On the Occasion of Collapse

This is the journey of the heroes who chase the fire, and it is a story named Fuling. In the world of trees and sea, the life of a beautiful girl like flying flowers, from birth to growth to maturity, there are joys and sorrows in the story. This is no longer a story, but the reality of a girl. Therefore, pure and noble soul, may your future be as bright as gold, not trapped by the past, not confused by the way forward. I wish you are as good as when we first met.

I feel that this book is already the pinnacle among Honkai fandoms. The author's character creation is very good. After reading the first volume, I really felt the same feeling. I felt very, very uncomfortable. I have eaten the knife of Mi Huliu and the author. I like this book very much. I hope the author can continue to update and give Fu Cen a happy ending! [Like] With love throughout, Poria shows us the greatness of love, but does Poria really get love? In other words, how much love has she received? Ai Li loves all mankind, but Fu Ling only loves him. The unequal love leaves only pain. The pain has been with Fu Ling from the moment Ai Li left. Fifty thousand years of time cannot erase love, but Fu Ling can only bear the loneliness silently. Her love is great, but this story can only be a tragedy.

Overall, this is the most interesting Honkai fanfic I have ever read. Of course, even so, I finally decided not to read it after the end of the pre-civilization (although I couldn't help but read the sequel). I really cried when Alicia died, but I felt that the life of pre-civilization Fuling was over. I sincerely wish the author good luck and write better and better. (I will come back when it's over)

I am following this book in both accounts. It is really very good and one of the best books among all the Honkai Impact fans I have ever encountered. My account is a small one, so there are fewer books on the bookshelf, but there seem to be hundreds of books in the large account. By the way, is there any Miss Alicia who is willing to adopt it? Only for girls "Please" ignore my previous comment, it's really embarrassing for me to read it after a year -

Too pretty (I think) It can be said that the author has completely embodied the powerlessness we feel when watching the plot in Xiaolingʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ , and Ellie also has not only laughter, but also allows us to see other human emotions appearing in Ellie, ┌(.)┘♪ When reading this book, I have a feeling that the story is more like a balanced world that is similar but different, rather than adding one more person to the original story development (although the ending should be the same (ノ｀Д´)ノ┻━┻ (Although I say this, it's a good knife, but you can eat hard

The pre-civilization chapter is the most awesome part of this novel. There is nothing in the latter part except the knife, and the writing is not as good as the pre-civilization chapter, but it is undeniable that this is a rare and very good long-form Honkai Impact fanfic (as for the reason why there is one missing star, it is because Alicia died. I hope that the Amela Land chapter is very, extra, extremely, sweet, and I will give you the star back [laughs]) This book could obviously end after the end of the previous civilization, but it was forced to take over later, and the protagonist was replaced by Bai Zhi, and Xiaoling ended up committing suicide. I really miss the original group, the original group of fun-loving oldies.

A very good novel with a beautiful story and vivid plot, which greatly stimulates the readers' emotions and gives people a positive feeling.

Sometimes I feel that there is no need to read this book. Xiaoling cannot change the ending of the story, but only inserts a person. However, the author's original intention is not to change it. What the author wants to write is the journey of a new Honkai God who is infected by Alicia and forced to grow up. She (He) plays the role of companion, enlightenment, and spectator, but she just chooses to be in the world of Honkai Impact. It would be much better if this book was treated as an independent book instead of a Beng San fanfic. Witnessing Xiaoling's growth is what the author wants to show us (I haven't read Life Diary before posting this paragraph). It is definitely a good book. (Personal opinion, please point it out if I'm wrong) Unknowingly, I also started to update every day. Amo's articles are so attractive. If possible, I hope Xiaoling and Bai Zhi will have a better ending (although it is impossible)

This book has surpassed the original work in some aspects. This book clearly knows the predetermined ending, but still feels uncomfortable when seeing Alicia commit suicide. Thank you Amo, Daomen. By the way, thank Alicia for giving the possibility of civilized Herrscher, Aimen.

A rare completion for a Honkai Impact III fanfic. I've been watching it all the time, and it's quite emotional. The original characters of Poria and Angelica are indeed impressive, but after growing up, they fell into trouble for various reasons. Poria chose to split herself, and Bai Zhi, who stopped growing and may even regress, paid the price for it. This may also be the inheritance of the Honkai Impact series. If you don't move forward, someone will have to pay. It's hard to say whether the final ending is satisfactory or not, but I also accept that maybe it is normal for a shadow to pass under the final beauty.

