Tomb Robber Sign-In: After Immortality, I Become Brothers with My Father

Ren Xunsheng, Zhang Qiling, two stuffy oil bottles Zhou An, Wu Xie, two unlucky evil bodies Double the happiness(✪▽✪) It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's like reading Tomb Raider Notes. I can see that there are foreshadowings in some places. However, the number of words is not very large, so the rest of the story has not been laid out yet. The writing style is rigorous and compact, and it is not a novice. From the beginning, it can be seen that the story structure is complete and meaningful, but we need to look at the back before making a conclusion. The growth-oriented protagonist is quite good, but the early scenes at the beginning are a bit lacking. Obviously, it was a bit upstaged by other characters. I hope that in the later period, it can gradually be realized to complete the whole character of the protagonist to make him more charming. There are some roundness and some flaws. The protagonist will inevitably have stumbling blocks on his way to growth, and it will inevitably not go smoothly (as the saying goes, you will hit the wall when you should hit it. Let's start when it's time to start. Anyway, we have the halo of the protagonist, don't panic), only then can there be authenticity and a sense of substitution. This is also one of the conditions for attracting people. My thoughts after reading it carefully are that it is a book with layers and depth. In short, it is good-looking. Brothers will be done with it after reading this book.

This book is really good. The characters in it make me twice as happy, especially the two characters with unlucky physiques, two god-like beings, and a fat mother.

Cheers to the author, write well and don't give up. The subject matter is very good. It's rare to see this kind of evil CP that doesn't break the bottle, and the protagonist also has his own CP. I hope the author can include more interactions between the protagonist and CP later on. It doesn't matter if the iron triangle becomes a hexagon or a pentagon. They will become good friends and trust each other, and then they will find the secret of immortality.

Ouch! It's so pretty! ! ! When will there be sweet holding hands and kisses? I wait and wait and wait, wuwuwu, Shengzai and Anan will kiss soon! ! ! ! ! Press hard!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhw. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] It's the episode 9 that breaks my guard. Baby An An is too tired from walking all the way. But in the future, I will have a baby to protect me. Hmm~hin makes me feel reassured~ I think the baby will be like my little brother, becoming more and more smoky. Kang Jianyi, live a healthy and simple life. This is also the best wish for him. Finally, I would like to express my condolences to my wife. The wives I see in many comment areas are so cute and gentle, and the characters in the writing are also very good ~ [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] Where can I find such a perfect wife!

It's really super good-looking. I finished it in one go. The protagonist is a growth type, and his experience is similar to that of Wu Xie. Moreover, the physique of the man who must get rid of the corpse when he opens the restaurant is even better than that of Wu Xie. Ren Xunsheng is also good, but he is less talkative than the younger brother. The plot has ups and downs, and is both funny and a little scary. Especially when I was watching it alone in bed at night, it was super exciting! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, and the sense of substitution is very strong. It is really not a loss to invest [like][like][like]

Yes, the logic of the plot is very smooth, and the little brother and other characters are not weakened. The complaints are also very humorous. The characters of Fatty Wu Xie are all standing up, and Sheng Zai and An An are also cute (><)

It's super good-looking, especially without breaking the bottle. It's like the second pair of innocence and brother. They don't just copy it mechanically, but come out with a new one. It's just too slow. I'll take a few days to take a look at it, but that's it! What should I do if all the books I like are serialized but not enough? [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] I can't live this life.

The setting is quite fresh, and Zhou An is even worse than the innocent. It's so miserable and unlucky. The author's writing is super beautiful. I look forward to more updates👍👍

It's good, but it's too short. Iron Triangle comes to the protagonist's world to help him. The protagonist is as evil as Wu Xie, and his son is as powerful as the little brother, but he is a little more ruthless than the little brother. The little brother can save people, but he can't. Talking less is more boring than a bottle of oil. My brother is bleeding and it makes people feel bad. Giving birth to a baby makes me feel bad because I can't feel the pain. (When will the author continue writing? It's not enough!) Putting a knife to the author's neck, I want to read the second part (▼盘▼#)

The writing is good, hurry up and update it [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] Very few people ask me to urge me to update. The author's writing is very good, and I can't get enough of it [angry] [angry] [angry]

The plot is basically complete, the setting logic is self-explanatory, the three characters about stolen pens are not broken, and the protagonists are also very cute. There is one shortcoming (personal feeling) that the transformation of the protagonist in the later period is a bit brief, which makes it a bit stiff. I feel that the ending can be expanded to include a lot of content. Overall, I had a lot of fun watching it, and I was a little teary-eyed during the episode.

The plot is quite logical, the setting is really fresh, and it's really interesting. It doesn't feel cookie-cutter. It really has a bit of Tomb Raiders flavor. I'm not saying that the plot is similar, but that's the feeling. The protagonist feels like he is growing up, even though he is really unlucky. Like Xiao Tianzhen, he is an unlucky child who was tricked. The summary is that it is very beautiful, I like it very much [Blowing Kiss]

I've been hooked since I watched "Ultimate Notes". It's really good. The author writes well. I hope to write more articles like this. It would be better if it has two male protagonists [shy] Come on＾0＾~

It's very nice to watch, and has a strong sense of immersion. I feel that some of the content in it is similar to the stolen pen, but there are still differences. Anyway, the Audio-Technica finally returned to their own world, but thankfully, they have not forgotten it.

