The Magic Card Generation: I Awaken a God-Tier Magic Card from the Start
魔卡世代：开局觉醒神级魔卡
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 301k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
134Chapters
2Reads
6.2Score
141kReads · all time
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Give yourself a five-star(ಡωಡ) This book is an introductory book. I hope you will bear with me. Some places are indeed poorly thought out [Working on draft][Working on draft]
Big cheers for the author! I hope you can update to chapter 1000! You are the best!
Good, very helpful for sleeping, must be five stars!!
How should I put it, there is too much inner dialogue, and the characters have too many inner thoughts. Also, I don't even know what the main plot is about, and the memory of the little loli who came back from time travel has been changed too much. The butterfly effect is too great, and the little loli feels like she has not traveled through time. And you went through it so quickly in the early stage, and now you've written more than 45 chapters and it's a bit messy.
The writing is okay. The main thing is that the author has too many narrations. If you read several chapters and one sentence comes out, I can still tolerate four or five sentences popping up in one chapter. Can't it make people read the book immersively for a while? The character "" doesn't mean "watery" either, does it?
I can't accept the female protagonist Chu Luoli, even if she is a reborn person. Isn't it better for the protagonist to be stronger alone? There has to be another female, and the card is forcibly bound to the protagonist's card. Ha, this feeling is so disgusting. So sorry, three stars.
That loli is speechless when she can use the protagonist's card. It's speechless to summon the golden god level. Just write a colorful one. Then she doesn't have enough magic power to use the protagonist's card and is speechless. Later, she has a skill that destroys the world, and then she doesn't have enough magic power to use the protagonist's magic power. Haha, you just make her the protagonist.
Give some encouragement to authors who are writing novels for the first time 😄😄
This author is capable, and he really says what he has to say.
Author, the book is very good, but it's a bit watery... Could you please move the plot forward faster?