After reading for so long, how can I put it, I have never seen anything more awesome than this among Honkai Impact fans. The author writes very well. Looking at the Poria and Angelica dahurica in the article, they all have their own life experiences, have grown up, and have become what others call "seniors". How can I put it, I am still very happy to think about it now? The self-created characters of the former civilization were also successfully created in my heart. Before watching the plot, I thought they were really characters in the original plot. After watching it, I realized, eh, something doesn't seem right. Is this an original plot? So strong! And Ah Mo's knife in the back has almost been sharpened. Tsk, anyway, keep working hard!

The best Honkai fanfic on Tomato right now. There are too few Honkai fanfics on Tomato, and most of them are. . It's hard to say more, although it's a sword, it's Honkai Impact. It's strange that Honkai Impact doesn't have swords. If you don't like reading swords, I suggest you watch Pure Harem. Only harem stories don't know how to use swords. It's impossible to get through the plot without swords. If you can't stand it, you can read something else. You don't need to look for Honkai stories to find swords yourself. Really. It's too much, brother. It's uncomfortable to watch, but I can't help it. Please use less knife.

The book... Is very good. Knife... Is also very sweet. It hurts, it hurts so much [crying], even though it's not long, I basically skipped watching it, and I didn't want to continue watching it until I got to the end. It was so uncomfortable, even watching Genshin Impact's Nine Reincarnations next door wasn't that uncomfortable [crying], it hurt so much

It's a very good book, but the content is a bit confusing. I watched it just to see Ai Li, but after Ai Li died, the rest of the content is about Fu Ling, and there is no plot about Ai Li. Ai Li is really a good person. After all, it was Ellie who died for humanity. I really hope to see Ellie be selfish for once, for herself, for...

I'm a real fan! ! ! ! I'm so excited, let's put on a play for everyone. (Act 1) "Please come out, sir. Congratulations on graduating from high school!" (Act 2) Good news: The master of your house, Dongbao High School, ranked seventh in Asia Yuan! The Beijing News has repeatedly published Huangjia! (Act 3) Let's just read it, read it again, read it again, clapped our hands together, laughed, and said, "Oh! Okay! I'm hit!" As he said that, he fell back, clenched his teeth, and fell unconscious. (Act 4) o(o･`з･´o)ﾉ!!! - =͟͟͞͞ =͟͟͞͞ ﾍ( ´Д`)ﾉ ＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／ Moses, Moses, be full of energy! (￣▽￣)~* (Everyone, please don't be blinded by the introduction~ You can't believe a word about singles without CP. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] Come and say to me: "Don't be fooled~ He Goose and~ Lily." (Ps: Tips for getting into the trap, this book is very sharp [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh])

This book is super exciting. I finally found the Ellie I imagined. I have looked for many, many novels, but none of them have the Ellie I want. As a veteran player of Honkai Impact 3, I really like Ellie very much and feel sorry for her at the same time.

It is completely different from other fan fictions. There is no system or time travel, and it is not an inserter in a certain story. Instead, it witnesses the process from pre-civilization to modern civilization from beginning to end, and integrates the protagonist into the story. It is not like the protagonist of other fan fictions who intervenes in the development of the original world as an outsider, and has a huge sense of dissonance. It is worth watching.

The content made me feel very relaxed and happy, but also a little bit depressing (or uncomfortable, maybe because of regrets about the ending of 13 Ying Jie). The portrayal of the characters was very friendly, which made me fully feel the charm of the character Poria. Cute, smart, and emotional.

The content is super sweet, no knife yet, newcomers come quickly

The first time I heard that this novel was recommended by Tomato, it said that the plot was sweet [smile] In order to better understand the novel, I went to play Beng San. In the end, I actually felt that this novel was even worse than the official plot [face covering] Here I decided to review this book for the third time. In fact, this book is really sweet. It contains scenes of the characters living happily together. As for the sword, this one is indeed quite good for Beng San players. After all, the sense of immersion is so strong that every word of the characters and every scene can be reproduced in the mind. Reading the novel is like watching animation, which makes people feel extra real and have deeper feelings. This book is also worth reading for newcomers who don't know Bengsan. It is very good in terms of characters and plot. What it tells also brought a lot to me. I believe it can also give you a precious memory.

This collapsing fanfic is considered to be at the top of Tomatoes. Because I haven't read it on other platforms, I don't dare to exaggerate, but this book is really good-looking. The pre-civilization can be written like this and then the character of Poria can be naturally connected. As long as it doesn't collapse later, this book will definitely be considered as one of the top ranks of fan fiction. However, the author has the accumulation of the previous book, and there is a high probability that this book will not collapse (if it really collapses...) [Laughter]

Very good, just too sweet. At the end of the first volume, I wrote about Poria to death, and then told me that it was the original plot, but now it has been changed. I looked back with joy and saw that Ellie was dead. Author, do you have any new books? After reading your novel. I am short of books. I can't find any good books. Although I still have a few good books on my bookshelf, I can't stand them anymore. Those books are tasteless and it's a pity to throw them away. It seems that I am going to read your book again. If there are new books, please tell me. Old books are also fine. I feel that your writing style is not like that of a new author. You should have other accounts, right?

