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The novel is very good, but it lacks a little bit of help, the author💪. There is no level 999 like other system texts, and there is no such thing as unlimited traffic! It looks like a real fantasy novel, but it has more life scripts than the pig's feet in other fantasy novels, which makes the originally mediocre protagonist have more capital than the protagonist... I just don't know when the protagonist can erase the word "die in infancy" haha ​​😄

Come on, you can also arrange an awesome fairy master for the protagonist, Chongshi ~ [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]. This novel is no longer readable. There are all kinds of brainless manipulations. Women are so crazy about chasing after them. I write emotional scenes every day. It's not that I'm not allowed to write emotional scenes, but you went too far. You used the reputation of emotional dramas to write articles, and the emotional scenes are also particularly poorly written. The gap between the writing style is too big. I wonder if someone has changed. Alas, I quit the book, so I can take care of myself [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

This is one of the better books I have read in this category. There are just too many female protagonists, resulting in some female protagonists having too few roles. I hope the author will thank some of the previous female protagonists for their storylines.

Anyone who reads this book and gives me likes is Dashuai Biye |ω)

Overall, this book is okay, but it might be better if I add some emotion or a combination of elements later to enrich the scene (I hope the author will reply to me)

The writing is good, I personally think it is very exciting, that is, Pan Shu's wool is not wasted. People who have ill intentions towards the protagonist will rob him when the opportunity arises. People who are kind to the protagonist will not say help, but there is no need to fight when the opportunity arises. There are some opportunities where the protagonist doesn't need to give them away as a favor, and that's okay too.

The harem stories written by the author are pretty good among the novels I have read. The most important thing is that no girls are left out or girls are given away. And so far, the harems that have been accepted in the past have more or less plots in the subsequent articles, unlike other authors who wrote that after the girls are taken in, they just disappear from the world. Hope the author can keep it up!

Keep up the good work, it's very interesting. Judging from my knowledge of reading thousands of books, it's very good and very promising.

The character of the protagonist is good, but there is nothing like that: he is in the air every second, complains about the system, and always brings his brain with him when he goes out. The plot is also good, the only shortcoming is that the update is not fast enough... I hope the author can make the protagonist integrate all the methods and achieve the supreme level of swordsmanship. (There is nothing that cannot be solved with one sword. If there is, then use two swords) The main character was pretty good without being apprenticed to a master, but the plot changed when he was apprenticed to a beautiful master...

Five-star praise! The author writes really well! Better than those authors with low word count! The subject matter is novel. Well, the protagonist has too many sisters, and each of them is the reincarnation of the empress. The author is really imaginative! I hope the comment can be seen by the author! By the way, I wonder if you can choose my character. His name is Ling Tian! Hope the character gets chosen! Because I am poor and have no money, I can only watch videos to support the author...

Overall, it still tastes good. Ahem, did the author bring himself into it? (About Fatty Lei, the writing is very suitable for time travellers! [Laughing evilly]) Even though there are a bit too many women, I still think it's pretty good in person! Worth five stars!

Two chapters a day?? If you don't write twenty chapters a day for such a good book, you'd be sorry for yourself, the author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][thinking][thinking] Author, author, when did the author burst out [cover his face][cover his face][cover his face]

... A bland and unremarkable little article, a harem article. There are no surprises at first glance. There is nothing particularly outstanding and nothing particularly bad. Generally speaking, I want to give it a three-star rating, but maybe I still have expectations for the future? Five stars are not enough, four stars are given

The plot is quite interesting. Although the protagonist is a bit licky, it's not like other novels. At least you get more than what you pay for... It's not like I've seen a woman unable to walk. I only help the protagonist if it's beneficial.

To be honest, these kinds of daily fantasy novels with many female protagonists are simply a scarce resource. Some people want to read fantasy novels about fighting and killing, so why not look for other fantasy novels? Anyway, I just like this kind of daily fantasy novels with many female protagonists that can be read without thinking.

You can't see your own destiny in other people's books. The author's book can't be said to be a god, but at least mine is very satisfying.

It's just so-so, it doesn't have much of a sense of immersion, and it feels weird not to write emotional scenes if you can. But it is a very good and refreshing article, and the subject matter is also very novel and interesting.

It's quite good. The author's writing style is very good and there are few poisonous points. I think the fighter in Xiaobai's novel is very interesting, but there is too little description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the later period. I fell in love with the male protagonist immediately.

I just watched it and it felt pretty good. I have a few suggestions. I hope the author can describe the character dialogue and environment in more detail, and portray the image of the heroine. Now it feels like I'm just looking at other characters from the perspective of the protagonist. The heroine and supporting characters have no outstanding points. The pace can also be slowed down, and the sword skills practiced by the protagonist can be described in more detail. You can't just know what is happening without knowing why. I hope the author will keep up the good work! [Laugh]

666 Is so beautiful. Although I have only read a few chapters, I am not tired of it at all. I saw the cover of this book during the book shortage and found it uninteresting. I gave this book 82 points and the remaining 18 points. I divided it into 6, 6, 6 format for you to avoid writing badly later.

This book is very beautiful. I personally prefer harem stories, so I personally think it is very good and can be read. The only shortcoming is that there are too few books. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I support you.

