Soul of Laie

I definitely need strong support for my novel! 😍

Objectively speaking, the subject matter of this book is the dark and weird direction that I like. There are two shortcomings: the minor problem is the commonplace writing problem. I won't talk about this too much, just take my time. The most important issue is the sense of substitution. The most important thing in a novel is the sense of substitution. More than ten years ago, why did we enjoy reading fantasy novels? We are substituting and imagining that we are the protagonists. In this book, the protagonist turns into a soul-body light ball, lacking the sense of substitution. This book belongs to the infinite flow theme. The classic infinite flow theme is popular because many people have imagined what it would be like to become Tony Stark, Doctor Strange, and Thanos, and what they would do if they had a superpower of their own design. If this book wants to be popular, I suggest the author start with an infinite flow, travel through many horror movies, slowly gain many ghost abilities, and slowly become a ghost, and then the spiritual body is sublimated, but it is best not to become an invisible thing like a ball of light, such as the King in Yellow, you know it is a person or other creature in yellow, and then develop into Tethulu and control the rules. As a reader, I can only write a summary of the plot I want to see. Just like when I go to a restaurant as a diner, I can ask for what kind of dishes to order, and whether the braised pork should be sweet or salty, but I can't make it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will pay attention to every author who writes dark literature. Come on, and give the author a tip. Dark literature is still a niche. If you want to write a popular novel to make money, you can write a cold-blooded protagonist without a female protagonist, but it is best not to write anti-humanity stories. For example, plots such as cannibalism and child killing will be banned because mainstream thinking cannot accept them. For example, Samsara Paradise and Super Mechanic are two typical books without heroines. The protagonists are relatively cold-blooded, but they have not done anything against humanity (they cannot pass the review). OK, so much verbosity. I hope the author will write better books and get more and more fans. Bye.

He has brains and is decisive in killing. He writes very well, but if he writes too darkly, he may be banned. You still have to be careful.

Decisive in killing, no Virgin, no heroine, not bad!

I'm from a black bar. Come on.

Root awakening, domination, a bit like Soul of Negri

This reminds me of a book I read before, The Soul of Negri. Very well written, support 😁

Gaga is good-looking, the protagonist is no longer a human being, dark story, alternative cannibalism

It can be pure black and non-toxic and can be viewed

I think it's okay, but some places could be described in more detail. You can read more about Xu Ming's Soul of Negri. I think the old chapter is very well written, and you can learn from it.

Why is the cover so hellish? It wasn't like this before, right?

Come on, author! I think this book of yours is quite nice.

Great hahaha

So far, it's okay. The protagonist's character is cruel and has no three views. His IQ is online.

A power system that has never been seen before, an unprecedented sense of freshness, and the most important thing is the protagonist's understanding of himself

What a wonderful idea, looking forward to your return.

Very interesting, please give it a try 😊

Human life is just a beautiful sojourn

What a pity, for a good book, the pace is too fast.

The author wrote this book very well👍

This book is still very good. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The idea is very novel and well written.

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I like it very much. The protagonist is completely rational. I really like the protagonist with such a character. [Like][Like][Like]

It's great. The description of human nature in the early stage and the final ending are both unfinished and reasonable. Even if the reader thinks about it, he wants to forget it until the end. Just like Laie, he knows his ending but forces himself to forget it. It is very rational, but the sensibility hidden in it, cycle after cycle, will never end until the being on a certain path sits on the throne, or, after sitting on the throne, it is just a tonic for a higher level of existence.