After Becoming a Substitute, Lord God Criticized Me Like Crazy

Hope you all like it❤❤❤ I received a lot of comments and carefully read everyone's comments and suggestions. There are indeed some problems in the first two worlds, especially the second one. I found that it may be because my expression was not clear enough, not detailed enough, and the lines were not connected well, so I spent a lot of time revising it. The content of the story is still what I like, and the modifications are still based on what I like. In my eyes, the male and female protagonists are still attractive, and I hope everyone will like it more. Then I want to say, thank you for always supporting me, babies, I love you very much❤❤❤

Um. . How should I put it? The three views are inconsistent. The heroine seems to have masochistic tendencies. I am really drunk. The heroine is physically abused and mentally abused. It is very uncomfortable to watch (I am a female protagonist [face covering]). But I think the author's great creativity is still worthy of praise. This is the first time I have seen this kind of setting. If you like to read sadistic stories, you can come [currently working on it]

How to put it, I just think that the Lord God's Slice is really cruel. He just wants to use this method to make you rely on him. Anyway, I was in a state of incomprehension, and it really made me shed tears. How to say it? That is to say, torture first and then sweetness. If you are interested in this kind of article, you can read it. It's really e-like to tell the truth in this slicing way, and it's really not a good idea to make the heroine rely on him in this way. Woo woo woo [cry]

I like reading this kind of book, but the rating is a bit low. I usually pick the one with a rating of 9. I almost missed this book [laughs]

Actually, I think what's wrong with me is that 1. It is very contradictory, it is between the real Neptune novel and the 1v1 sweet pet novel. It also contains ingredients of mala and Mary Sue. The front is really cruel, the back is a real Mary Sue. 2. Another point is that the Neptune stories in the quick travel stories are generally divided into two categories. One type is about sex, where the heroine will be with many men. The other type is fleshless. Many people like the heroine, but only emotionally. The heroine will not be with many people, at most she will be with one person. It can be considered relatively innocent emotionally. It can only be said that there is no fixed male protagonist; but since the female protagonist of this book also belongs to the fleshy type, but the male protagonists in each world are the same person, it seems even more strange. 3. The characters of the male and female protagonists are unpredictable. Maybe the heroine is weaker. After receiving severe abuse, she still loves the male protagonist. The male protagonist has a feeling of being superior. There is a kind of world that he can control. The heroine will still suffer a lot of abuse. After being abused, he ran over to comfort the heroine. Begin physical communication casually. It gives the impression that he doesn't value the heroine very much. And in a world with four or five male protagonists, the female protagonist all loves them. But the heroine's character is kind of weak and gentle. It would be a little unacceptable. If the heroine's character is that kind of cool and unrestrained Neptune character. Or straightforward, strong, black lotus or something like that. This setting may be more acceptable. But the key is that the heroine is really kind and gentle, and she takes everything easy. I feel like I have no temper at all. Encountering abuse will make readers feel as if their lungs are about to explode. But it is indeed a very good article. I am just giving my own suggestions. I still want to give it five stars! (Of course, I have only watched the first two worlds. The comments may be a bit one-sided. You still have to go and see for yourself.)

I hate body abuse, the second world, woo woo woo, I was listening to this novel last night, the second world really made me cry to death, and there is no crematorium at all. It made me feel miserable, especially the man who slept with the heroine unconsciously and kicked others out of bed. It was so uncomfortable [crying]

It's really good to read, just the right kind, not purely sweet (so that I won't get bored of other novels that are too sweet. I think I would like to read other novels that are too sweet, but they are enough after a few chapters). It's a bit sadistic, but it's not unacceptable, because I know that the male protagonist loves the female protagonist. Although the male protagonist in the first two planes made me angry, I still love the wife-chasing crematorium and the Shura field. Come on!

Leave me alone. I'm a local dog. I like to watch [cry][cry][cry][cry]

In fact, what this book makes me feel is excitement. Although sometimes the author's writing is not so satisfying, just those old-fashioned domineering CEO jokes, maybe because I have read too many negative teaching materials, and I don't like it, but this article written by the author really makes me feel excited (›´ω`‹) I hope the author will make more updates, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง Looking back at this book now, I don't know what to say. Anyway, it is very annoying, but I want to read it again. The characters are not full, and they are all settings that abuse women. The old-fashioned flavor is really strong, and there are also abuses of men. Well, the character of the heroine is a bit off, that is, the characters before and after do not match up. Although there are changes in the middle, the character changes a lot. I really can't find the book to read, and I dug it out from my old bookshelf. I hope I can get through the burnout period soon [Thinking][Thinking]

A very good PUA guide. One person is divided into n people, and then everyone wants to hurt the heroine. Haha, the heroine herself doesn't feel anything about it? I have to say that the heroine is tenacious and vital. The most amazing thing is that she can still love this person? Wonderful, really wonderful In the first life, I can still understand it, but in the second life, the heroine is just like their enemy. Just like that, I don't hate the Lord God. I find it strange that she still loves her? In the third world, do you just behave like green tea? No, I really can't stand it anymore, so I'll give it one star. Even if it's true, the author's second book looks pretty good, but I really can't stand this one. I just want to know why this kind of spoiled wife literature that makes you blush at every turn, then become tender and soft, and then cry when you poke it, can be written to such a disgusting level? Obviously the author's other book is very good, and it's also about spoiled wives literature.

