(This is about the people and things a young man encounters as he grows up and becomes stronger step by step.)
[Traditional fantasy, non-brainless and cool writing, no system]
A story from a caged place!
In a coffin, the young man strolled out, crossed the Yongye Lake that separated the two worlds, and took a mouse with him to travel across Kyushu.
How many waves will these two disaster stars stir up in this new world?
To readers: You and I are deeply involved in the story. I hope that our lives will not be shackled by the world in the book.
Reader comments
The overall story feels good. The prologue and the first few chapters directly show the world view. Some important characters and events also laid the foundation for it. I am looking forward to the appearance and encounter of these characters later.
I read about twenty chapters in one go, and it doesn't feel like the current style of online writing. It's rare, especially on Tomato🐶. It feels like I'm back in middle and high school. The class passed around those published novels that I peeked at. The foreshadowing is a bit long. It's less exciting than the white novels, but it focuses more on storytelling. I personally like it very much.
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I stayed up all night watching it, then quit and found that the author had stopped updating recently? ? ? Already five stars, please update soon! Persevere✊Ah, author. Although I guessed when I read that the author's writing style may not be suitable for this environment, but for the readers who are following the update, can you persist and persevere to break this environment? I believe there will be a miracle.
Even if you work slowly and carefully, don't stop updating.
Saying this may be a bit harmful to the author, but he is really looking forward to the following story.
——To the author
I continued to read more than 80 chapters, and the plot did not overturn. It is just that these chapters are relatively relaxed. However, the author's description in this aspect is very funny and humorous, and it is quite interesting. At least from the lines, it can be seen that the author has no water.
There must be some connection between the events that have happened and mentioned so far. Several leads should slowly ignite with the protagonist.
It's very interesting, and the more you read it, the more you become addicted to it, but it's not a traditional cool novel.
The world view is not a small one, but a small one. The dark lines are extended one by one, and then slowly converged. Therefore, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings, and I even went back and re-did some places.
At this stage, the world view has almost been revealed. The follow-up may be the world outside the Forbidden Ruins, that is, the world on the other side of the sea. Elder Zhang Yuan's lineage will not all be prophets, so go explore it hhh
I guess the protagonist has to go to the lower realm of Kyushu to experience it (fill in the pit)
Why don't many people watch it? There are many interesting places, but there is no commentary? It felt like I was watching it alone.
Maybe everyone was dissuaded by the big background story at the beginning.
The author is really slow to update. Can you finish it in one go? Don't leave this chapter to be continued! It was so uncomfortable. I had to update and refresh the previous chapters the next day.
The overall story feels good. The prologue and the first few chapters directly show the world view. Some important characters and events also laid the foundation for it. I am looking forward to the appearance and encounter of these characters later. I read about twenty chapters in one go, and it doesn't feel like the current style of online writing. It's rare, especially on Tomato🐶. It feels like I'm back in middle and high school. The class passed around those published novels that I peeked at. The foreshadowing is a bit long. It's less exciting than the white novels, but it focuses more on storytelling. I personally like it very much. ————— I stayed up all night watching it, then quit and found that the author had stopped updating recently? ? ? Already five stars, please update soon! Persevere✊Ah, author. Although I guessed when I read that the author's writing style may not be suitable for this environment, but for the readers who are following the update, can you persist and persevere to break this environment? I believe there will be a miracle. Even if you work slowly and carefully, don't stop updating. Saying this may be a bit harmful to the author, but he is really looking forward to the following story. ——To the author I continued to read more than 80 chapters, and the plot did not overturn. It is just that these chapters are relatively relaxed. However, the author's description in this aspect is very funny and humorous, and it is quite interesting. At least from the lines, it can be seen that the author has no water. There must be some connection between the events that have happened and mentioned so far. Several leads should slowly ignite with the protagonist.
It's very interesting, and the more you read it, the more you become addicted to it, but it's not a traditional cool novel. The world view is not a small one, but a small one. The dark lines are extended one by one, and then slowly converged. Therefore, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings, and I even went back and re-did some places. At this stage, the world view has almost been revealed. The follow-up may be the world outside the Forbidden Ruins, that is, the world on the other side of the sea. Elder Zhang Yuan's lineage will not all be prophets, so go explore it hhh I guess the protagonist has to go to the lower realm of Kyushu to experience it (fill in the pit) Why don't many people watch it? There are many interesting places, but there is no commentary? It felt like I was watching it alone. Maybe everyone was dissuaded by the big background story at the beginning. The author is really slow to update. Can you finish it in one go? Don't leave this chapter to be continued! It was so uncomfortable. I had to update and refresh the previous chapters the next day.