I loved it so much that I watched it all in one sitting. I felt so motivated that I couldn't stop wanting to watch the sequel. The characters of An An and Sheng Zai are so great, no one can escape the charm of looking like a brotherhood but always wanting to take CP!

(I forgot to comment after reading it, so I'll add it) This novel is a new subject matter, and it's not like I haven't read similar novels, but the writing is not as good as this one. The system's presence is not high, and it's not a cool novel. It has the thrilling feel of the original work. I like it. I hope the second part can be updated faster. I want to read it!

I like this kind of book very much. It combines the material of the world of stolen pens but is completely different. It has its own plot. Retirement in Yucun next door is also very interesting. I recommend it. 1. The subject matter is novel and there are two volumes! ! ! They are two different worlds. The subject matter belongs to the stolen pen type, but the story line is different. The content of the first volume is a new world written by the author himself. It has nothing to do with the Iron Triangle world, but it brings the Iron Triangle from another world into the world of the protagonist. 2. There is no cp removal behavior. It's similar to... Two people in different worlds but with the same fate, passing through each other through chance. Events involving layout and later execution plans will progress very quickly and will not be described too much. [It won't take too much thought] (I have read the second volume before reading the first volume) ⊙[The first volume is this one, which is the protagonist's own world, and the second volume is the original Iron Triangle world. Those who like new plots based on the original plots can read it❤️] ⊙[The content of both books is very good, and the endings are also very interesting. There is only one person in the whole book who is "uneasy"...]

I read it in the early morning. Despite the high pressure of going to school, I suffered from fever intermittently. After seeing the baby, I felt that I was still too fragile. It's a pity that the outline was cut. After all, the desert journey laid a lot of groundwork. I originally thought it would be a long story, but I didn't expect that there were only so many stories I could see. Many holes have not yet been filled. In fact, I still hope that the author can revise it, just for love. But it's fine not to practice, maybe just because there's only so much we can see.

An'an and Shengzai are so delicious, so I would like to ask if there is any other Tomb Raiders fan who has such a combination that is cool and talks less, but has a higher force value. In the early stage, it is innocent, but in the later stage, it is not naive, and the force value also becomes higher. This is an original cp. Apart from this book, I can't find any other book with such a combination (if you feel ky, I can delete it)

It looks so good. It's really hard to find this kind of thing. Thank you for your support.

Double the fun! The author should update quickly! I like Sheng Zai and Zhou An cp Is this the end of the author? [Fear][Fear][Fear]

It looks good, but it's scary. I was so scared that I didn't dare to get up in the middle of the night. Sheng Zai and An An's CP were so annoying!

It's really good-looking. It doesn't mess with the original characters. The plot also fits the introduction. Zhou An and Wu Xie, Ren Xunsheng and Zhang Qiling, the second uncle and the third uncle... The one-to-one correspondence is like another self in the world. It feels like there is some kind of connection between the worlds they live in. The author [like][like][like][like][like]

It's very interesting and the subject matter is very novel. Kudos to the author.

Really highly recommended 👍🏻. When I first started watching the first part, I quit a few times because it was an original plot, but the second part is really exciting! After reading the whole book, I felt a sense of loss, which may also be called a withdrawal reaction, as if their story is not over yet but we have no way of knowing it. This book is not very long, but I read it on and off for a week. I watched Zhou An's growth and the process of their establishment. The author's imagination is great, and the characters are not OOC. There is almost no noise in reading the whole text. Although I don't know why there are still not many readers of this book in the past few years since I last read it, but I hope that this book can be read and liked by more people. In the end, our green mountains will not change and our green waters will always flow. See you in the next book.

This book immediately touched my heart and I lost it. It is very exciting. The author's ideas are also very good and lead people to the next chapter without even skipping. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Five-star praise

I read it in one go, and the author's writing is great. This is the first fanfic I've ever seen that doesn't use Tomb Raiders Notes as the background, but uses the protagonists of Tomb Raiders Notes as the prototype. It even adds new characters and new stories on this basis, which simply subverts my stereotype of fanfics (most of the ones I've read are based on the original book as the background and only crudely changed the plot to OOC) [Like]. The plot is flexible and not rigid, and the Iron Triangle has restored the original characters to a great extent. Zhou An's character gradually becomes more three-dimensional as the plot develops. The compact plot is followed by one mystery after another. As the protagonist team goes to the tomb to explore again and again, the mysteries are gradually solved, peeling off the cocoons, and finally revealing the truth. The vivid scene descriptions make people want to stop, making people scared but also a little bit exciting. The occasional dialogues are mostly funny, making people no longer afraid.

Read it in one sitting! ! ! The plot is smooth and the plot is exciting Damn it, I really don't want to stop for a moment. The protagonist becomes a "fake god" step by step, slowly becomes stronger, and stands up at critical moments. Every step is startling, and it is extremely beautiful!