to write so much. I really couldn't figure it out anymore, so I released the outline and announced the end of the novel.

Let me tell you something. In my opinion, the protagonist of this article is lawful good. Although there are some ugly human natures, they are not so obvious. Lin Shen also has a good outlook on life. Except for giving so many supplies to girls in the first few chapters, which made me feel a little inconsistent with the setting and logic and almost gave up the book. After all, many people died, but it came around later. There are very few survival stories that are neither brainless saints nor cold-blooded paranoid victims. They have very upright views. For now, I support the author and give it five stars.

It is a very good novel, but the author is always there, digging holes, always being the Riddler. Many words are not explained clearly, and there is very little written. I did not read it, because I feel that as long as I don't finish it, he will continue to write this book. I am going to Wait for the author to write a new book, or read it if there is a continuation of this book, otherwise I plan to keep reading. There are more than 30 pictures left, but I have not read them. I plan to keep these, but I still hope that the author will write a new book soon, or continue writing, I want to continue reading.

The author is awesome. I finally saw a good novel. Come on, don't be affected by those comments. Come on, your writing is very good. It is worth recommending to my friends (=^▽^=) Why is such a beautiful novel rated so low?

It's quite nice. I like this genre a lot. The author just updates too slowly and the author is too short. If the author updates more, I will give you a gift. [Sinister smile]

It's such a shame that the rating is downgraded. I think it's pretty good-looking. As long as the quality of the author can be maintained, this level should be at least 9.2 [Ask for more updates][Top post]

The author's writing is great and the world view is great! This is one of the best books of this type I have ever read! Not one of them! Taking Yasukawa (the protagonist) as the main line and Lin Ye and other important characters as branch lines, the narrative is alternately narrated, and does not stick to the perspective of the protagonist in general novels, so that the huge world view is displayed smoothly and clearly, allowing readers to have a more accurate positioning of the strengths of each character and monster. The narrative style is novel and rigorous, which makes people's eyes bright. (Anyway, I didn't find a few bad sentences in the novel, and there were no strange incidents of characters teleporting)

The writing is very good. If the author continues to develop it, I feel that it has the potential to become a god. The protagonist has a conscience but not a virgin. There are many foreshadowings in the plot at present, but the logic is clear. I hope the author can continue to keep it up. Come on.

It's well written, a hundred times better than those cheesy books with a rating of 9 or more. The writing is great, but remember to fill in the gaps, otherwise it won't feel good to read. The protagonist is not a virgin, but this kind of character is still very lovable, ten thousand times better than those selfish and arrogant protagonists. And it's very true. No matter how great he is, at least he helps the same district if he has the ability.

Generally speaking, the writing style is pretty good, much better than mindless novels. The characterization and plot are very good. It is the most satisfying novel I have read on Tomato. But it is too short. Can the author be faster?

This book is one of the few mysterious books I can find on Tomato. The protagonist is sympathetic but not the Virgin. The plot arrangement is reasonable, but it is too little and not enough to watch [angry]

It's super good-looking. It's very good. The protagonist is not called the Holy Mother, he is just doing his little bit for us. The writing is not good at all! Things are written in great detail! Like it very much! A very novel survival article! The group portraits are also well drawn! I just realized today that there have been no comments hahh

This is a work that is both bizarre and logical in its imagination and worldview. Although it is unfinished, the author has clearly introduced all the subsequent plots, and it can be considered a complete work, which will not bring regrets to the readers.

Well, I thought it was another kind of survival story written purely for fun. But I was wrong, the light shining in this huge world view is really dazzling. The protagonist may not be the strongest, but his story is definitely what we love. The exploration of the unknown has a pseudo-safe zone where we can rest. It can be seen that the author should have made reference to the games of the Soul series. I hope that he can give us a complete story in the future. The author updates quickly [strike hard] and strives for 400 chapters a day

This book is good and I like it. I hope the author can keep writing and it won't be unfinished [please update] Some people say that the protagonist, the Virgin, is better said to have a conscience

Give it five stars, the main character likes it so far. I hope the author will continue to update it. I feel pretty good reading it so far. The only uncomfortable thing is seeing the yellow button😏😏😏

I like this kind of subject matter very much. I hope the author will update it soon and write according to his own ideas. The bad points that others have said, such as rescuing the little girl, I think it's okay. It's not unacceptable. Come on, author!

Don't be dissuaded by the first few chapters and insist on reading to the end. The protagonist is not an invincible stream. There is no cheating in the book. There is no author with persecution and paranoia. Every character is written to want to go against the protagonist. There is no protagonist who is not a virgin purely for the sake of not being a virgin. There is empathy. (Minor spoilers: there are some in it. A reborn person who truly has three correct views), caring and helping each other, and the passing on of the unyielding fire of mankind. This is a story of unyielding human beings in a fallen land. It is the history of a group of small people. It really has the flavor of survival. It is the most exciting new novel (survival category) I have seen this year.

First author outlines the escape, please be careful. Overall, the plot and structure are spot on. (Except for a bit of a knife) Group portrait of survival in the dark apocalypse. For this group portrait, I give it five stars. The author later became busy with his career and has no deadline. Then there is the trivial writing that the author cares about the most. I think the author is very self-disciplined and can set limits for himself. The full text has three parts + the end, each part has 300 chapters, and each 80 chapters are the beginning, continuation, and end. The 20 chapters are used to respond to emergencies and connect the whole (world view, big plot, etc.)... Which is a bit too ideal. No more nagging, see you next time. I think the author is quite young. I am in Hangzhou and can meet him when I have time.

The writing is good, it reminds me of Dark Souls 3, but it's a little too watery. There is also a bigger problem, how dare the young man, with multiple main lines and multiple character descriptions. Usually those who write like this are thrown away. This is great for writing, character description, and plot. They are all huge tests. Anyway, I always skip or fast-forward when you write other characters. Do your other characters have any highlights and are they comparable to the charm of the protagonist? You can feel it yourself whether the plot can attract readers and whether it becomes more and more laborious as you write it. The book itself is a good idea and a good source of writing. Come on, author

This style of book is so beautiful. Someone gave the girl something and said it was very poisonous. This is obviously a foreshadowing, and it will definitely be of great help to the protagonist later. Besides, the protagonist plays the cracked version, and can give it to whoever he wants. Use one, throw another, eh, it's just for fun.

It's very interesting and I like it very much. Can the author write more chapters quickly? I seem to keep reading [crying] It's been a long time since I've encountered such an interesting and beautiful book. The author must not be a eunuch! [Cry][cry]