Traveling Through Another World: the Character of My Son of God Has Collapsed?

Let me start by saying that I am a little nervous about officially writing a novel for the first time. Regarding this first book, I spent an hour and a half filling in the history of Rice Wife for some subsequent plots (of course, I cannot guarantee that it is accurate, and it is a semi-imaginary world). In addition, I also want to build the plot on the basis of the main line and have some innovations. Of course, it is difficult to ensure that every chapter is particularly novel, interesting and interesting when writing for the first time. I hope everyone can bear with me. If possible, send some small gifts or send electricity for love, Arigado~ About this book: After reading the comments in the background in the past three or four days, you don't like the existence of the level setting. Due to the lack of experience in writing for the first time and the lack of consideration, it has affected everyone's reading experience. I would like to apologize here. This setting does feel abrupt when reading, but some foreshadowing in the past is based on this setting. It will be very troublesome to change it, and it may become worse with more changes. I can say that I will try my best to dilute this setting in the subsequent development and focus on the character plot. If you are still not satisfied with this, I have no choice but to avoid this problem in the second book. At the same time, I would like to thank everyone for your feedback to let me know the problem. You can ask any questions in the future. As long as it does not affect the general direction, some changes can be made [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's great, but I finished it very quickly

How can I put it, the overall pacing of this book is okay, but I don't really like this kind of pseudo-harem. Now that it has been reset, I feel that the other beauties described before will be in vain (unless it will be restored in the future, and then everyone will accept it). It also hints who the heroine is, but in fact, my personal My idea is that if the author really wants to write about a harem, he should try to keep it as long as possible (according to this process, the harem will be better), and now I have just reset the protagonist sister and I don't know what the situation is. I can only say that I am looking forward to the development in the future (I try not to spoil this paragraph, maybe a little bit) Then, this book is quite good, but the score must be a bit low. I am not saying that the author's writing is not good. It means that if you want to create a solo, then focus on creating one. If you want to create a harem, then according to the current thinking, I honestly don't know how the author wants to write it. Anyway, it depends on the author's own ideas. The writing is quite good, at least it can be read in the second creation.

To be honest, I can't give five stars for the time being, because sometimes the author doesn't add punctuation. It's two sentences that are clearly connected, but he just straightens them into one sentence. It takes a long time to read them separately to understand. It's very uncomfortable. Don't question me. I've been reading for longer than you.

Like this book very much

Zen of the Heart, compared to casually opening a harem, what is more annoying is that you flirt and don't take back, and it is more irresponsible. The overall view is quite good, but the rhythm is not well controlled, some places are obviously messed up, and some small details are grasped quite well. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I read it from the recommendation. Pretty good! ! ! Please be sure to have my Xiaogong Tomato, the only one in which the heroine has Xiaogong! ! ! ! !

It looks good, but the problem is, author, why are you so lazy [crazy] [crazy]

Good to read [Admiration] I like this book very much. As a loyal fan of the author, I must highly recommend it.

Come on💪O author, no more eunuchs! [Sending Hearts]

It feels weird. For example, generals can read minds? The Son of God can still talk about it. I still like this book more [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I really like this book, but I don't know why so few people have read it. I hope it doesn't become too eunuch or unfinished. Good luck to the author!

It's okay and pretty good-looking, although the setting is a bit arrogant. But it's still acceptable. Second creation? It's not shabby. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Five star support Is there a group?

Very good, very pretty

No need to say anything. Just give it five stars.

Come on, the author is looking forward to [eating melon] [eating melon]

I personally feel that the style of this book is quite good. The author is very capable of digging holes and really dares to think. I hope it won't be unfinished in the end. Good luck to the author [like]

Is it a single female protagonist or a harem story? Hey... As long as the author doesn't cheat

So what do I say? I only have this expression that can express [OK]

The author greatly supports you

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. Come on.

Five-star support, come on

Come on, it's a very interesting book

Good luck to the perfect author

I think the writing is good, keep up the good work

Not bad, so far it's pretty good

Well, although I'm still not sure who the heroine is, the writing is indeed very nice. I was a little uncomfortable with his setting at first, but then I gradually found it a bit novel. Not bad, come on, author

It's a good read. I finished it in a while, but it's a bit short.

It's really good. The score is a bit low, but it's still pretty.