When You Are in Hinata, You Start by Picking up a Bow and Arrow

This novel is so good, right? [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Yes, it's a Naruto fanfic, and it's about bows and arrows. It's the only one in Whole Tomato. The writing is also very good, but there are too few words. You need to learn how to do it.

The writing is good, the plot is interesting, the protagonist Goldfinger is also very well set, and the control of the characters is also good. Everyone has their own obvious characteristics, and they are not all the same. The writing is very smooth, and the foreshadowing laid down is also very interesting, but the update is a bit slow, please come on.

First of all, the idea of ​​the subject matter is very good, and it's a lot of trouble to be able to write it like this without a system.

The idea of ​​white eyes and bows and arrows is quite creative. I hope the author can work hard to write this novel! Update quickly [angry]

Why does a novel that I personally think is very good have such a low rating? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

A very good novel, almost unique among all Naruto novels. The writing style is also very good. Please keep updating the author [Hold]

The bow and arrow attracted me, I hope there will be a Flying Thunder God + Wind Chasing Arrow later.

Various bow and arrow skills, such as: Giant of Light (Zero, X, Nexus) bow and arrow light, Death Quincy bow and arrow skills, Uncle Shayuki A's spiral arrow, Inuyasha's Demon-Breaking Arrow (Demon-Breaking Arrow), Melee Archery (Bow Blades on Both Sides)

It's well written, but too slow. . . . . . [Salute]

This author is very good and did not deliberately smear it. Unlike those smart people, good things are hypocritical, hypocrisy is bad, hypocrisy cannot bring about anything, and hypocrisy is bad. They also deliberately discredit others, ignoring their contributions and only criticizing their faults, and deliberately seizing their faults to criticize and discredit them. How do they feel about hypocrisy? In fact, a bigger heart will poke the pain in the heart. If there is a society in the world, it is destined to be humane and sophisticated, so everyone is hypocritical. Anyway, there are a lot of great principles that I can't finish talking about.

This book is very good, the various plots are relatively rigorous, and there are not many flaws. In fact, I want to give it four and a half stars. As for the half star, I want to say something, that is, while promoting the main plot, I should intersperse some more interesting plots in the article, and then There is no need to write too hardcore in the end. Anyway, I personally feel that I am a little tired after reading for a long time. There is no need to write too hardcore. I hope the author can change it. It is just a personal suggestion. I hope the author will continue to work hard [like] (book friends, please like more)

Why do Naruto fanfics have this section? Third generation: "I am the Hokage" Danzo: "You will regret it."

After reading the complete text and sharing it, the author finally said that the performance of this book was not ideal, which I think is very understandable. The first is that the author brought in too many personal ideas and ideologies and other private goods. It is understandable that private goods are included in the creation, but after all, the novel is a popular reading, and it must be done to cater to tastes and personal expressions. There are certain trade-offs, restrained expressions, and the protagonist's strong ideology in the second half of the book: centralization, thinking transformation, and stamping. Combined with the protagonist's contempt for everything brought about by his improvement in strength, it will make readers very uncomfortable and create a feeling that the more they read, the more boring they become. I think this is also the reason for the decline in performance. Secondly, many authors who write fan works make a common mistake. Since it is a fan work, you must have an accurate grasp of the characters created by the original work, and then deduce the characters' reactions and behaviors based on the plot you designed, so that the readers will not feel abrupt and contradictory. In terms of character design, characters such as Jiraiya, Minato, Hizashi, Hizashi, and Sarutobi in the book have become stereotyped symbols in the middle period. The entire book has become a one-man show for the protagonist. Even if their names are replaced by character A and character B, there is no sense of violation. It is true that fan fiction is actually the best thing to start with, but it is also the most difficult to write well. Come on, author~

Overall, it's a good novel, with a slight problem at the beginning, but it's okay. After that, it became more and more interesting. The white eyes and the bow and arrow are indeed unique, and the content is not empty. It is quite interesting and worth watching. [Cool]

Generally speaking, the writing is very good and very logical. However, at about 60% of the time, the actual combat power is almost level 6, but in the end, it was 30% watered down (it feels like the writing is okay, but not as good as the previous one). Overall, it is worth a read, 4 stars.

The writing is really wonderful and makes me want to read more. However, I can add a few more female protagonists, such as Hinata, Yuhi Kurenai, Tsunade, Samui, Kurotsuchi, etc. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

The content is still very good, and the angle is relatively novel. Come on

How to say it? This plug-in is a bit like the one in Konoha Schoolmaster. If I hadn't read it for a long time and decided that you are not the author of Schoolmaster, I almost thought it was his new work. Although, this overclocking is better than Schoolmaster's epiphany once per minute, but Schoolmaster's one is once a day, which is better than this one. In short, it should be based on the settings of the predecessors, but it is still very beautiful. I feel like the writing is getting better and better. Anyway, come on, the author, you must write well and don't be a eunuch. At the beginning, I felt that the plug-in was a bit like Konoha Academy, so I read it. But now I think this book is also very good, so don't be like Konoha Academy, and never be a eunuch.

Guess why ninjas don't use bows and arrows? The ninja's blessed arm strength throws kunai, which is several times stronger than an ordinary bow. It is more concealed and efficient. Kakudo throws kunai eight hundred miles away. The power of the bow is at its limit. There is no difference between using chakra to wrap an arrow and throwing chakra to throw a kunai with your arm. The upper limit of Naruto's arm strength is much stronger than the bow that a comparable human can use.

Archer books are also quite rare among Tomatoes, and the protagonists are from the Sun family, and the setting is novel. I wonder if special effects will be used later in the scary scenes (it feels like it will be super flammable) [Shy][Shy][Blowing a kiss][Admiration][Smirking][Laughing] Finished spreading flowers🎉[smirking][shy]

Don't just say that forbidden arts were created by the Second Hokage. In the anime, it was developed by Kaita's father, but he didn't say who created it. Dark Ben never stated that there was a creator when he drew the comics or when he explained it publicly, or that he deliberately did not create a creator.

The writing is good, the plot is impressive, the protagonist has a halo, and you can pass the level directly

Nice! The story is interesting and not watery. Goldfinger is not overly powerful, he relies mostly on himself, and he does not deliberately vilify the original characters, nor does he create a universal enemy to highlight his strength. I like this kind of protagonist who has family, friends and lover.

Come on, author, don't stop, keep at it

In fact, I feel that this setting is quite acceptable, and the world view behind it is not small, but it is not very developed. I can't think of much that can be written with bows and arrows. It is difficult to use bows and arrows in the big world world. Then, this epiphany is a very powerful skill. The protagonist's strength in the whole novel mainly relies on him. Although it was turned off in the end, the writing logic makes sense, but many characters have relatively few scenes, especially towards the end, there are not many scenes left. After reading some comments, there are bugs in the book, but they have little impact. The most important thing is that some people feel that the front is slow, but I don't think so. I listened to the book at 3 times a bit faster, but the rhythm before and after was not consistent. Also, it is true that the strength grows too fast.

[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Another kind of Naruto fanfic worth a look Interesting, the pace is just right, neither too fast nor too slow Not bad, not bad

Isn't there a ninjutsu in the movie version that can absorb other people's chakra, and with that ninjutsu, it can suck blood [laughing evilly] [thinking] [cool]

It's nice to look at, but in the later stages, the protagonist didn't use the bow and arrow much anymore, which made me a little bit disappointed.

Overall it's pretty good╰(*´`*)╯ Just the depiction of bows and arrows only accounts for less than 1/3 of the total plot, right? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣ It is purely an introduction to the development of science (˵¯͒¯͒˵)