People in the Navy: Invent Strengthening Stones at the Beginning

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If one day my five stars become one and two stars, there is no doubt that there must be content related to Naruto [shy]

It is decisive in killing without too many bbs, it is not sentimental or literary, and it is a one-stop road to darkness. It does not whitewash the original pirates like other sea stories. This can be regarded as the most exciting sea story I have ever read. I commend the author.

It's not bad, but this kind of cool writing fever passes very quickly. Basically, as soon as you finish it, it will go away after a month or two. By the way, author, what kind of book are you going to write for your second book? There are very few books about the navy these days, so there will be a lot of old bookworms who want to read about the navy. Basically, if you have good writing and a decent plot, it will basically become popular. You might as well write a science and technology article. The details of the combat article are not enough to excite the readers. The ratings you just got up make you go back. The author listens to the readers and it is better than you writing ten years of books.

Very good. I really like watching these.

There are many comments saying that the writing is not good, but I don't think so. A good book is something that can make people read. Most of the pirates in Tomato have similar plots and have no interesting plot. It is better to read the original work. This book by the author is really good. Not even five stars. Not bad, don't be a eunuch.

It's not bad now. The previous pit of strengthening stones has been filled. As long as the author doesn't do too much, I can probably continue reading it. It's okay to relax and unwind as an invincible writer! (Of course, if I still do it, for example, if it gets stolen again, then I'll probably try to persuade you again!) I really like reading Pirates fanfics, at least I won't read the second one before abandoning this one. If you follow too many fanfics, your world view will become disordered! Really good, just a bit short

Since pacifists can have thoughts, can they also strengthen the ship? Let him have a ship spirit similar to the Merry?

I'll give it four stars (actually it feels like it's more)... If you want to read this book, you must be mentally prepared. I personally think this is a book to persuade people to quit. The introduction is clear, but neither the story content nor the ending is satisfactory (it can be said to be unfinished... That is, the kind of bad...). Characters like Ace Saborelli who are loved by One Piece will die. The system of different powers does affect the story. One kind, but the writing is not good, it depends on the author (get it, don't read [smile])... Just by reading the review, you can understand that I don't recommend this book... But I gave it four stars because the story of this book is like this. The early stage is okay, but the ending is not mentioned (it has nothing to do with the mentality of pirates or other characters, it is really not good because it comes from this book)... It makes me sick after reading it. Summary! I want to read this book! Let's go find other books first... If you really have no books to read, then read this one, and be patient! Really hold it back! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Although this book has many loopholes and inconsistent data. But it is a super refreshing novel, and it will not be like other novels that crazily blossom while crazily weakening the protagonist. Moreover, when faced with the original characters, he was able to solve them neatly and neatly, without going crazy for the sake of a superficial plot.

This book is great, but it is not suitable for Tomato. Half of the readers of Tomato only like the original protagonist.

He is a ruthless person [covers face] Finally, he is no longer the one to save Ace.

The plot setting is good, but escorting the reinforcement stones behind is a bit poisonous. Even if it is a bait, you cannot secretly send a general. This is 1,000 reinforcement stones.

Cobra (tremor) Once I accept my weakness, I am invincible What happened! What happened! What happened! What happened! What happened! What happened! Transform! What happened! What happened! Release yourself (the word is correct and the tone is round) Hum ah ah ah ah ah ah ah go my way Mask ↑ Rider ↑ Knight ↓~~~ Chastity → Chastity → Chastity → Chastity

Very good, better than many pirate fan fiction

Very good, the third protagonist is pretty decent to watch

Good idea. It's just that the lens lacks passion or technology. I hope the lower part can develop in many aspects. Similar defense types

It's very good. Where is the second part? I want to see the second part. It would be a pity if there is no second part. It's such an interesting read. Why don't you update the second part soon? I really want to read it. I'm so bored. Your novel is better than the average novel, but it's better.

If a pirate develops a replica enhancement stone and doesn't even look at you, your combat power will almost collapse.

I want to ask... What if I use a strengthened stone hidden weapon to attack the enemy's twelve-strengthened weapon? Can it achieve the effect of destroying weapons, and only a dozen or so at most can disarm enemy weapons?

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Big cheers for the author! Two chapters a day is fine. Take more rest and pay attention to your health.

I like the author's thought pattern. Although it gradually becomes complicated and difficult to end, I can continue. I support the author. Come on.

Objectively speaking, the pirate world without a good organization is a world dominated by the strong. Basically no one cares about ordinary people, and most of the navy is better.

Really, there are not many novels with the main character being a navy, and even fewer are well written. They must be five stars. It was a bit too boring later on

It makes me happy to see the pirates being beaten, and it becomes more peaceful after the Celestial Dragons are also dealt with.

I haven't watched many minutes yet, but I hope that the protagonist will lead the navy to rebel against the world government later [face covering]

It is not recommended for those who like the pirate camp. Some of them are gone and some are gone. If you like to die if you are a pirate, you can watch it. The books I can read are all five stars no matter what. The ratings are not accurate. Do not refer to my book reviews, except for the first sentence.

This book is pretty good among the pirate fics I've read.

It's so fun to watch. It would be nice to have a few followers, with followers of various abilities.