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The rivers and lakes described by the author are really in line with what I think. It is their youthful spirit and the feelings of the rivers and lakes in their hearts. The boundless earth can be destroyed with one sword, and where is the bustling music and singing. The protagonist's sword is swung against the injustice of the sky, and the protagonist's heart is for the unification of seeing through the boundaries of the sky. What is different from other novels about system circulation is the humane atmosphere of the rivers and lakes. What is different from other ancient romance novels is the soaring will to redress the injustice of fate. The shortcoming is that I think the protagonist's combat power is a bit cheating. Although he is the reincarnation of the Emperor Star, I hope to show more cooperation awareness.

The book also has beginnings and endings, as well as beginnings and endings to narrate the story. It should be like what I meant in my life, but I am afraid that the words in the book will be full of words, and the meaning will be satisfied with the outside. It's hard to see deep bones. When you meet a tomato when you are young, you will feel love. The straight road has many angles. The situation changes and the meaning becomes deeper, but the meaning is deep but no emotion arises, making it difficult to express one's feelings. For the rest of my life, my love for swords and wine will lead to a beautiful scene hidden in it, covering two or three situations. There are good chapters and wonderful sentences in the book, and I have written poems for many years. Hope that there are too many bad words on the way back, which will not hinder the eyes of generations. There are few true words, and you will always be happy if you talk a lot! If you pick up grass in the river and there are many other roots, you can put it in its wonderful principles and not go beyond the laws. I not only hope that the author will update his poems every day, but also that the author's poems will not diminish. There are many roads, and the river is full. [Sending Hearts]

It's a good book. The author's writing is super good. It's definitely not inferior to any Xianxia book. The rating is low. I hope it will become popular soon. It has a single heroine and the protagonist is not cheating. It's all about hard work. I love it so much! That is to say, the author has not updated for nearly a month, and I don't know why he has been there. Come back soon!

Finally found another good-looking book, short [punch]. I feel like this book will be popular. It has a great world view. Don't let it collapse. Don't stop updating it. Don't stop reading it.

Five stars. The first author's writing style is very good. It should not be only 9.2. The second one is the author's introduction. The single heroine attracted me. Author, you must stay clean. I love you ~ (￣▽￣~)~ I'll take good care of you [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

A very charming book, like a pot of light wine. After drinking it lightly, you can feel the whole world, like the years. Looking back in a low voice, you can inadvertently realize a piece of wandering, also like a light boat. Looking back for a moment, you will find the waves of the water. Anyway, um... Very nice!

The author's writing style is so good that I can't find any adjectives to praise this book. There may be no words of praise that can express the goodness of this book. Although some people who have just read the book are a little confused at the beginning, if you keep reading, you will find that the author writes very well and the characters are very vivid. The fighting and the feelings between people are also a major feature of this book in my opinion. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile]

This book is one of the only two good-looking books in my mind. The emotions and characterizations are wonderful. I think there are no supporting characters in this book because everyone is vividly portrayed. I just hope the author will update it soon.

It's well written. I always thought that there are not many good books out there, but this one is really good. Good books should not be buried. Come on, author [Like] [Please update]

The subject matter of this book is novel, and the flashback at the beginning is refreshing for readers. The subsequent plots are interlocking and fascinating. The fighting plot is well handled, which shows that the author has deep writing skills. Generally speaking, this book should be a rare good book in 🍅. It is a pity that too few people have read it. But in the end, I hope that this book will become more and more popular [smile][smile][smile][laugh][laugh][laugh]

This is the best fantasy book I have read in the past two years. The writing is good, there are foreshadowings, and it can be seen that it has an outline. The world view is relatively large. I support it.

I like the author's settings and the writing is easy to read.

