Start with the red-haired Shanks character template and be reborn in the ninja world.
However, he found that his own fruit of face was of no use.
Guangyue: "How many floors does a bag of rice have to carry?"
Nagato: "Why are you trying to steal my lines?"
"Sarutobi Hiruzen, give me the honor and kill Danzo!"
Sarutobi:? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Danzo: "Pretend I don't exist"
"Madanla, give me some face and stop!"
Mitsuki: Actually, I don't know why the Face Fruit is useless. It's just that you forced me to do it. Look at my normal attacks!
See how Mitsuki brings the system and leaves a legend in the world of Naruto.
Reader comments
On the whole, it is very good, full of characters and not many loopholes. However, some sentences are very awkward when I read it, and there are many typos. It seems that there is no sense of substitution. However, the plot is still very reasonable, at least it is smooth, consistent with the various characters of the original work and the extension and changes of each person's character. The writing is also okay... Anyway, typos and awkward sentences are really a headache...
It's very interesting. Please update it as soon as possible. Although there are not many people watching it, please give it a try, author! I want to read more. I don't want to put this book in a corner and slowly collect dust.
You can write well. Come on, author. I have been reading this book for a long time before I read it. The author must definitely write it down. I have been short of books for a long time...
It's pretty but too short! The author is Tai Xun [covering face]
It's okay, I don't know why not many people watch it
I stopped updating for two days without any explanation, changed the good reviews to bad ones, abandoned the book and left.
[You taste it carefully] It looks good, but it's too short. Come on, author, I hope it doesn't end badly.
I think the writing of this book is quite good. As a refreshing novel, it is refreshing but not too excessive. In addition, the plot is also quite good, with some tears. I hope the author can write the next plot well and not end it badly.
This is a well-written book. If more people read it, the rating may be higher.
Not bad, this fanfic is well written and has a strong sense of immersion. I hope it doesn't end badly.
Wonderful, I'm hooked on Naruto again
I suggest you not pretend to be a eunuch, I will not recruit you into the palace.
It's so exciting, come on, come on, come on
I felt very happy when I saw the deaths of Sarutobi Hiruzen and Danzo. The plot of Pirates and Naruto will never get tired of it. Come on, just write more books based on this idea. I love watching.
I don't feel anything, but I just like it very much
Not bad, come on
I feel fine
Can you add more? The number of words is too small and not enough to read [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Nothing else, I just want to give it five stars.
Well written, keep it up
It looks good, but it's a million points too short.
It's a scam, brothers.
The author writes "One Piece" in a big way
The writing is quite good, but I think if the Black Bass family template is complete, then the combat power in this world is too weak, and we should go to a higher world. The author can write in other worlds.
Very interesting, okay, okay
Why didn't Hong go?
I hope I can always look like Shanks.
Please update it quickly author, I have completely forgotten the plot [crying]
Let's create a group for the author. It would be nice to say something in the group when there are updates.
Not bad, not bad. It suits my taste, but! ! ! ! Your update is too slow! ! ! ! ! You also need to write more words! ! ! ! ! ! I'll give you a four-point score!
It's okay, just one chapter has fewer words.
It's great, but this chapter is a bit lacking.
It's well written and the author must stick to it.
Super exciting! ! ! The author will update it very soon [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Update ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
On the whole, it is very good, full of characters and not many loopholes. However, some sentences are very awkward when I read it, and there are many typos. It seems that there is no sense of substitution. However, the plot is still very reasonable, at least it is smooth, consistent with the various characters of the original work and the extension and changes of each person's character. The writing is also okay... Anyway, typos and awkward sentences are really a headache...
It's very interesting. Please update it as soon as possible. Although there are not many people watching it, please give it a try, author! I want to read more. I don't want to put this book in a corner and slowly collect dust.
You can write well. Come on, author. I have been reading this book for a long time before I read it. The author must definitely write it down. I have been short of books for a long time...
It's pretty but too short! The author is Tai Xun [covering face]
It's okay, I don't know why not many people watch it I stopped updating for two days without any explanation, changed the good reviews to bad ones, abandoned the book and left.
[You taste it carefully] It looks good, but it's too short. Come on, author, I hope it doesn't end badly.
I think the writing of this book is quite good. As a refreshing novel, it is refreshing but not too excessive. In addition, the plot is also quite good, with some tears. I hope the author can write the next plot well and not end it badly.
This is a well-written book. If more people read it, the rating may be higher.
Not bad, this fanfic is well written and has a strong sense of immersion. I hope it doesn't end badly.
Wonderful, I'm hooked on Naruto again I suggest you not pretend to be a eunuch, I will not recruit you into the palace.
It's so exciting, come on, come on, come on
I felt very happy when I saw the deaths of Sarutobi Hiruzen and Danzo. The plot of Pirates and Naruto will never get tired of it. Come on, just write more books based on this idea. I love watching.
I don't feel anything, but I just like it very much
Not bad, come on
I feel fine Can you add more? The number of words is too small and not enough to read [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Nothing else, I just want to give it five stars.
Well written, keep it up
It looks good, but it's a million points too short. It's a scam, brothers.
The author writes "One Piece" in a big way
The writing is quite good, but I think if the Black Bass family template is complete, then the combat power in this world is too weak, and we should go to a higher world. The author can write in other worlds.
Very interesting, okay, okay
Why didn't Hong go?
I hope I can always look like Shanks.
Please update it quickly author, I have completely forgotten the plot [crying]
Let's create a group for the author. It would be nice to say something in the group when there are updates.
Not bad, not bad. It suits my taste, but! ! ! ! Your update is too slow! ! ! ! ! You also need to write more words! ! ! ! ! ! I'll give you a four-point score!
It's okay, just one chapter has fewer words.
It's great, but this chapter is a bit lacking.
It's well written and the author must stick to it.
Super exciting! ! ! The author will update it very soon [adoration][adoration][adoration] Update ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!