Online Game Shenhao: Start with Unlimited Money-Making

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't become sloppy, nothing will be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and humorous. And deep, to put it bluntly, if you were included in the article, you would be an experienced performer, and I would be the one watching the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state when watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", If I watch one more episode, I will lose one. I want to watch it but can't let it go. My contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your Dear Readers First April 21, 2022

I hope it's not a harem story! Qing Yi is very good, I have known her for several years! Harem Wen immediately came over and gave a one-star review

What can I say, I was quite interested in it at first, but then it became a bit boring. Let me talk about what interests me first. The first is game materials, fantasy online games, which I am quite interested in. Second, the plot at the beginning is cliché but not too entangled. After reading just two lines, the landlady said she wanted rent, and her tone of voice was trying to persuade me to give up, because based on my experience in reading other novels of this type, I could already guess the plot behind it, and even had a rough idea of ​​the dialogue between the characters. I didn't know what to do after reading only two lines, so I continued reading. The conversation between Lin Fan and the landlord was more interesting than I thought. The protagonist was not chased away blindly (because she was greedy for the protagonist's body), which I felt was a bit interesting. Then watch until the end. In the middle, I am interested in the plot of game updates and account training. When I got to the end, I just picked it up. I glanced at the character dialogue and skipped it because it was boring to read. How does it make me feel? The dialogue can be directly referred to as three types of people: men, women, and those who confront the protagonist. Cover up the names and look at the dialogue. You can't tell who is who among these three types of people. In other words, the character dialogue has no character characteristics. In terms of characters, the many female characters in the book make me feel that no matter what the male protagonist does, it is a plus in their eyes and is good for them. There is a sense of déjà vu as one of your own. Some of the characters' behaviors are inexplicable, which is one of the reasons why I feel embarrassed instead of enjoying the novel. There is a conflict, the protagonist is on the right side, there is only one villain, and the whole world is helping the protagonist. The setting of the male protagonist has nothing to show off if he takes off his skin. I would like to give you some suggestions. When writing about the character's psychology, you can use ''. Using '' can easily be confused with the dialogue.

It's very good, no poisonous points, and it looks very comfortable, but the number of words is too few.

Alas~ I took my brain off today and it was so fun to read the novel!

The author should update it quickly. If not, you can give me the address. Send you a courier. It's so exciting. I have to say that the book is beautiful and has been well received!

I think it's a pretty good book. I hope there will be more games in the back, like Fantasy Westward Journey, The Day After Tomorrow, Naruto, etc. [Sending my heart to you]

I am Tuoha, and I take off my own Tuoha. I think the newcomer is good and has decent strength. I highly recommend it!

Hello author! Don't worry, I'm here to urge you to update it, mainly because you wrote it, it's so to my liking! Here, I give you five stars. I hope you will update more in the coming days. I know that to write a good article, you need to change it many times. I have also had a certain period of experience in writing books, but I didn't stick to it. The main reason is that writing books is too brain-consuming. Oh, forget it, I won't say so much. I don't ask you to update ten thousand words a day. As long as you can update two or three chapters a day, I will be satisfied. Come on, brother! I'm optimistic about you [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][get it]

Not bad, good writing, keep up the good work, author.

It's very interesting. I'll give it a five-star review. This is the first five-star novel I've read in a long time.

At first glance, the author is a veteran player of [A Chinese Ghost Story]! The writing is okay, but I feel like it's not necessary to make such a big statement.

What games will the author write in the future?

This book is okay, and people who have never played A Chinese Girl can still read it, but there are too many chapters and the introduction of equipment is a bit confusing. Come on, follow your own ideas and chase it every day. This is the affirmation from a 12-year-old bookworm. If you don't jump, you will keep chasing it.

Author, this article is well written. Although I haven't finished it yet, I plan to read it after more updates. Otherwise, I will have to wait for more updates. I will not divide this five-star article into installments and wait for you to reach the 100th chapter (there are very few novels of this type, so you must update it carefully!)

The writing is okay, pretty good. My only shortcoming is that the game is a bit complicated. I could just focus on writing about Chinese girls. Of course, there's nothing to read about writing about Chinese girls. I'll give it a try, author. I just ask for more updates.

Overall, this book is quite good, but it is a little less exciting. I look forward to the climax of this book. It is a high-quality online game system book. I hope the author can pay attention to music, chess, calligraphy and painting, traditional culture, and join in. Out of curiosity, I can join Xianxia games, Sword and Fairy Legend, etc.

The writing is good, but I just want to give you a suggestion. You don't need to break sentences too often. Some sentences are clearly read smoothly, but they are divided into several sentences by a few commas. It may not have any impact on people who read at a glance, but it is quite uncomfortable for people like me who read word by word.

As the name suggests, it is a great novel. Although the game part is the theme, it does need to be improved, and the punctuation marks are used too frequently, which affects the look and feel a bit, but it is really enjoyable to read, and it is also very sweet. When you have nothing to do, it is also a good time to read when you are short of books.

You can check it out. The author is quite good. The protagonist is not the same as other novels. The protagonist is an invincible traitor. The protagonist of this novel must be more unique. I like it better. I recommend everyone to read it. But the author is too slow to update. I have to send you a razor blade [laughing]

I don't have much time, and I can't read profound books. This book made me feel good and made me want to read it. I have a question. When I write to play other games later, how do I get the previous game account? Is it sold or something?

The book is very good, but there are too few chapters. I plan to read it a little longer and then read it when there are more chapters. Let me check the duration [smile]

Nice. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . It feels like the whole world of this book is like the BT version of some web games. You can get a billion yuan for free with one knife of 99999*n. Someone must have experienced it [Chigua]. Giving five stars can't make me feel uncomfortable😬

Updates are so slow. You, the author, are dying. Be careful and I will raise the book immediately.

Expired players of A Chinese Girl come here to visit

Well, brothers, I have a bold idea. You said that if a male pig trotter develops a game by himself and charges money into it, and then gets cashed back, and the game proceeds are also credited to his account, isn't he making money? This is a bag [get it]

Very good-looking, with a bit of humor in it

It's great to write a hundred chapters in a day, but if you just brush through three chapters in a day, it's gone and it's over before it even started [laughing and crying]

Come on author, this is my type

It looks good (hidden: most of the mobile phone numbers in it are real (//∇//) which is outrageous, please don't use straight mobile phone numbers (´△｀) they can all be found)