Pirates: the Salty Life Broken by Roger

Give yourself a five-star review

I personally think it's okay, maybe because I'm a bit of a romantic? I really like watching this kind of salted fish. Anyway, I just like this kind of light feeling. I like many sentences in it. I give four stars mainly because of the timeline and the description of the characters. It feels a bit messy. During the days when Enel was getting along with the protagonist, he was ostracized by the villagers due to misunderstandings. "It's a pity that we are not the big bad guys." "He used to believe in justice, but then he despised justice. Finally, he saw the face of justice clearly, and he followed his will." "It's not over yet! You're only halfway through the journey, and there's still a long way to go before the end. Don't think that you can't see the end, so you doubt whether your choice is good or not!" "It's a pity that this happiness lacks people's care and has begun to gather dust." "It's just one day, which is too short. There will be a long time in the future, so it is safer to evaluate after getting along, so as not to be embarrassed." Also, is this the end? Bad ending!

This just represents my personal opinion, not mixed with any personal feelings, just an objective expression of my own understanding of this book! Let me give you a suggestion, don't change the character settings, personality, and image casually. Just stick to the original text or make up some plot yourself and write something different. Just add whatever you want to write. Don't change the original text settings casually. Either you will be invincible and go all the way to the dark side, or you will join a certain force or start a force of your own to develop steadily. For example, the Zefa you wrote, whether in the original text or in other fanfics, is still the original image setting of the character, so don't change it casually. Finally, the original setting I mentioned above is: character setting, image, personality and character relationship. Do you understand? Dear author, take a good look,

Other people can read two chapters a day, but you are lucky, you can only read one chapter every two months.

It's a pretty good short story. It's just a picture. It doesn't need to be too fussy or serious. If you have to worry about the original background, it would be meaningless. It can only be said that after reference, the author's own ideas were added to the book. It can also be understood that this is the author's yearning and dream for the world of pirates!

Different, with a distinct personality, it will be controversial only if it is unique. If it can be conceived from scratch, it may be the most romantic pirate fanfic. It is rare to have unique writing style. I hope you can be serious and persistent. Not many people can write an excellent work after writing four or five books. The most important thing is persistence and self-improvement. I look forward to seeing the restart of this book.

I think it's good, but it has nothing to do with the plot of the anime. The novel is good because it's good. You guys say this and that. It's better to watch the anime. Nothing has changed in the anime.

I feel like this book is not finished yet

It's really a different pirate story that's being narrated, it's really great.

It's really beautiful! But why is it over?

I like the character of the protagonist, but as for other plots, I can just read it without thinking. I would like to ask if there is a next book?

Interesting, but too short

I wrote down what I wanted to do when I traveled to the past.

This book is very beautiful. It writes about the pain of separation, the passion between men, and people's ideals. This book is really good [shy][shy]

It's good-looking, and the main character in the book is very casual. This is the most satisfying pirate I've seen so far.

Very interesting, you can take a look

Come on come on come on come on

Really beautiful

I like this book

Feel good personally

It's really great! Author

I feel like giving this book five stars.

Everyone has his own dream

Not bad, salted fishes can take a look

Well written. I have read so many novels about One Piece. This one is an exception.

The writing is quite beautiful. Although it may not fit the pirate setting, it is really beautiful.

Not bad, please keep writing [Like]

Come on, come on, come on

Well written, keep it up!

The author doesn't care about those clouds, they just can't understand them