Ye Luoli: Heartthrob, She Is Pulling the World into Darkness

I am a newbie to Lemon, so please bear with me if my writing is not good, thank you. Lightning protection: The heroine in this article has a charming design, and may have a tendency to be a sea king (after all, they are all good-looking!). She will break down the CP, and I actually don't like Wang Mo very much. When I wrote it, I might... If you are a fan of Mo, don't read it! CP fans like Shui Mo, Yan Bing, etc. Also don't want to spray if they don't like it! Thank you Also, please don't scold me, thank you (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡ Attention to all book friends: My writing is not good, the plot is not good, and the characterization is not good. I just write it for fun. If you don't like it, please leave. Please don't seek to make a presence in my comment area! Thank you. Also, I have a soft heart and like to complain. You can scold me and make wanton personal attacks on me, but I don't care. After all, no one stipulates that you must like my articles. Oh, by the way, some people who have read for less than half an hour don't like to see you wandering away. As a person who has become a monk halfway and is trying to find his own way, I wrote it like this. Although it is not so satisfactory, it is still okay. I am slowly correcting my shortcomings. If you don't like it, please turn left and go out. You said I used a lot of swear words in the past, okay, I changed it, right? Do you think there are any curse words in Chapter 40? Calling me a Mary Sue makes me laugh so hard. How can I be so charming if I don't Sue for a moment? I've already started laying the groundwork, right? Is it difficult to fall in love after being together for thousands of years? If you say I'm funny and look embarrassed, okay, then I won't write it. Are you seniors satisfied? It is said that there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people, and I don't expect everyone to like it, but I would like all new comers to read it clearly and then evaluate it. You go ahead, you can watch it or not. If you don't watch it, I'll get out of here. Finally, it's over, happy₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The country is alluring, the moon is shy of the flowers, the elegance is standing, the fish is falling, the geese are falling, the beauty is charming, gentle and kind, beautiful and elegant, the eyebrows are clear, the country is fragrant, the beauty is charming, the beauty is unparalleled, the jade bones of the gods, gentle and kind, graceful, looking forward, the pure silk entangled, the steps are swaying, the hands are Like catkins, skin like gelatin, collar like a cricket grub, teeth like gourds and rhinoceros, coyhead and moth eyebrows, clever smile, beautiful eyes, warm fragrance of soft jade, orchid heart, beautiful appearance and wisdom, bright eyes and white teeth, natural beauty, elegant and simple, childish and handsome, delicate and cute... Can the author please update more? [Shy][Sending Hearts][Asking for more updates]

I haven't read this type of fanfic for a long time. I always read it in story books before. The writing is very good, but surprisingly few. I still like the writing about the heroine of Neptune. There are just some small details that are awkward to read, but it's okay, good luck to the author.

This book is really great, but the chapters are a bit short. At first, I came in because of its heart-throb characteristics. Later, I found out that it is really great. Plus, I also liked reading Ye Luoli before. I hope the author can update it more.

This is the first time I have seen a fanfic with a heart-throb. It is beautiful and exciting. I like it very much. [Sending my heart] I also like the settings of the heroine, hehe. ⭐️This article is a humanistic novel about the heartthrob Ye Luoli. The heroine breaks down CP, loves beauty (face control), has a broken plot, and the heroine has an identity in the human world of fairyland. If you like it, you can give it a try. [Sending Hearts] By the way, I just don't know if there is a male protagonist. So far, no male protagonist has been found. I don't want it to have a male protagonist (to be honest). But the plot is so good that you won't lose money if you invest in it. (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) Finally, cheers to the author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] May the author have a bright star and a worry-free future! 🌹🌹🌹

Not bad, a heartthrob, I like the cp removal Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

Everyone, come and take a look, it's really beautiful

The writing is brilliant, written in one go, every word is exquisite, hearty, wonderful, and full of fun. Erudite, talented, knowledgeable, concise, flawless, and to the point. Far-sighted, righteous and precise, well-spoken, outstanding, superb, and powerful. It is majestic, swallowing mountains and rivers, overwhelming mountains and seas, turbulent waves, thunderous and thrilling. Sweeping thousands of armies, shocking the world, finding every opportunity to make every effort, writing smoothly, perfect and impeccable. Unparalleled, flamboyant, sharp writing style, humorous style, elegant writing and clear hierarchy. Incisive, lifelike, lifelike, excellent writing style, and quick thinking.

Sorry, sorry, author, I forgot to write Ahem, one thing to say is that in the author's writing, the protagonist is very real and smart, very close to life, and the author is very warm and generous. He will also look for comments written by readers to like and comment. Even if readers ask, they will be very patient to find them. How can I put it: I am a little touched. So wherever you can find such a good author, come and check it out, it's really good (´-ω-`)

A beautiful novel, coupled with a beautiful author sister who is lively and cheerful, and actively responds to comments, is really perfect. (As for the slow update? That's okay. Most of the people reading this book are students and they have to go to school. No matter how fast the update is, they have to wait until school is over before they can read it. And the author is also a student). Big cheers for the author

Woohoo~ It's been a long time since I've seen such an appetizing fanfic of Ye Luoli! I declare to you, the author! (*^．^*) Kiss~

Four stars are because the content of this article is wonderful, and one star is because the author is so cute! I have to give it five stars.

