Traveling Through ***************

Overall, it's pretty good. If you like harem stories, you can check it out. It's a little bit toxic. That is, the protagonist just tricked the heroine into sleeping with her, and then she was taken away by others. This is a bit poisonous at the moment. If I haven't slept with him before, I am definitely here to criticize, not to praise or say good things. That's how my temper is. Personally, I particularly like reading harem stories

Can the author stop using Zhang Erdan and just use the name Lin Pingzhi?

I feel like the author has trouble writing later. Earlier he said that he went to the world of immortality to find his master and his daughter, but he didn't even mention it after so many chapters. The plot feels like there is a forced connection. There are all kinds of women in every world. Could it be that the mother-daughter pair is unforgettable? Lost the watermelon and found sesame seeds. But it's very exciting, with all kinds of twists and turns and slaps in the face. I also read the comments just now. The author does not need to pay attention to them. Think carefully about how the next plot will transition. I am more optimistic about this novel.

Okay author, you have had enough rest, please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!

It's okay, I think it's just that the main character is a little bit toxic.

Haha, it's quite funny. The more I watch it, the more I enjoy it. Come on, author, please update quickly.

I'm surprised to see your skeleton, it's a good material for writing a book

Very funny, I like it very much

What happened to Ning Zhongze? Have you found it? Why didn't I see it? ? ?

The story about the harem is good, I like it very much~ But one thing I don't like is that the ending is a bit hasty.

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I'll give you five stars. I've read four of them, and I don't know what to think about the latter part. The first part is not so good. I'm reading, not cursing.

Let's give it a ten. I hope the author will add some details when he demolishes it. I've seen Chapter 116 and I can't stand it anymore. The main plot is too single, the emotional lines are always broken, and the map changes very quickly. If I could refine the world of Swordsman, it would be so interesting to carry the Dantian. There is no place to rest when I am tired after changing the map, and there is no girl beating her legs. It's so embarrassing.

Is Ning Zhongbi the heroine?

It's very beautiful and worthy of praise.

Not bad, worth pursuing

So far, it's okay, the plot of the original novel hasn't been changed too much. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

This book is a bit funny, the author could add some drama and blend it to make it more interesting!

It was pretty good after watching it for a while,

Awesome, awesome, awesome

The follow-up becomes more and more exciting

It's so good. Is there a second part?

It's pretty good, but it's a bit too fast. I'm a little worried that the author won't be able to write for too long.