Skill Editing, Starting in Naruto

After "The Master of Konoha", this is the only interesting Naruto novel I've seen. The protagonist's abilities are not exaggerated, his mind is clear, and the combat power system is not broken. The above advantages alone make it worth watching. Without saying much, just two words: reminder! ! !

It looks good. Although it only scores 8.1 Points, it's all about good looks. Unlike some books, when you see a woman, you want to steal your first wife and support your family! It's just that there are too few updates, so you can still watch it💪💪💪💪💪

A little less. (Crazy hint to the author.) Damn, did you, the author, just update a chapter? You understand what I mean.

It's a good read, but it's another novel that I've caught up with. There are already several previous ones that have been left unread for a long time due to updates, and have become moldy on the bookshelf.

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It's very good. The protagonist has an IQ, the writing is not naive, and he falls in love with every woman he sees (it's really terrible to fall in love during the war). The descriptions of the main supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood. They don't split the official roles, and the plot is not too ambitious. The author also explains the reason why the plot is not too ambitious. The plot is also written in more detail. Although it is a bit slow in some places, it also reflects the protagonist's growth and thinking process. Those who say that the protagonist is still so weak after such a long time can move to Shuangwen, where the protagonist takes off immediately.

It is very creative, the author is very imaginative and meticulous.

Generally speaking, it is good. This Naruto fanfic is not the ending of Naruto. There is no Otsutsuki Kaguya and the invasion of various Otsutsuki clan. It has its own unique story line. The writing is very good. I hope the author will have new works.

The author compiled two skills: Naruto's magic skill, one is elemental affinity and the other is elemental control. Two synthetic elemental kings or elemental controllers can combine ninjutsu, similar to Susanoo Daibutsu. This combination of skills can also reduce the consumption of one's own ninjutsu and increase the power of ninjutsu because the power of the elements should be The same thing is just because of talent, the power of Hashirama Wood Release is greater than that of Senju Tobirama. It can also increase the power according to the terrain. Later, it can control Yin and Yang Release, which is a great late-stage skill. Basically, Ninjutsu can be directly capped, leaving the body movement and defense, and then become a hexagonal warrior.

The writing is good and the plot is reasonable, but it's not very exciting. It feels inexplicably depressing. It may be a problem with the writing. I want to portray the atmosphere that the protagonist is experiencing. The protagonist setting is okay, but the skills are really boring... Maybe for me, although passive skills are more suitable for the protagonist, the combination of active skills and passive skills is more exciting... Although the kind of skills that require more time to drag out the progress bar according to the author's settings... But I still want to see more awesome skills. Is this book intended to be developed into a full-length novel and comic book? Looking at the name, I kind of want to develop it into a comprehensive comic, but the early writing seems to mean preparing Naruto as the description of the main world, and writing Naruto for a long time?