I Became the Wicked Sister-in-Law of a Sickly Big Shot

I have read more than 180 chapters. The book is very beautiful. It is rare to read it. The plot is not good. It is very interesting. I saw it directly at four o'clock in the morning [cover face] [cover face] I've seen Chapter 344, comrades, it's still very good-looking [face covering]

I would like to sincerely give some suggestions to the author. I read the book by Xu Ning and Pei Zhuo before and thought it was very well written. I recommended it to my friends. Later I started to read the book "The Spirit". I felt that the author was very jerky when describing the supporting actress. It was jerky, not because the writing was bad, but because the characters were bad. , It's just jerky, it seems that in the author's eyes, the characters' images and motivations are simple, crude and unreflective. Of course there are such people, but there are too many female supporting characters in the author's works. I don't want to say that the author loves men very much, but looking around the male and female characters, this feeling is particularly obvious to me. This feeling became even stronger when I read this book. Although there is no obvious female rivalry, there are many plots belonging to female rivalry. I really sincerely suggest that the author can open up his ideas and structure a little more, because I still quite like the author's book. I abandoned it after seeing Chapter 378, and excerpted one of the passages: "Women love to embarrass women. The talented women in the city felt that she was wasting her fame. When invitations like pieces of paper were sent to the academy, Chu Chenglin blocked them all." I am a female reader. I am keen to see excellent and diverse female characters, whether they are righteous protagonists or rich and three-dimensional villains. But I am firmly opposed to this kind of stuff that contains personal goods. It seems that the heroine is very powerful, but the other female characters are single, thin, and evil for no good or reason. After reading this chapter, I understand, because in the author's eyes, the female supporting roles are only to promote the development of the plot or to set off the heroine. There is no female protagonist in every sentence, but there is a female rivalry in every sentence. This is also the reason why I barely managed to read more than 300 chapters. The ambiguity between the male and female protagonists is what keeps me here until now. In fact, the plot is very uncomfortable for viewers. It is too long-winded and has too much homogeneous content. The characters are thin and often jump back and forth on the edge of OOC, especially the heroine. Abandoned. I think there is nothing wrong with women being more sensitive. The emotional connection between women is not what the author describes in the book. They are shallow and ignorant and are afraid of going crazy for the sake of men. Even in ancient times, it was not like that. Forget it and leave it at that.

Apart from time travel, this book is by no means absurd. The character's personality is perfected in the process of development. There is no love that is achieved overnight, but only friendship, family affection, and love that share weal and woe. Definitely a novel worth reading. Thanks to the author.

Don't be misled by the title. This book is wonderfully written and worth reading. It has a good balance in all aspects, the language is fluent, the structure is quite compact, and there are occasional jokes. The content is also rich, emotional, humane, treasure hunting, and suspenseful.

It took me a long time to find this book. It is very interesting and the writing style is very good. I can't stop reading it. I am looking forward to the author's other works and have already followed the author! ! !

The main line of the story is good and logical. There will be no confusion where the preface and the follow-up are inconsistent. The pits are dug and buried in correspondence, and the suspense that intrigues people happens naturally without any artificiality. Moreover, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is so unique. Although they both wear the skin of being an immortal, they are still the fireworks of men and women who are eating and drinking and wallowing in the world of mortals. The inner world of ordinary people can be seen at a glance. It is the first time to see such a beautiful but down-to-earth male and female protagonist. It is easy to substitute for ordinary people like you and me. Real and funny. Except for the heroine who occasionally seems a bit virginal, there are no flaws in the whole story, and the writing style is also very refreshing, and it will not make people feel stuck in the throat or feel miserable after reading it.

Very beautiful. There are fewer and fewer books that can make an old bookworm like me stay up late to read. The author's writing is smooth, and the story is compact and ups and downs. The only shortcoming is that it is not finished [laughing and crying]

Reversal, reversal, reversal [Sending Hearts] I really enjoyed reading this article. I waited for more than a month to read thirty or forty chapters at a time. After reading it, I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. I just hope the author will update it soon. [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript] It's not good enough. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

A guide for a sinister male protagonist who travels through time with a female protagonist. It's a good read. I'm looking forward to the end.

Highly recommended! I knew he had evil intentions, and he knew I was pretending to be reserved... The male and female protagonists are both smart, but also mean and flirty! I feel that the male protagonist is a yandere male protagonist, and the female protagonist is timid and flirtatious, but I really like Tao Zhen and his attitude towards people and things. He knows things but is not worldly. He loves money and gets it in a proper way. The most important thing is that he has his own rules and requirements for people and things. He respects and loves life and works hard at the same time. Such a person will definitely live a good life...