It looks good. If Tiexi turns into Tiexi, can Tiexi save Wenqian? Let Wenqian feel the warmth and be nice to Tiexi. I loved Tiexi the most at that time. When I become the golden prince, my warm Tiexi is gone [crying]

Book friends believe that this book is very good, with novel subject matter, exciting content, and a very active author. Except for too few chapters, which are not enough to read (crazy hint that the author is great), everything else is very good. Good luck to the author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Very nice, my type. Big cheers for the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Support, support, support! ! The author should also work hard and update Looking forward to looking forward to~ Pay attention to rest!

I think this book is very good-looking, and I also like the heroine's character. Even if her heart is completely desolate, she still has a piece of her own fairy tale. I hope the author can update it soon. I'm looking forward to the next one. Come on!

I don't know how to describe it, but every setting touches my heart. It's super beautiful, but can it be…………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Hurry……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Update? ! ? !

It's great. To be honest, I suddenly found a post about Ye Luoli in Shuhuang Square and came in out of curiosity. I didn't expect it to be so great. It's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Sister Lemon, come on!

The author writes very well! Support support!

It looks good, come on＾0＾~, I like Yan Xi's character very much. I almost laughed when I saw the interaction between her and Mo Ran. It takes up public resources and I need to make more pictures [OK] [OK] [angry] [angry]

Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! I love seeing Chen Sisi turning into a yandere in the latest one, and I like it even more! The group of people who kept saying they wanted to save their friends were eating cakes and drinking drinks in the tree space, haha. I support Chen Sisi becoming a yandere! ! ! Love it so much!

Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I like the protagonist very much. She is neither a →_→ dog licker nor an angry youth. She is a beautiful sister~(￣▽￣~)~. Well, from the perspective of the characters, they are charming. Although they are a little salty, they have the cunning of a fox. They have high martial arts. The protagonists in this book are lively and lively. But other than that, the characters in the anime and the characters set by the author are a bit facial and a bit occ, giving people a bit of the same impression. But there are also bright spots in the characters in the book. For example, Feng Yinsha, who has no worries about illness, can be said to be fighting with the protagonist. I feel very happy watching it! From a linguistic point of view, I personally feel that there are too many language descriptions for the protagonist group in this article. Although it can vividly and vividly portray the characters, it is a bit cumbersome and lacks the ability to promote the plot. Appropriate language can be added to other supporting characters. From the world view setting, the setting of this article can be said to be advanced (for this type of article). The author has a big imagination and can dig holes well. But it is also like this that I look forward to the protagonist's fast-traveling career instead of being a salted fish in Ye Luoli's world. The world view is too big, which affects the plot a bit. After all, the world view setting progress bar is not halfway through, and the plot has not yet passed one season. It is not good to watch both sides (✪▽✪). Personally, I suggest that you put down some of the world view and other things, and go through the plot first. Otherwise, Ye Luoli's nine seasons will be 666 if she can finish three seasons. Judging from the plot, the heroine can be said to be both male and female, and the good and bad factions are competing against each other. The bosses of the villain camp are about to get involved in the protagonist's pot. Mandola is not expected to be involved in the plot. It is expected that Shui Yuntian's enemy ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ and the protagonist's eight sisters will appear.

Five-star praise sent (o^^o) Please accept it, sister~(￣▽￣~)~ Hey hey hey (ºº )[send heart][send heart][send heart] By the way, please give me some attention and likes [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Lemon's writing is very nice, it would be better if he didn't disappear from time to time hehe~

Great, it belongs to Black King Black Dog. And it might also be a harem story. Many male protagonists. Yan Jue's sister. There is a system. And it's over. Do whatever you want. Not affected by the plot. Doesn't help the soul. Nor would he help Mandola. Nine-tailed fox.

Author, I really like this novel you wrote. [Sending my heart] I have also read a lot about Ye Luoli. I like Sisi very much in this book. Chen Sisi is finally Chen Sisi. She is herself. She has her own will and her own ideas. She is no longer manipulated by others. She is free, [almost crying] [almost crying]

Big awesome! This is the best one I've seen among Ye Luoli fanfics! Come on! [Blowing kiss]

Quite exciting. I personally like the main character in it. Very nice.

I really like this book. The author is very interesting, and this book is also very interesting. What makes me most interesting is that the title keeps running around. I don't know why? Every time I think about this I want to laugh 😂😂😂😂, the novel is also very well written. I hope the author can actively code words