I just finished reading the first volume. The writing is really good. Both the plot description and the environment description are very high-level. The world view is also very big. It has both rivers and lakes battles and daily fun. The last time I felt this way was when I was watching the snow. [Like][Like][Like] Later on, the author describes the charm of the male protagonist too frequently. As long as she is a female, she will be aroused when she sees the male protagonist. When she looks at her face, she will say "Wow, she is so beautiful." No matter how cold and cold the fairy is in front of others, she will be like a licking dog in front of the male protagonist. The difference between this and those brainless stallion stories is that the male protagonist does not accept everything, but only wants the female protagonist. If it weren't for the writing and the group portraits, I wouldn't want to comment.

The whole novel describes my real love for the world of rivers and lakes, the grievances and hatreds, and the mythical geniuses. The novel may not be the best rivers and lakes, but there is definitely a place for this novel in the rivers and lakes ヾ(^▽^*))).

Overall, it's a good comparison to "The Tower of Smoke and Rain" that I have on my bookshelf now. The author's writing style is very good, but the emotional portrayal is a little off. I believe there will be improvements in the future. Finally, I hope to update it soon. Don't be ignorant of praise [cool] (Personal opinion: If you don't like it, don't criticize it because you are afraid of online violence)

At first glance, I felt amazing. However, with such brilliant writing style, I could not help but feel a bit pretentious at first glance, as if it was meant to cater to some pretentious people. However, this feeling is not surprising. After all, there are too many novices nowadays, and many of them start with something like this to attract some pretentious people. But as long as you look down with a little patience, you will find that this is actually a unique style of writing formed by the author. This is determined by each person's literary background. Ordinary people may be able to imitate and learn from it, but only in sufficient quantities to keep the content in mind and use it so freely, forming a qualitative leap. After a while, you can see that the article written by the author has a compact and reasonable structure while still being humorous. Although the theme is about cultivating immortality, it is also unique, original, rich in content, and superb in technique. We can be influenced by him inadvertently. It can be said that the author's literary level is very high. It is a breath of fresh air in online writing. It leaves a deep impression on people in terms of its conception, but it is not too profound. The character of the protagonist is so ordinary that he is no different from ordinary people, but he also clearly feels that he is not a mediocre person. The author's creation of each character is realistic and three-dimensional. It can be seen that in real life, he pays careful attention to the people around him and has a deeper understanding of each person's character. The creation of the characters also reveals the author's inner correct values ​​from the side. He also does not treat others negatively or vent his dissatisfaction on the Internet. The author's strict self-discipline and lenient attitude toward others can also be felt lightly. I hope that the author can continue to write works that satisfy him. Whether online or offline, just follow his heart. I wish your work will be successfully completed!

The plot of the story has ups and downs, but in general you have to read it to know how wonderful it is, but the author has to be a bit slow...

It's a great book, but it's a pity that more people haven't discovered it. The protagonist is set as a scholar, elegant, and sometimes shows the old-fashioned and respectable side of the scholar. He is also a knight-errant, emphasizing love and justice, sober and decisive, and unafraid under heavy pressure. Including Li Hanyi's loyalty and Ji Yanfeng's silent and great fatherly love in the book are all moving. However, in some character creations, such as the heroine and Wu Fang, they can be more multi-faceted and their characteristics can be more distinctive. This book has some of the exciting features of a popular novel, such as the protagonist's life experience, extraordinary encounters, and the companionship of his lover and brothers on the long road. But it's not like that kind of mindless and refreshing article. It has writing style, new ideas and connotation. Unlike the villain who gives away equipment without thinking, the hardships encountered by the protagonist make people unconsciously involved, and the pain and joy of the world are vividly displayed. Jianghu has never been just about beauty and laughter. Come on

The author's writing style could be more compact. There is more to the world than just fighting and killing. Humanity is the most interesting thing. At last! Stop the knife! ! Stop the knife! I came here from my life and death book, and that ability made me stupid.

