This Navy's the Real Deal: They Actually Dare to Kill Whitebeard!

Slow heat + navy + non-invincible + justice, thanks for watching.

I like the author's writing very much. It's very inspiring and makes me feel a little warm in the lonely night. Although there are a few words, I will keep pursuing it.

Beautiful, the pirate world described by the author is exactly the pirate world in my heart. I've read a lot of pirate articles on Tomato, and at least in my opinion, articles where the protagonist is a marine are generally better written than those where the protagonist is a pirate or other character. The protagonist is a marine, and it is novel and difficult to describe the world seen from this perspective. One Piece only revolves around Luffy's world, and has never given a world from the navy's perspective. In the pirate world that the author brings to us, everyone has flesh and blood, and everyone who is carefully portrayed shows a unique charm based on the original work. I unilaterally declare this to be the best pirate fanfic I have ever seen. Come on, author, happy Dragon Boat Festival! [Praise]

Among the pirate fics I read, this one is definitely in the top three. It is very real, and as the author said, it is slow but passionate. It is more immersive, and unlike other fics that are invincible and unbearable. This book can be read in one sitting. I also hope that the author will not mess up the clues later. It is too difficult to find a good book now (๑•́ω•̀๑)

The writing is very good and the subject matter is novel. It's not the kind of mindless cool article. The protagonist works hard, and Goldfinger gives it just the right amount. It's just that slow heating is not to suit most people's tastes. It would be better to change the style. Come on, author! I was really anxious to see it!

This is the only novel about One Piece that can make people cry. The author's writing style is very good, although it is positioned as a slow-burn novel, but it is very emotional to read. The section in Maple Leaf Town is both heart-wrenching and addictive to watch. It reflects the integrity of the protagonist's three views. The sentence "Roger of One Piece: Is this the world you want to see" directly makes people feel the anger in the protagonist's heart. Big boost, author. As long as this book is not too censored, I will definitely follow it to the end. The last sentence: Don't read the comments and go code quickly. Wouldn't it be good to make a code machine?

A good book. This book describes the cruelty and humanity of pirates. It is not a brainless novel. It looks at the world of pirates more rationally and tells what kind of world civilians live in. My favorite sentence in this book is "Freedom and dreams are not reasons to override other people's happiness and lives."

Let's create a character, a talent. After his family was deprived of life by those despicable navy, he became sworn in with the navy. After undergoing some kind of surgery, he relied on his life to fight the navy. He also killed many innocent people because of his grief. In the last period of his body's overdraft life, he burned up all his vitality and fought to the death with Ron. In the end, he burned out his life and Ron in the wasteful flames The "unstriked" final blow filled with his last bit of strength, and life exhausted, died, This may not be the strongest opponent Ron has ever encountered, but it is the one that left the deepest impression on him. This is also a battle between "ideas" and "ideas" I hope the author will adopt it, and I wish this book will be a hit🔥[Blow a kiss]

Great writing, very exciting! I felt like I had a fever and was in the hospital getting a sling. The doctor said I had internal heat, a fever from the inside out. I guess it was caused by reading this book, so the author bears full responsibility →_→. Our requirements are not high, just two more chapters every day. Manual dog head @Mario eats chicken breast

A real world of pirates, a story about a navy with mediocre qualifications fighting against all odds to uphold the justice in his heart. There is cruelty, passion, and unyieldingness. It reads very much like "The First Sequence". All rewards have been given. I hope the author will work hard and I will fatten him up before killing him.