After Traveling Through Time, I Had No Talent for Magic and Chose to Become an Immortal.

To be honest, although the story is cliché, I still fell into it. The plot is coherent and the writing is smooth. The part that I personally feel is obviously lacking is the part where the protagonist is dealing with revenge for his mother. He kills the housekeeper, his brother and his aunt, and then is designed to kill everyone in Anping Town, including his father. The plots of these stories are not handled well enough, and the contrast is not enough. There are other similar deficiencies in plot description, which directly lead to the overall character of the protagonist having many contradictions. One moment he is mature and steady, sophisticated and ruthless, and the other moment he is childish and ridiculous, mentally immature. I hope that the author will carefully check the outline of the novel and fully plan the author's mental journey. The novel will not only advance the plot, but also the mental journey of the protagonist and other characters. Please encourage me and give me a five-star review. Come on!

What we are saying is that the speed of this book is too fast, even the speed of light train would not dare to drive like this... [Thinking]

The realm of this book First level: magic apprentice, Qi training period Level 2: Mage, foundation building stage Level 3: Archmage, elixir formation stage Fourth level: mage, Nascent Soul stage Level 5: Archmage, Divine Transformation Stage … Note: This is a comparison of the realms of the cultivation systems of the two worlds, not a comparison of combat power. Gang Jing and the big brother who have practiced immortality begged for mercy.

Is this book okay? Well, how can I put it? As for the plot, I feel it is a bit cliche, but the subject matter is relatively new and the writing style is okay.

I think it's very interesting, but there is only one flaw. The plot of the male protagonist being a stallion and running a harem is no longer in line with the public's views. If there are more male characters in the group portrait, the relationship between men and women is handled 1v1, friendship is increased, and friendship and love go hand in hand in the emotional relationship, then the story will be perfect.

A very good book, compact. Wonderful and not procrastinating[Like][Like][Like] Really good, wonderful

The book depicts the battle between magic and magic very wonderfully. Especially the battle between "Shadow" and the Peaceful Medicine Alliance, the strange attacks on dark magic, and the excitement during the battle are what other novels of this type lack. In addition, there are many humorous plots in the book, which are very good [like] [like] [like]

The plot is quite exciting, but the division of realms is a bit confusing. I forgot about the contrast of realms when I saw it later. The magic fighting style became more like a warrior's fighting style in the later stages. Overall, I still like this book and look forward to the follow-up...

Not bad. There are not many books of this type that can be read. This one is one of them.

Overall, it's pretty good. I was able to read it because I'm used to reading bad writing. To be honest, this book is actually quite good. If you really want to find faults, you can still find a lot of faults. But at this level, it should be pretty good for the upper-middle level.

What can I say? This book is pretty good! The early stage is relatively good, but the later stage feels a bit like it is about to collapse, and the magic is no longer written like magic, but the plot is quite acceptable, and brothers who have no books to read can pass the time.

Okay, you can watch it. Although the protagonist is too weak in cultivation and doesn't understand how to play the immortal magician, one is borrowing and the other is using

What kind of wonderful collision can happen between immortal cultivators and magicians? The subject matter is very novel and the story is exciting. I hope that the following chapters will still not disappoint.

The plot is reasonable, the logic is clear, and it conforms to normal people's thinking. The rest of the writing is really too watery, and I feel like I could end it by writing about Sunset Empire. It's completely repetitive, and the more I write, the worse it gets!

The topic is the type I like

Absolutely great book! I have been short of books for a long time, and I just found one today that I can read!

This is the best and most complete book I have read in the past year.

The content of this book is rich and colorful, the character traits and personalities are a bit omitted, the chapters are inconsistent, and the plot is well developed. In short, this book is worth reading for book friends. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create greater glory.

Not bad, your first completed novel, I give it five stars, support it, write more completed novels, don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished, don't be unfinished, say important things three times! ! !

It's a decent novel. The ending explains in a timely manner that no new map has been opened. I think it's pretty good to avoid being too lengthy.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Cowhide, this car will be very fast in the later period. This is the first time I have seen a car traveling so fast! Love it so much

For now, it's okay, I'll continue to pay attention In chapter 96 or 97, the male protagonist beat those kings to death, but the author brought them to life in the next chapter, and moved faster than the male protagonist. He ran to ambush the male protagonist [shocked] or a stallion story [face covering] harem story, at least play with it, include it in the harem, this kind of horse story is just for fun

The more I read this book, the more it looks like similar books I have read before. The plots are not much different🤔 Tsk, tsk, tsk, it's not bad, I actually finished watching it, but the protagonist is a little frustrated, and the realm level looks a bit messy! Everything else looks good, 🤩

It's ok, the first book I've read

Okay, although it ends a bit quickly, it's not bad!

To be fair, those who have never tasted history can take a look.

Very interesting, this is one of the few novels that I have persisted in reading

Come on, author! Write a satisfying work!

The writing is good, at least it made me interested in reading it. I hope the next book written by the author will be more exciting.