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Beautiful, the pirate world described by the author is exactly the pirate world in my heart. I've read a lot of pirate articles on Tomato, and at least in my opinion, articles where the protagonist is a marine are generally better written than those where the protagonist is a pirate or other character. The protagonist is a marine, and it is novel and difficult to describe the world seen from this perspective. One Piece only revolves around Luffy's world, and has never given a world from the navy's perspective. In the pirate world that the author brings to us, everyone has flesh and blood, and everyone who is carefully portrayed shows a unique charm based on the original work. I unilaterally declare this to be the best pirate fanfic I have ever seen. Come on, author, happy Dragon Boat Festival! [Praise]

The writing is very good and the subject matter is novel. It's not the kind of mindless cool article. The protagonist works hard, and Goldfinger gives it just the right amount. It's just that slow heating is not to suit most people's tastes. It would be better to change the style. Come on, author! I was really anxious to see it!

This is the only novel about One Piece that can make people cry. The author's writing style is very good, although it is positioned as a slow-burn novel, but it is very emotional to read. The section in Maple Leaf Town is both heart-wrenching and addictive to watch. It reflects the integrity of the protagonist's three views. The sentence "Roger of One Piece: Is this the world you want to see" directly makes people feel the anger in the protagonist's heart. Big boost, author. As long as this book is not too censored, I will definitely follow it to the end. The last sentence: Don't read the comments and go code quickly. Wouldn't it be good to make a code machine?

A good book. This book describes the cruelty and humanity of pirates. It is not a brainless novel. It looks at the world of pirates more rationally and tells what kind of world civilians live in. My favorite sentence in this book is "Freedom and dreams are not reasons to override other people's happiness and lives."

A real world of pirates, a story about a navy with mediocre qualifications fighting against all odds to uphold the justice in his heart. There is cruelty, passion, and unyieldingness. It reads very much like "The First Sequence". All rewards have been given. I hope the author will work hard and I will fatten him up before killing him.

Let's create a character, a talent. After his family was deprived of life by those despicable navy, he became sworn in with the navy. After undergoing some kind of surgery, he relied on his life to fight the navy. He also killed many innocent people because of his grief. In the last period of his body's overdraft life, he burned up all his vitality and fought to the death with Ron. In the end, he burned out his life and Ron in the wasteful flames The "unstriked" final blow filled with his last bit of strength, and life exhausted, died, This may not be the strongest opponent Ron has ever encountered, but it is the one that left the deepest impression on him. This is also a battle between "ideas" and "ideas" I hope the author will adopt it, and I wish this book will be a hit🔥[Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, but there has been no emotional line since the beginning of the update. Without bragging, I can say that this book can be published as a physical book. Apart from the necessary original story line, it basically has nothing to do with the Straw Hats. The characters are very delicate and passionate [Love]

Writing Index: Five Stars Drama index: five stars Character description index: five stars Recommendation index: five stars Evaluation: This may not be the pirate world in your mind, but this is definitely the most realistic pirate book. He explains justice from a naval perspective, and the plot is reasonable, not procrastinating, and clearly organized. Personal evaluation: I really like this book. I am also an old bookworm. I have been reading novels for ten years. There are books on various websites, but I feel that this is the best and most authentic one written in One Piece. It is not a cool novel, it also has tragedy. It tells you what freedom is, and it tells you what justice is. I am also a teenager, and I used to like the freedom and wantonness of pirates, but after reading this book, I understand that freedom is never an excuse for sin. Justice will temporarily compromise the desire for power, but justice will never be absent.

Great book! ! ! The three views are very upright, and it is not a mindless article. The details and writing are excellent, a slow-burn book. Highly recommended (I've read it for more than a thousand hours, and this is the first time I've seriously written a book review. Because it deserves it!!) The author, please give me a lot of support.

It's very good, with a stable rhythm and distinctive character descriptions. The author added his own ideas to the pirates and expressed justice vividly. It's a very good novel. As long as it doesn't go off track later, it's still worth reading. It's just that there are too few chapters!

This is the most beautiful One Piece book I have ever read. It tells the story of an ordinary person's insistence on justice. The characters are very real and each character has his or her own distinctive characteristics. Great support for the author, please give me more updates [laughter][laughter]

Very good, the writing style is okay, but there is too much inner drama. It is more immersive when written this way. I like this kind of writing, but it is no longer slow-burning. It is too ink, and the plot seems to be unable to unfold and advance. The inner drama can create an atmosphere and make the drama more interesting. There is no doubt about this, but the supporting characters There are too many heart-warming stories. I am a Pirates fan, so even if I don't know a lot, I still understand it. Except for the protagonist, the others can be kept brief and sparse. The foreshadowing of the protagonist, the unfolding of the plot, and the fact that there are so many big plots in the original work combined with some of the author's own original works are not lacking in words at all. I don't understand. This pirate novel is really good, not brainless So I would like to give the author some advice Change the outline appropriately, big climax, small climax, daily life, more foreshadowing around the climax will give people a sense of anticipation, and make it easier to follow the reading. The outline should be sorted out and some foreshadowing should be laid out appropriately, in order to make some people more interested in following it. There is still too much inner drama in that sentence. If you read it, you will lose interest. It is okay if you listen to the book. I've never written a novel, so I'm just trying to make a fool of myself in front of Guan Gong. It's purely my personal opinion. Just read it, and I still support the author.