All I can say is that I have been reading novels for six years and have been using Tomato for two or three years. This is the best fantasy novel I have ever seen in Tomato. The author is very careful in portraying the protagonist and foreshadowing the plot. In addition, the shaping of the supporting characters is perfect. But I personally think that the relationship with the heroine is a little fast at the beginning, but it is inevitable because the difference in strength between the hero and the heroine in the early stage is too big and there is no way. In short, I hope that the author can fill up the pits in the end and not leave any pitfalls. The final ending should not be too vulgar. I think since the author said there will be very few swordsmen, I think that after resurrecting the academy people, they should be left for a while before the ending. This means that they are not resurrected at the end. Just end it like this, which wastes a lot of characterization of them in the early stage. All in all, it's well written. It's the best book I've read in recent years. Come on! ! !

This is the second exciting novel I read on Tomato after "The Sword of Swords". I really like the character of the protagonist. He is frank and aboveboard. It is a good book.

It's super exciting, I must write it down.

It's well written. Although I've read a few chapters, it obviously feels a bit similar to Xuezhong's. It's very palatable. The only thing I want to ask is if the heroine is the one in the first chapter, what will happen to the maid? Will she just use the knife?

The writing is very good, but I still can't see what's special about the protagonist Tiangang and the other two Pole Stars. I can only see that the Pole Stars are very talented. According to the amount of updates the author has made, I don't know when he will be able to write it out.

It's very good, but the writing may be a little too sloppy, and the relationship with the heroine is really a bit sloppy; but the overall structure is very novel, with endless foreshadowings and hints, and the climaxes are not hindered by the writing [heartfelt]

Each character has his or her own unique and full characteristics, and among them, I personally like the gentleness of senior brother Lu the most. Lu is better than his speed, and he blames himself for not being able to save his younger brother because he is not fast enough, as well as the details of cleaning up the traces of his kneeling for three years so that his younger brother will not think too much, and all aspects of it make people fall in love with this character.

It is very well written, the plot is compact, interlocking, and the logic is basically self-consistent. Finally, I have a few questions: Who is Xiao Lian at the end? Is he Wuxiang? How did the chess master make the last move, and is it related to the piece that finally fell outside the chessboard? How did the boundary weapon come from, and what is the origin of the Zhantan world? Why is the sword spirit of the Jade Emperor's sword related to the protagonist's family (with the first It should be the same question); what is the connection between the Star Clan and the Starry Sky, why the Celestial Clan with the Seven Emotions will become the Star Clan; where did the leftovers go after the final protagonist refined the world; why is the original reincarnation of mountains and seas; what is the will of the starry sky, is it the differentiation of the will of Xumi; how did the Five Directions Emperor Star come from

The plot is exciting, neither dull nor procrastinating, and the writing style is pretty good in comparison. I give it a five-star rating, so cheers for the author!

After reading a little bit, I feel that the writing is pretty good. As long as the author doesn't mess up, I can continue reading. The main reason is that I'm afraid. There are many good things about Tomato at the beginning, but the writing slowly falls apart in the back. It's really a pity. I hope this won't be like this.

This book may not be the fantasy ascension you imagined, but it will definitely fit the purest chivalrous and youthful nature in your heart. The advantages are obvious: the characters are successfully created, vivid and three-dimensional, and each is different; the plot is relatively natural and smooth, and the contradictions are well designed, especially the Phantom Butterfly in the early stage is very exciting, and the ending in the later stage does not collapse; the emotional line is delicate, mainly between Ji Mu and Han Yi, not procrastinating and in line with the main context, especially Ji Mu's, which is very sweet. But there are also some small problems: there are a few foreshadowings, or the characters are not explained clearly, such as the specific content of Jiuyou, who is the abyss, the changes in the world of mountains and seas, the hidden relics of the past, especially the final ending of Faceless, which is not seen [face covering] (some may be Leave blank); the rhythm may be much faster in the later part than the previous one; some knives are very touching, but Jiuyou appears too early, so that we can see Mr. Waiting appear at the end without too many surprises and disturbances (it may be that the previous writing was too brilliant [laughs]). All in all, as a book about pursuing the chivalrous and righteous path in your heart, it has a comprehensive view. The design is very good, as if you are immersed in it. It is recommended to read it. ｛One protagonist, five protagonists in detail, and one female protagonist｝