Xuanhuan: My Senior Brother Is Amazing

Serious book review: First of all, it's a complaint. There is no need to portray the male protagonist in a way that looks like Xiao Jiujiu. It is obviously very awkward when placed next to other people's descriptions. The name is too common and easy to make a scene, but it has been changed after all? The plot is very cliche. To be honest, I have seen similar characters, but the male protagonist in the other one was really a loser. I didn't like it. Your male protagonist is a bit better. The combat descriptions are a bit mediocre. To be honest, wouldn't it be better for the male protagonist to just be Bai Yueguang? After all, other people's personalities are so upright? Advantages: The author's description of Mouth Escape is very good, and the character design is still very good. It is outstanding among works of the same type, especially the Mouth Escape part. Some of the ideas are really good, especially the sentence that immortals are just mortals heading to fairyland. Suggestion: The author thinks about the male protagonist. There is no need to add some diaosi plot. It is obviously inconsistent with other descriptions. The other characters are well described. Don't over-increase the characters. If the description is based on the current quality, it will be really outstanding. Sometimes I have the illusion of watching Zhu Xian, even if it is only for a moment. Rich character description is the foundation of a masterpiece. I am optimistic about the author. Come on!

For my own book, I give myself five stars, isn't that too much?

Big cheers for the author! It's very beautiful, I hope it won't be eunuch or interrupted.

Why does it feel like there are multiple protagonists 😂 😂 all of them are Aotian

The author should have read "Xia Lan", right? 😃