Help! I Am an Immortal Queen and the Demon King Wants to Pledge His Body to Me

This book is simply a treasure! The more I watch the plot, the more interesting it becomes. Ah Wu is really a woman with a clear distinction between love and hate. I really want to fall in love with Ziqing and then take Ah Wu away ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )

I accidentally discovered a new book. As a fan of fairy tales and yandere novels, I secretly eat sweets. I swear that Ziqing definitely had a relationship with Ah Wu before! ! ! If I don't guess correctly, I will copy this novel from beginning to end! !

To be honest, there are still many immature aspects in the plot. If the author has higher pursuits, he can try to spend more time in the future and think more about the plot logic. I wish the author can reach a higher level. There are also several characters in it. If you are willing to spend more words to complete his image, this book will be more fragrant. For example, for the heroine's father, you can write about his tenderness towards the heroine, so that his hypocritical and self-motivated character will be more distinct... There are a few others that I won't list one by one. The above two points are all my feelings. I hope all readers will have fun reading in Tomato.

It's good to watch, but I just want to know why the original male protagonist and the female protagonist's father suddenly don't like the female protagonist. I really want to know the answer, because I feel that this is a point of abuse. If there are difficulties, it doesn't feel tender and cruel. After all, who can a normal person bear the sudden loss of the love that belongs to him to another person? Please give me an answer from the author. I really beg you. Mainly because I cried while reading it and it made me feel so sad. (I read it with my heart and it was very engaging. The author keeps up the good work. The text is great)

It was recommended on the homepage. I clicked on it after reading the introduction. I didn't expect it to be so beautiful. It's so cute. I like Ziqing, she's a wolf and a breast. The author is great. Does the heroine have other vests?

I found a book by accident. After reading it, I immediately felt like I had found a treasure. The more I read, the more addicted I became. By the time others discover this book, I will be a real fan (quietly beeping) [laughing] Keep up the good work! ! ! This book is really great

The male protagonist's devil is named Qi Ziqing and the female protagonist's clan leader's daughter is named Jiang Wu In the first time in the book, the daughter of the sect master was looking for the spirit key and met the devil. They fell in love twice in three thirds. Outsiders also said that the daughter of the sect master and the devil fell in love, but the daughter of the sect master found all the spiritual keys and opened the door to return to the real world. The daughter of the sect master chose to return to the real world after returning to the real world and being with the devil. (After returning to the real world, Jiang Wu's sealed memory was revealed. Jiang Wu did not know that she had passed through the book before. Qi Ziqing had not forgotten everything that Jiang Wu had passed into the book last time. Qi Ziqing still retained her memory. This time, Qi Ziqing was no longer a demon.) The second time she traveled into the book, Jiang Wu released the seal in the penultimate chapter, gathered the spiritual keys to open the door to the real world, and asked Qi Ziqing to go to the real world with me. Qi Ziqing chose to go back to the real world with me without hesitation, and the two of them got married in the real world.

2022.7.9 How to say it! I still like the heroine's setting, but the ending is poorly written. It would be great if the author would come up with a side story to fill in the gaps.

What happened to the heroine's father?

If nothing else, I really like this book! Not to mention that it is completely in line with my taste, but it is written for my taste! ! ! I suspect the author is a roundworm in my stomach! But unfortunately, there is no evidence~[rolls eyes] I love Jiang Wu more than Luoluo~[sending heart]

This book feels very novel, and there is also suspense in the middle. Although it is not finished yet, it can be seen that the heroine has not become stronger without brains. There is also a Bingjiao villain, who feels that there is some glass slag in the sugar, which is absolutely amazing.

The overall feeling is pretty good, and the plot content is also well designed. It's just that the ending was a little hasty. I particularly like the male and female protagonists, and there are plenty of scenes. The only drawback is that there are very few cases of shyness. Also, the endings of Ying Feng and Demon Lord were not written out. There are some parts that I feel are only half-written, but overall it's still readable (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡!

The previous success gave me a sense of emotional involvement. The father, the original heroine, and the master are all bullshit, with a face thicker than a bulletproof vest... [Start] (Omit 10,000 words of complaints about the character, make up your own mind) I haven't finished reading yet, so continue to watch [laughing] The ending is happy, it's really beautiful [sending heartfelt wishes]

The characters are very good and the story is novel, but the male protagonist has too many secrets that make me feel itchy. I really want to know the truth, but the update has not been completed, so I will put it on the bookshelf for a while. I will come back to it when it is finished, otherwise I will be bored. . .

It feels very good! It's sweet, but the original heroine and hero disgusted me at first

Really beautiful, I like Ah Wu! (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

Very, very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Recommended

It's very good, but the ending is a bit sloppy. Many people later don't know the ending. I hope the author will make a feature about all of them. Thank you so much😊😊😊👍👍*^_^*

Adding whips and rhetoric brings youth, Drinking in the wild under the oil curtain and felt tent.

Ah... It just... Quite suddenly... Ended. Ah Wu traveled into the book, and her father and master's favoritism towards the "female protagonist" made her heartbroken, but the cute and well-behaved Ziqing made her fall into trouble - she promised to protect him, and she would always protect him. Then, the big bad wolf in front of others turned into Ah Wu's little white rabbit. It feels like it ended hastily without finishing, and there are many holes left unfilled. As for me giving less ⭐, it was sweet and then gone, sad😔~ To sum up~

I feel like there must be a big surprise later (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

This book is really good. The heroine Jiang Wu, the hero Qi Ziqing, and several of the heroine's senior brothers, Qi Yin Feng Ying are really looking forward to this couple. I really like the characters, especially Qi Yin, and the little fox who just wants to transform. I would like the author to write a big story about Qi Yin Feng Ying.

The writing is very good, and the plot has ups and downs and is exciting, but the ending is a bit sloppy and many places are not explained clearly.

Looks good. I'm curious why the rating is so low.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It feels like there is something missing. The Demon Lord, Feng Ying and the little fox have not written the ending. It's a bit sad💔

Very nice, I like it very much [love] [love] It's so hard to find good books nowadays [face covering]

The ending is a bit sloppy but the careful love is really nice

Jiang Wu VS Qi Yu/Qi Ziqing ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It's so beautiful [heartfelt] The ending caught me off guard! I also want to read the modern chapter of the male and female protagonists... Qi Yin VS Feng Ying/Qi Mei... Su Chenyi VS Little Fox... Author, keep up the good work [making faces] OK (ゝω´★)

It's beautiful, I really like Ziqing [Send My Heart] but the ending is a bit rushed ૮₍ ˃ ⤙ ˂ ₎ა