Quotes 1. Don't worry about difficulties. The important thing is to solve the troubles. Don't be frustrated by setbacks. The important thing is to use it to fight hard. Hard work will be more fruitful. Hard work will be more courageous. Hard work will be more happy. Hard work will be more fruitful. Face life healthily and work hard positively. Life will naturally no longer be confusing. 2. The word "" in life is composed of "ox" and "", which means that the cow works hard all his life. Therefore, we must, as always, be as diligent as an ox throughout our lives. 3. You can never forget the past, but you must let it go; you can fail again in the future, but you must give it a try. 4. We should have perseverance, especially self-confidence! We must believe that our gifts are meant to be used for something. 5. The past school life is like a bunch of candied haws, and the charming sweetness and sourness will never be exhausted. 6. When walking along the road trodden by others, you should step on the thorns on the roadside, because if you walk more in this way, the road will be wider. 7. Standing on the shoulders of giants is to surpass them. 8. If a person does not waste any time, then although he is very young, he can be regarded as living a long time. 1. If you want to become a strong person, you must not bypass the thorns that block your way, nor can you avoid the erosion of wind and rain. 2. Willpower is a lifeline for people. It can help us get out of trouble and guide us to victory. 3. There is nothing you can't do, only things you don't want to do. 4. A confidence, a hard work, a success; a lot of confidence, a lot of hard work, a lot of success. 5. Mistakes are temporary regrets, while misses are permanent regrets! 6. You can say "I'm so tired" when you can't hold on anymore, but never say "I can't do it." 7. If the enemy makes you angry, it means you are not sure of defeating him. 8. Life is like a race. It doesn't matter whether you reach the end first, but whether you finish the race. 9. Any restrictions start from your own heart. 10. Hope can only be more powerful if it is accompanied by diligence. 11. Don't complain when you encounter difficulties. Since you can't change the past, try to change the future. 12. Tenacious perseverance can conquer any peak in the world. 13. Action does not necessarily bring happiness, but there will never be happiness without action. 14. The word "knowledge" needs to be taken apart. Learning is learning, and asking is asking. Time flies by, how can I be tolerated? 15. We have to do what we should do before success. Only after success can we do what we like to do.

Don't worry about whether you love your brother or not, as long as you can handle it. There is some mismatch in the front of the timeline, but I don't know about the back. The previous protagonist left at the same time as his father died, and came back six years later. She should also have endured it for six years, not seven. I've read Chapter 50, why don't I have a master yet? Author, don't forget your name. You're starting too big.

I have been following the update until the last chapter, and I really like it. Today I will talk about the cool points of this novel that I personally like very much: 1. Excellent character script content and opportunities 2. Gu Yang's multiple physical settings 3. In terms of exercises, there are enough refreshing points and various exercises. 4. The rich and interesting plots of Pao Xianzi (the ones that impressed me the most were Pao Shizun and Pao Lei Ling'er, and the plot of Pao Jin Bingxue who pretended to have lost his cultivation). Other plots are also very interesting. 5. Relaxed and happy atmosphere, I didn't feel aggrieved after reading it. It's far from worth it. These are just what I think of at the moment. I read novels in detail, so I don't read them very quickly, and I don't cheat on my reading time. Secondly, this comment is just my support for my favorite novels, and does not represent other people's opinions. Like-minded friends hope that everyone will support it, and hope to see a fantasy world of novels like you and I like! Don't like to squirt suddenly! At the same time, I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to appreciate a novel that is so close to my heart!

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up and don't get sloppy, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you will be a senior performer, and I will be an audience who appreciates the color film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. It's just like Jane's state of mind when watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard". Every time I watch more, I miss one episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. My contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I opened this novel slowly and aimlessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. I hope you can see it with a lucky mentality. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next blessing" from you. Your dear readers first

Do you dare to accept Feng Qingyi? Do you dare me to give you a gift? You wrote about Feng Qingyi so beautifully. If you don't include her, it's a bad point and a lot of people will leave. Or you can just leave her out without mentioning her. There is also the one I forgot to name, which is the heroine from the Yuhua Sect. Didn't she say she was still pregnant? Why didn't she disappear?

Very good, the author is very self-disciplined, some authors only update once every half a month.

When I saw this, I sighed that I didn't realize that there was such a good novel about harem and fantasy. I loved it and now it's over. I finished reading almost 700 chapters in a few days. The author wrote the novel for a year and finished it in a few days. Seeing the current plot, I guess there is a world deep in the sea, and it will take hundreds of chapters. I read this first and will continue reading after the update is completed. Thank you to the author. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It's great.

It was pretty good at the beginning. After the male protagonist was pushed by the empress, the male protagonist let himself go. The author also described more body parts, especially spanking. The author also started driving. The girl took at least 20 [awkward laughter]. Overall it was pretty good. Yes, the background of the male protagonist in the early stage is not good, but he is very strong in the back. I feel that it is better to grab resources and girls in the front, but the girls in the back just give it to them for free. The male protagonist smiled evilly, and when I said this, I thought of the Dragon King 😂, as of Chapter 326,

This novel is still very good, although there are some small flaws, such as the description of the battle is not good enough, like the perfect world covering the sky, the description of the fighting scenes is quite good, this novel does not have this point, but it is enough to be read as a refreshing article, and the requirements cannot be too high. Although the protagonist has many harems, he has not forgotten the business, which is very good. This novel is absolutely fine, with more than 3 million words. Such refreshing articles are becoming less and less now. I really hope the author can stick to it and be stronger.