Because I wrote a Dragon Ball fan fiction on a whim. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. The writing is not great, so please bear with me. The protagonist is someone who doesn't know the plot, hasn't watched Dragon Ball, and has no system.
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Hello everyone, I am the author. I didn't update yesterday, mainly because I had something to do. Then, I want to say sorry to you, but I may not be able to update every day.
But I try to update it on the weekend, and once again thank my friends who like my novels. In fact, there is one thing that has always bothered me. When my book first came out, I saw that the reviews were 8.8, But I don't know why the rating dropped from 8.8 To 8.6, And then from 8.6 To now 8.5. This made me very confused.
I don't know which friends don't like to read it, so for those who don't like it, please send me my shortcomings. This is my first time writing a novel, and I strive to improve it so that everyone who reads it will like it.
Thanks!
Come on, come on, come on
I hope that the author will appear more in the plots of Kirot and Bardock and Goku and Vegeta in the later stages of the Dragon Ball novels. The plot is well written, good luck to the author
It's really great, but the rating is a bit unsatisfactory hhhh []
I've finished reading another chapter, and I want to know what's going to happen next, but I understand you, so I'd better wait until the weekend to update again😄
Not bad, keep up the good work, it's quite to my liking (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.
It's good to increase your mental strength. Keep up the good work, Ouli.
Hello everyone, I am the author. I didn't update yesterday, mainly because I had something to do. Then, I want to say sorry to you, but I may not be able to update every day. But I try to update it on the weekend, and once again thank my friends who like my novels. In fact, there is one thing that has always bothered me. When my book first came out, I saw that the reviews were 8.8, But I don't know why the rating dropped from 8.8 To 8.6, And then from 8.6 To now 8.5. This made me very confused. I don't know which friends don't like to read it, so for those who don't like it, please send me my shortcomings. This is my first time writing a novel, and I strive to improve it so that everyone who reads it will like it. Thanks!
Come on, come on, come on
I hope that the author will appear more in the plots of Kirot and Bardock and Goku and Vegeta in the later stages of the Dragon Ball novels. The plot is well written, good luck to the author
It's really great, but the rating is a bit unsatisfactory hhhh []
I've finished reading another chapter, and I want to know what's going to happen next, but I understand you, so I'd better wait until the weekend to update again😄
Not bad, keep up the good work, it's quite to my liking (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*.
It's good to increase your mental strength. Keep up the good work, Ouli.