I competed with Shen Xiujin, Fu Shenxing, and Book Yeyou [crying][crying][crying]

What the hell? Give it up, give it up, it's too cruel, it's all misunderstandings, it's painful to read😣 (It's impossible to have so many misunderstandings in normal life, okay?) Although you shouldn't take the novel too seriously, forget it, give it up, it's in vain

Wow wow wow, I have never seen this kind of article that looks like redemption but doesn't look like redemption. It was a bit of love, but why did it end? The male protagonist is extremely possessive, and the female protagonist goes from being repelled at the beginning to accepting, and then trying to find a way to make the male protagonist not always look at her. It really seems like redemption.

I finished reading it. The foreshadowing was too long (and the foreshadowing was not good), but the subsequent plot was very good. I stopped reading the second world after it was over. Suddenly I found out that it was over, so I thought I would delete it after reading it. It wasn't much anyway, but I didn't expect that there would be a surprise after the love story (PS: In fact, when I originally read this book, it was just for the NP, damn it) I suggest you jump directly to the second volume

It looks good, but when I looked at the first two worlds, I felt a bit like PUA. Is it my imagination? ! ! ! What happened to the male and female protagonists? The Shura field in the segregation scene is quite good, but please be nice to the female protagonist.

It's super, super good-looking, and I feel like I can't get enough of it. I especially like reading sadomasochistic articles. I feel like I feel the same way when I read it. It made me cry [crying]. Big boost for the author! I really like this book [Adoration]

It's nice to watch, but I'm the female protagonist and I can't stand the abuse of the female protagonist! Just stay here for now! It's pretty, but there are too few

Let's talk about how this book can be so great! ! Sisters, read this book, Shura Field, come here to fulfill all your fantasies. The male protagonists are all the same person. Let's just say that the author is as beautiful as a fairy. The fairies come down to earth and are beautiful, smart, kind and generous... After that, five-star praise is given. Thanks to the author, thanks to Tomato. I can see such a special book that suits my taste. Afterwards, those who said that if they abused the heroine, didn't they also dote on her later? Anyway, I feel pretty good. Maybe everyone has different opinions and ideas. But the male protagonist still loves the female protagonist If you don't like it, you can watch The Third World. The third world is not cruel.

It's perfect. I've only seen the first world now. It's completely acceptable and not cruel at all. I feel that the author's big introduction will really dissuade many people. I almost didn't read it when I saw the introduction. Simply! Nice! Um😓(⊙o⊙)…that's sloppy

I came here to comment and rate as soon as I finished watching it~ I am very determined to continue reading, even though it has been half a year, I! I have still finished reading it. Apart from a bit of abuse of the heroine, I think one of the highlights is that the emotional expression is very good, at least it touches my heart [shy] Oh, by the way, there is a pitfall that the author did not fill in the short legs of the four brothers (I have always remembered it, I didn't expect it)

It's really super good-looking. The entertainment scene in the second volume really made me cry to death. I feel so sorry for Wanwan. I think my brothers should write about the crematorium to make up for Wanwan.

I think it's actually pretty good, but in the early stages there will be an abusive, abusive heroine. I hope to see an enhanced version of Chasing Wife in the Crematorium later on! ! I want to watch the male protagonist being tortured! ! ↓Point! ! ! I don't know if you Jimei readers will read the reviews before reading the book, because this book is labeled "Sweet Pet" in the introduction, but this book will actually be a bit sadistic in the early stages. If you like reading "Sweet Pet", you won't be able to accept the caution of a sadistic heroine! ! But if you get through it, you will start to be sweet and pampered later. When I typed this comment, the book was updated to Chapter 56 (the third plane). I really feel that this plane is so cruel, although I have not finished updating this plane. If I were the female protagonist, I would probably get rid of the male protagonist, or else I would run away to other cities. Without him, I would be gone, and I would let him slowly chase his wife in the crematorium. Actually, I wrote this comment just to give some advice, and I don't know if it will be seen.

I really like this book. It is completely in line with my hobbies. My favorite is abuse stories, but I always feel that other abuse stories are almost boring. I really like those clichéd stand-in confessions. To be honest, I have a bit of a masochistic mentality and like to watch female protagonists being abused, but in real life I can't see hurting girls. I really like this feeling of heart throbbing. Those who don't like it really don't need to give negative reviews. It's just a personal preference. I almost missed it because of the rating. Come on, the author is [shy][loving][loving]

I like it so much, why isn't it finished?

I really don't allow anyone not to read this book. It's really a piece of shit. It really hits my taste. There are very few books that I can finish. This is the first one. It's really good to read. Highly recommended! !

Ahhh, this pisses me off to death. The female protagonist really looks like the love brain who was successfully succeeded by the male protagonist. She was hurt so miserably in the small world, which is cruel to her heart and body. I don't understand why she still falls in love with the male protagonist who is the culprit. The three views of sadistic writing are abnormal. But I think the author's writing style is pretty good, so 4⭐

It's good-looking, but I couldn't help but comment first. The author's logic is very strong, and he is very good at foreshadowing, like this. But let's just say, Nianxia's younger brother is really disrupting the situation. I feel like it's a bit chaotic at the beginning of Chapter 9 [crying]

I really like it. Although the character of the heroine in the third world is a bit lost, she likes the last two planes the most, especially Qin Yushi, "Who bullied you, I will greet him for you!" "I wish I could go home with you and have children." The previous sentence really poked me [laughing] The first two worlds are very different from the next (two) worlds (they are simply two different things. I don't know if this is a close description)

Speaking of which, I don't know why, but I just like stories like this. Although many people don't seem to understand, I like the male protagonist to torture himself and the female protagonist to love the male protagonist. This makes me always feel like the male protagonist is stabbing himself in the heart, and then the female protagonist is hugging him from behind and coaxing him. Hey hey hey hey (The dog head protects itself)

Why is it so beautiful? ! Why why! Ahhhh! Why are there only more than thirty chapters! ! ! (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)