To be honest, this book is very good (✪▽✪). After I have read so many novels, it can be ranked in the top few or even the first one because I like Alicia very much. I don't know anything about her but I just like her. It's meaningless. In fact, I knew Alicia would not be alive since I wrote Pre-Civilization, but it was really uncomfortable to see the moment of her death. The characters were portrayed so well and she was brought into the story realistically. I was really convinced.

People will always feel lonely, and no one will never be lonely, so everyone must learn how to get along with loneliness. Over the years, we are all wandering between loneliness and getting rid of loneliness, everyone. Therefore, you have to believe that we are never alone. All people who feel the same kind of loneliness and are scarred for something are fellow travelers. "We follow the parallel lines in the dream and walk on intersecting roads." This is also what Honkai Impact 3 wants to tell us. ……… ……… (It seems like this is a book review? Tsk, I felt it, I couldn't hold it back Ahem, then, let's get back to the topic, but Honkai Impact is a high-quality, knife-free Honkai Impact Three fan novels produced by Miss Amo. In the book, readers will... I'm tired after coding for a day, but I'm still exhausted. I believe my book friends, this is definitely one of the best fan novels on Tomato. I have no regrets except that it's too sweet. Don't worry, keep it sweet. If it's not sweet, you'll stab me. )

How should I put it? This is the first book that made me feel uncomfortable after reading half of it. I haven't read this book for several months, but I still feel very depressed when I think of the protagonist and Ellie's knife. I don't want to or dare not click on it. I can't imagine what Fu Ling will become in the end. Of course, this book is still very good without the knife element [laughter]

Subjective evaluation: Here we have witnessed Poria's transformation from a girl who likes to rely on others to someone who can be relied upon by others. We have also witnessed her encounters, partings and joys and sorrows. Looking at the other protagonist, Bai Zhi, is really similar to the original Poria. Even though she has witnessed the evil of human nature, she still retains the innocence and beauty in her heart. Maybe it is because she has Fu Ling as a sister to rely on, or maybe because she is unwilling to give up her innocence. Human sensibility is perfectly reflected in Bai Zhi. Even if her relatives do something wrong, she will support it, because there is no absolute right or wrong in the world, and everything starts from emotion as the starting point. Therefore, family affection and love are Bai Zhi's top priority. You may not like such a "person", but some people also told her, "I will not ask you to be a good person, and I will not object to being a bad person." Objective evaluation: The writing style is relatively delicate. I am not very good at writing about battles. I have a larger world view and I am also good at writing about emotions. The most important thing is to witness the beauty and darkness of human nature and to turn this imperfect world into what we expect! It is said in the book that people will always change, and we witness everything. I was surprised that the ending ended in a dull way. In the end, in the new, non-collapsed world, Poria got the ending she really needed. I'm not saying that Aili is not good, she is good, better than everyone, but not suitable for anyone, her love is equally divided among everyone; even if it is a preference, it is just a preference, she will not give up all her love for a preference, but she will not give up that preference, she just did not choose him. And "Erosion", well, he only cares about Poria cocos and just wants to be with her. He can give up everything for her. This reason is enough to deserve all his love. (Here is a summary of the poisonous points. I want to talk about why Poria and Angelica are repeatedly trending and pretending to be corpses as well as the writing of reincarnation and reincarnation near the end. I feel that it is very slow or not straightforward, that is, if you die, you will die directly. The main thing is that we are really not a person like Otto who has n back-ups. Because of this, I'm sorry but I chose to end with 4 stars. )

Ellie [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] Ellie! This is the curtain call dedicated to the Thirteen Heroes. It should be grand and grand! Roast chicken! This is not a game, this is a hunt! Work hard until the end! Fight! Destroy! Burn everything! Hum hum ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

Healing novels (must read for those who love healing novels) [Shy]

The content is so sweet, super sweet

The author's ideas feel very organized, and the emotions are also very emmm, and the description is very vivid! Poria and Ai Li's unspoken love for you, the brothers' last honor, Mio Yin and You's love... But it was so strange to see Ellie leaving and little Ellie's unfinished coat! Why, why can't the tears stop flowing? 😭Although it's all for the growth of little Fuling, I feel really distressed and want to cry, TT I hope the author can continue writing, and finally found a favorite article! Keep up the good work!