Awesome It's really great. The last time I saw such a good pirate novel, it was called One Piece: Avengers. It was the first One Piece fanfic I read. I didn't expect it to be at its peak at the beginning. I've never read such a good novel since. It's all routine and boring. Some time ago I read a book called One Piece: Steel Chain Fingers. The writing is as good as the author's. Not ky, just talking about my own reading experience. After reading this book by the author, I can honestly say that it is so immersive. It is like describing the experience of an ordinary person after coming to a new world. It is great. The author's writing is very delicate. Every character is flesh and blood, and the characters are vivid. Thank you very much to the author for allowing us to read such a beautiful book There have been a lot of trolls recently. I'm afraid it's not because my peers are jealous, but it's still five stars. How much trolls you guys flood me with, how much fans will fight back.

This is probably the best pirate fanfic I've ever read. It's not the kind where the protagonist feels invincible, but it allows readers to feel the protagonist's growth. Anyway, I really like this type of novel [Like]

It's almost impossible to see such excellent fan fiction. Every character is portrayed with flesh and blood. This is the charm of the novel. It allows us readers to have a sense of involvement and resonate. We look forward to more exciting content. I hope the author can make more. I can't get enough~ The last thing I want to say is, I rewarded you, what about you?

I like this book very much. Although it is often too sensational, it truly reflects the cruelty of the pirate world and the insignificance of human life! Many people yearn for the second dimension. That's because what they see is the strength and destiny of the children. If they are really stupid, they will not survive two episodes! For the time being, I think this book has not lost its fighting power, and the characters are more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The characters that appear in various comics are more outstanding, and the protagonist's modern justice is perfectly integrated into the time-traveled character! The author writes according to his current feeling, just don't end it badly, come on! ! The update was interrupted for two days, which was really outrageous! If you don't update it, I'll give it one star!

I have read a lot of pirate fanfics, and this book is the culmination of them. It is a super positive perspective. When we watch One Piece, we always follow Luffy's perspective. Maybe the protagonist group has not done many bad things, but how many truly free pirates are there like them, like Roger? Who else is not thinking about killing as many people as possible and doing as many bad things as they want to increase their own reputation. Every increase in the bounty means the destruction of one or even several towns or even a country. I started from the first chapter and followed it until the update was updated. After reading it, I came here to comment. There may be some flaws, but overall it is really great. Other pirate fanfics may be about taking the perspective of the protagonist group or becoming their own pirates. These authors may think that this is a better way to bring readers into the story, but this book is the first to write it from the perspective of the navy, and it is not that. It's an invincible and refreshing novel. Every character is vivid, the plot is not that protracted, and the battles are passionate. Unlike other Haiwen novels, the battles are protracted. You can never kill an enemy. Taking risks on the sea is like playing house. You can never finish talking in a fight, and you can never die. After reading this book, I really feel that this book is the best pirate fanfic I have ever read. I hope the author will write better and better, and the logic will be as reasonable as possible, so as not to live up to the expectations of our readers.

No matter what the review is, it is meaningless, as long as you know how to write well, the author of this kind of writing style does not need me to criticize him or teach him how to write. The design of the plot and the grasp of the rhythm are very good, and a certain amount of originality is added to make it not so boring for readers. But it is not completely divorced from Pirates, and the description of the details of the characters is also very good. Some stories that fill in many characters make these characters ordinary but full of flesh. Overall, it is a rare book among Tomato novels. It is a very standard masterpiece of fan fiction. Keep up the good work. Oh, by the way, and the three views created by this book are relatively correct. I don't want those distorted truths, such as using the saying that the law is nothing more than human relationships to excuse petty theft or people who go astray. Wrong is wrong. You know this is wrong, but You did it anyway, not because you were forced to do it, but because it was the easiest thing you could do at the moment. If your family needed money, you would steal it. If you were caught, you would say that you were forced to do it, and some people would even sympathize with you, looking past the appearance. In essence, stealing something for nothing is wrong. Even robbing the rich and giving to the poor is just a good deed in the name of doing good. The three views that the author has established for the protagonist through the foreshadowing of dozens of chapters are also very correct. Don't add it when reading the book. Enter your own subjective thoughts. If you have to join in, then use your brain to think carefully about the essence of the matter. What is right and wrong? The pirates are right, is the navy wrong? On the contrary, it is wrong to protect the people and wear military uniforms to be responsible for the people.

A good book, it is a slow-burning book, but believe me, if you are not a particularly impatient person, you can still read it. There are shining points and funny parts, and the idea of ​​​​this book is very much the same as mine. In the era of great pirates, we don't need the justice of Aokiji, only the justice of Akainu and Sakaski.

