The Demoted Immortal in the Super Seminary

The writing is very good. It is one of the best super seminary fan novels I have read. I hope you can continue to work hard and not collapse.

After reading dozens of chapters, I discovered that the protagonist looks a bit like a certain monk (I didn't say it was Fahai). ∪･ω･∪

In this book of mine, you will see the light-hearted, funny and innocent BBQ God of War, Sage Shirakawa! We will also see Bai Chuan, the human sword master who is cold and rational and addicted to killing monsters!

Author. Yang Jian. Nezha Sun Wukong. Will he descend to earth? Well, this book is good, I like it very much.

It's very interesting. This is the first book I really like since registering on Tomato. I hope it won't be a bad ending.

It's really good-looking, but a bit short. It's no problem to take 20 or 30 pictures a day.

Author I'm starting school tomorrow, can I update more? I particularly like this book.

This book has advantages and disadvantages, and its advantages and disadvantages are also very obvious. Advantages: 1. The subject matter is novel. I have never seen anyone write this type of book on Tomato before. Second, the topic selection is good. The main theme of this book is Super Seminary. There are definitely a lot of people who like Super Seminary. However, there are very few books about this type of fan fiction. Even if they are written like this, I have not seen many books about immortals. This is also a big advantage. Disadvantages: 1. Although the subject matter of this book is novel, the author is probably writing a novel for the first time and has already written this book into almost a running account. This is a major shortcoming. Second, the problem of characterization. The protagonist of this book is an immortal who has lived for nearly 5,000 years. I personally think that he has lived for 5,000 years and was a powerful swordsman in the mortal world. I personally think that after living for such a long time, he should be more or less good at dealing with people. The author's writing is a little too novice. I suspect that he should be, when he accepted the thunder tribulation, he might have been knocked unconscious. Summary: The author's choice of subject matter is very good, but it is because it is his first time to write a novel and he has little experience. The writing is a running account, and the character creation is relatively poor. However, these are not very big problems. I personally feel that as the author gradually understands how to write, the books he writes will become better and better. (You can criticize and make suggestions if you think what I said is wrong, but please don't curse. Thank you for your cooperation)

Well written. This is the best thing I have ever seen about Super Seminary.

This book is very good, and the male protagonist is also very funny, but I think as a man, it's okay to have a sense of humor when you shouldn't be serious, but I also want to be serious when I should be serious, just like in a war, I hope not to be playful after all, it is a war. Although the author defines this book as a funny novel, too much funny will make you tired. It is appropriate to add something domineering or something to temper the atmosphere. Human nature is not necessarily determined from the beginning. I still like the character of the male protagonist. A person who has lived for thousands of years still maintains the mentality of a young man. But after all, he is a person who has lived for thousands of years. He must think twice before doing things. In the novel, although the male protagonist is a bit funny, he is very serious about serving the people. Although the author said that he is not very good at writing about combat, I think it is still very good. There seem to be two female protagonists, but I don't really like multiple female protagonists, so I hope the author will limit it.

It's very interesting. Let me give you some popular science. Super Seminary is Super Seminary and Heroic Company is Heroic Company. Don't argue. Heroic Company is to make up for the picture quality problem of Super Seminary. There are also plot issues. After all, I was very tired after watching Heroic Company. My complaint is that there are too many female scenes and few fights. Just looking at women makes me forget what the original topic was.

I originally wanted to give it two stars, but after thinking about it, I decided not to. Some people feel comfortable in the early stage, and some people feel uncomfortable in the early stage. I belong to the former category. It feels really happy and comfortable to watch. After the Taoist heart broke the seal, I felt it was boring and gave up. What if it was sealed again? Call me and I'll definitely come and see you

This book is okay. I read it all, but it's a bit unfinished, so I can only give up two stars and give it three stars. But since no one wrote the ending, I just made up for it. I think since I wrote the ending myself, I must give it four stars. So I will help you fix it, author, no need to thank me, hahahahaha

The book you wrote is very good, I am very happy, but the update is too slow, I am very angry.

Write quickly, author. None of the donkeys in the production team dare to rest like you.

To be honest, author, your writing is not very good. Then, the identity of the protagonist in the first picture is not introduced well, and the characters of the protagonists in the following pictures are not introduced well. But generally speaking, it is still good. I will give you four stars first, and I will talk about it later.

Immediate five-star praise made the author press the computer to type.

What can I say, it's quite watchable. The subject matter is great, and the author's jokes are very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. But I just feel that the character writing is a bit lacking, and each character feels not particularly three-dimensional. But it's really good. I like it very much. It has good reviews, good reviews, good reviews, good reviews! ! !

Come on, author, write Ge Xiaolun to death.

Very good. I think it is the best among the super seminaries currently.

How can I put it, I personally like the relaxed, funny and innocent Shirakawa in the previous part. I don't really want to watch it anymore.

It's rare to see a good book, so everyone should stick to it until the end of Chapter 47! This book should not be buried!

A very good book, don't be a eunuch

It's just a bit slow to update, but to be honest, it can be understood. After all, the quality of the book is good.

It would be very tiring for a normal person to lead a group of sand sculptures. Unexpectedly, the protagonist turned out to be a real person and directly joined the sand sculptures.

If it wasn't a mess, it would be okay

Why is it such a bad book?

At least it's pretty good so far, so cheers to the author

Very good, but can we remove the side story😄😄

Okay, just don't destroy the protagonist's personality