After Preventing the Yandere from Turning Black, I Became Bai Yueguang

In fact, if I hadn't read the last chapter, I would have given this novel 3 stars. The reason is that the plot is too fast and the emotional expression of the male and female protagonists is not very good. However, the author's words in the last chapter reminded me that I am also a student in school, but I hope I can have a novel that I am satisfied with. I have been liking novels for almost four years and have been writing novels intermittently for three years, but they are all handwritten, and each novel has no more than 40,000 words, but I never tire of it. The recent novel was also my first one to be published, but it was delayed due to the high school entrance examination. Now that the high school entrance examination is over, I no longer have the passion and motivation to write novels. Just an hour ago, I was ready to give up the idea of continuing to update my novel, but after reading the author's words, I feel the same. I experienced it and felt encouraged at the same time. In fact, the novel I wrote was not very good, and the plot was even too fast. There were some problems with the relationship between the male and female protagonists. This was one of the reasons why I didn't want to continue writing. However, after reading the author's words, my dead heart seemed to be beating again. Everyone is not born perfect.

The short story has been completed, the progress is very fast, welcome to join [send heart]

To put it simply, it's beautiful. I think it's great that the author can write like this for the first time. It's better than other first-time authors I've seen in terms of writing style and plot. I hope the author will continue to work hard and publish more books [Top post][Top post]

I feel that the setting of this male and female protagonist is a bit like Tantai Jin and Li Susu, but the feeling is completely different, but it saved my book shortage, it is very interesting

I hope the author will work hard and look forward to the follow-up The content is very interesting, the love is forbearing, the love is clear-eyed, the plot is delicate and does not drag out. I love it ~ I love it ~💓💓

I like this kind of short and superb, at least it has a beginning and an end, which is very good. Keep up the good work, author, and see you in the next book! It's great. The sound at the end seemed to bring me in and see the man in white standing by the pond!

I feel like I really like short articles like this. The emotions don't drag on. I read it in one go. It's very comfortable and beautiful😄

Just give it a perfect score. It's really nice and beautiful. My family is excited.

Looks good hahaha

The entanglement in every life is proof of love

Looks good but too short

Very exciting and beautiful! ! ! !

I really really like it (=^･^=)

It's super beautiful. Come and take a look.

Very exciting, I also like it very much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

Very good, but the ending is a bit rushed

It's really good. I'm waiting for the author to publish the next book.

It's very interesting. The male protagonist has sacrificed a lot for the female protagonist.

Ended on 2023/04/22, 20:20. This article is short and concise. I finished reading it in one day [face covering] The love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is really divine!

It's really good to watch. First of all, it's short and concise, and the plot is closely linked. I'm very touched by this kind of love that goes in both directions. Fortunately, the ending is good, otherwise it would be unforgettable.

So pretty! Looking forward to the author's next work

Super beautiful, I highly recommend this book.

It's quite interesting, but the plot develops a bit quickly and is a bit unclear. Overall, it's very good. This is the author's first time writing a book, and it's great!

It's beautiful, although the process is a bit sadistic, but the ending is good.