Brothers, this book is definitely worth reading The protagonist has a normal outlook on things. I have been looking forward to this type of book for a long time, but it just doesn't exist. I originally wanted to write it myself, but I couldn't write anything. But today I finally read it. This book is completely in line with my taste. To be honest, it made my blood boil. This kind of blood boiling has not happened for a long time. Here, I hope to get everyone's support, mainly because I want to get that title (dog head saves life) Then I want to say come on, author. I don't know about the others, but I support you very much. Then the author, come on, write more words, I really made my blood boil, but half of it was gone, wow, a basin of cold water was poured on it, and my heart was half cold.

This is a very good book, and it is not limited to the lowest level of slow-burn cool writing. Each character has different emotions. Different ideals. He is like anime, many things are very beautiful. But he also wrote about the lowest level of helplessness and the imperfection of things in real life, just like nothing in the world is perfect and there are always flaws. The justice of the protagonist, the bravery of Flame Mountain, and other fellow pirates, they wrote about the happiness, carefree and freedom of pirates. But at the same time, we forgot one thing, a thief is a thief, and it will never change. We only saw adventurers wearing pirate hats, but I didn't see pirates wearing adventurers. The evil of the Celestial Dragons is limited to a small number of people, while the evil of the pirates is equivalent to the entire world. If the only way to get rid of the Celestial Dragons is to fight violence with violence, then this action should also be done by the navy. The evil of pirates cannot be replaced by passionate dreams to cover up the fact that they destroy lives.

This is the most realistic pirate world I have ever seen. Others are describing the freedom and dreams of pirates, but no one cares about the sacrifices behind them. Behind freedom and dreams are piles of fresh lives.

The writing is really good. It expresses my dissatisfaction with justice and allows me to see pure evil and delayed justice. It is not qualified to be called justice. It can at most be considered as compensation. The author's writing is really good. Some people always say that he is stupid, but he doesn't write any details and just writes the outline. Then don't you have to shake your head after reading it? Not to mention a masterpiece, at least it can be regarded as a masterpiece. (I don't care about those cool articles, but for such a good novel, it is best to have only one heroine, or at most two heroines. I don't want to have a harem, otherwise it will be ruined if it collapses. Moreover, the heroine is not a yy, but writes emotional dramas, and is more daily life with the heroine)

First of all: the characterization is very vivid and exciting, with flesh and blood, and clear priorities! Second: The three views are very correct, the structure is clear, the plot is compact, and full of passion! Third: It's not majestic, it's not procrastinating, and the writing is very good. Although some people may think it's a middle-of-the-road novel, I think this is the kind of novel that should be promoted! Fourth: Although there is a system, the system only provides auxiliary functions, and it is more the efforts of the protagonist. Although it is a plug-in, he will only appear when the system is really needed! Fifth: The combat power setting is very good. The combat power will not collapse until the ending. Everyone's combat power is so balanced, and no one is deliberately belittled or improved! In a word, Bibo is burning! It's very beautiful! It's very passionate!

It's not me who says that this pirate novel is really beautiful. The details of the characters, the expression of emotions, and the layered content of the article are very good. The writing is very real and vivid, and the plot is tense and exciting. It is the best pirate fanfic I have ever read. Although the author likes Kawen a little, but the author writes seriously, I will always support you.

Realistic, without too many exaggerated, funny and brainless plots. But the incomparable truth is often very touching. The plot content is very rich, and the description of people's hearts is very real and beautiful. The old bookworm said that it is not a loss to enter the trap. Although I understand you because you write less, I still can't help but urge you to update.

Yes, it's very good. In my opinion, it can be said to be the ceiling for all pirate fans. It can be regarded as a classic. He describes the dark side of pirates that we don't understand. The bloody side is different from other cool articles that have just mentioned it. I think it is very good. I felt this way last time. It was still the same book I Killed Gods in a Mental Hospital. At that time, it had only been updated to more than 20 chapters. I just thought it was very good and thought it was good. The comments suggested that it should be made into a movie and TV show. It has a very graphic feel, and it became popular not long after. Although there is still a big gap between the two. But just the depiction of this dark side is great, and that's what I like. . . . . . . Be honest. Then things started to go wrong. But it's still good, and it's enough to watch in the entire Pirates series.

It is a high-quality pirate fanfic. The protagonist has his own world view and three views. He does not rigidly follow the system tasks and has his own unique personality. Unlike those pirate fanfics that only follow the system tasks to kill and kill.

The subject matter of this book is very good, and the author's writing style is also very good. I hope the author can let us see a different world of pirates. Moreover, the author is also very busy. He has to do this and that every day, but does it have anything to do with me? It doesn't matter, so the author hurry up and code Come on, come on, the author's writing is really good, but you must also pay attention to your health.

It's great to feel stronger step by step like this. It's not the kind of invincible novel where you can easily increase your combat power. It's very good. I look forward to the official plot slowly unfolding in the future. I would like to make a suggestion. Since the main character is about physical walking, can the author use "Star Travels, Miron II - Bajitian"? It's very cool! And there are also weapon moves that can make up for the protagonist's shortcomings! ! !