A Different World of Horror

It's great that a new author can write like this, and I think your writing will get better and better. It's just that this isn't a thriller. I personally think it could add more martial arts plots. Then there is the issue of punctuation, details determine success or failure! For example: 1️⃣Luo**: My surname is Luo. 2️⃣Luo**: "My surname is Luo." These two feelings are different! From a reader's perspective 2️⃣ will look better! I also understand what you want to express! It's just that the author's expression of words is too direct, which makes most readers have no desire to read further. Novels are the combination of all human imagination and yearning for a better life. When readers read novels, they will also learn how the sentences in the novel are expressed. Readers will not ignore good words and sentences, but remember them because they have a "desire" for that novel, so they can continue reading this book... Bah! That's too far! If you just write it down, just pretend that I didn't say anything [laughs awkwardly]. I just suggested it, not from a moral high point. In short, my... Bah... Uh... It's fine! Haha 😄

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