Naruto: I Want to Learn Ninjutsu as a Fool of Konoha

Let's talk about the advantages first. Overall, this book is very good. The characters, environment, actions, and demeanor are all described appropriately. And it's also quite strict in terms of timeline. Let's talk about the areas that need improvement. First and last, this fight here shouldn't be done because Konoha has already ordered that the release of ninjutsu on people in the same village should be dealt with according to the judgment of the village. Moreover, the son of the Hokage should be protected by ANBU in the dark, so this aspect was not handled appropriately. Another point is that in terms of language, if you read it yourself, you will find that there is a small part of the dialogue that cannot make people take on the role. Therefore, the language description still needs to be dealt with. Then in the end, it would be better to have some of the things that Naruto didn't have and some of his own creativity. Wouldn't that be better? Of course, it doesn't mean that the author has no creativity. For example, in terms of plot, most of it is the author's own ideas. This idea can actually be ninjutsu, (you can refer to Sister Juan's "Double Divine Power" for this). Finally, I wish the author can write a good Naruto fanfic. Come on, popularity is built up with a little effort and time. I believe that one day, your book will become another good Tomato book.

I think this book is well written, and I recommend giving it five stars. Who doesn't agree? Who dares to object? Believe it or not, I'm looking for my big brother! The update is stable, it depends on your luck. I have no money and I will start working this month. It costs less than 200 yuan to write a book a month. I write slowly, hoping to write better. There is a lot of content, so read carefully. I will explain this issue separately on the timeline, but there is nothing wrong with it anyway.

I've been busy reading novels. I would have forgotten if you didn't tell me. I'd like to give you a five-star review.

Good books are quite to my liking. Some are funny, some are passionate, and some are nonsensical. But the author is a bit naughty. He almost scared me to death if he gave me an ending after the update.

Brother, I'm afraid it's not a family that buries love [laughing and crying]

I don't know what to say, but it's 5 stars if it doesn't suck. The author turned me over! 😁

This book is quite good, why doesn't anyone read it? Do you want to cut a good book in half? Please update more of the author's pictures, maybe a hundred, and many people will definitely read them [laughing]

Kavinka is pretty good. I advise the author to take care of himself and update as soon as possible. I can't get it up or down. Learn about blades Let me go, author, the title of your chapter makes me a little panicked. You don't want to write it, so you need to stop updating it.

Very good I like it very much