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The score of 8.8 Is on the low side. Old bookworms will probably like it more. The rhythm is relatively slow and not too exciting, but it is not too abusive. Overall, everything is relatively average. It should be considered a breath of fresh air among the tomatoes that are full of poisonous weeds, and it is more attractive. In addition, I am afraid that the author will enter the palace. Judging from the progress of the novel, this book will be very long. This rating is really intolerable. It's because of fetal force.

The book is very good, and the routines alternate between old and new ones. It would be nice to update it more quickly.

The author is great. The protagonist is calm and wise, decisive in killing, and the plot is compact and reasonable. You can't stop the car at first glance, and it gradually gets better. It's a very good book

As a mortal, this book is very well written and the plot is intertwined. What surprises me is that not many people are reading this book. Maybe it has a relatively small number of words.

I read it in one sitting, except for a few parts that were a bit outrageous. Overall, the writing is pretty good. I especially like the character and outlook of the protagonist. The rhythm of the plot is also very reasonable. It is one of the few excellent cultivation novels in Tomato.

It's good to watch, but the progress to the golden elixir feels too fast. It's not good to be the heroine every time, but it's okay. It's not a lot of times. It's better to be around the male protagonist more, otherwise it feels like the heroine's presence is too low. Overall, it's pretty good. It's much better than one person and one dog taking my sister as a task. Come on. I take back what I said before, why don't you just change it to not having a female protagonist? It's really getting more and more irritating the more I watch it, the female protagonist can be considered the heroine even if she's not by the male protagonist's side? What is the difference between meeting the heroine once in each volume and visiting relatives once during the Chinese New Year? Deleted bye

The writing is very interesting and refreshing. It opens up a new field compared to the previous novels about cultivating immortals.

The author writes well and I read it carefully. It is a very good book. I support it.

I've read almost seven hundred chapters, and I feel pretty good. A relatively standard mortal flow, there is a lot of content that can resonate. According to the author, this is the first time he has written such a novel. To be able to reach such a level, it seems that he has a lot of background. The author probably has played MUD games before. You can see the shadow of MUD everywhere in the article. There are almost no fighting scenes, but there are plenty of psychological descriptions and other related background explanations. At the beginning of the 500th chapter, I guess it was due to the pressure of writing, and the typos gradually became more frequent, but after more than 600 chapters, the typos improved again, and it seemed that I was writing smoothly. Even the punctuation marks are still so arbitrary, and one sentence is often divided into two paragraphs. I hope it will become more exciting in the future and attract more readers.

It's really good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I love the main character and I have a similar personality.

So far, it's pretty good. I hope the author won't be too slow for the sake of slow-burning (to make up the word count, the text is wrong). I've recently read several novels about cultivating immortals. They all started well but became verbose after more than 200 chapters. I am very optimistic about this book now, and I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it every day. !!! Why is Ling'er's death related to the two body cultivators? Could it be that I saw it too quickly and missed some details?

Great book! Write about the warmth and warmth of human relationships and conflicts of interest. Immortals are like mortals competing for profit, fighting wits and courage, with rich content and grand scenes. Even though I haven't finished writing yet, I've already seen the light of gold and jade. It's fascinating and I can't stop...

Not bad, a book about cultivating immortals that people can read. Too much taking off pants and farting

Watching it slowly, at least I don't make too many mistakes. The plot is well conceived, and the character portrayal is a bit tired despite being ordinary.

It is very well written. It describes the world of cultivating immortality in my mind and the difficulty of seeking the Tao. This is very true.

After reading almost 500 chapters, the author's writing style is as meticulous as the main idea of ​​the article. It's a very bland story. I usually practice and upgrade. Although there is a female protagonist, they are not together yet, and the female protagonist rarely appears. But it's understandable, because the emotional drama is not heavy. This is the most special fairy tale I have ever seen. The protagonist is only herself, with no partners or friends. The heroine is one, but she dies in the middle and she doesn't know when she will be reborn. The protagonist is only herself along the way. Everyone who has met him basically understands the cause and effect immediately. This is very good for a fairy tale! It's not a cool novel, it's the kind of novel that grows slowly step by step, with a slow pace, and it only describes the protagonist's situation, and there are even very few dialogues. So for me, who likes to watch more emotional dramas, it has been very hard to persist until this point. We are already a third of the way through, and the heroine doesn't have many supporting roles. Although there is no ambiguity, I still like to see the male and female protagonists grow up together, so I won't read it! But the author's writing style is really special and unique! If you don't pursue emotional drama or have a complicated plot, you can choose to watch it. A down-to-earth article on cultivating immortality!

As a bookworm for more than ten years, this book captures the essence of ordinary people. The characters are cautious, thoughtful, and determined to survive. It is very possible for this type of protagonist to reach the top with some luck, which is reasonable. Unlike some mindless cool articles, it is really infuriating to try to die dozens of times without dying. In reality, only such people can transcend social classes and become relatively successful. It is similar to Mayfly Little Loose Cultivator and Tower of the Void. It should at least be rated as a mid-to-high-grade book. Unfortunately, most of the current readers are young and like to read refreshing stories that are mindless and reckless, so I gave this book a low score. I think this book deserves 9.5 Points. This novel is wonderful! Mortal Stream is very well written, but why is the score so low? Is it because there are no gifts? Could it be that the author, like the protagonist, only knows how to cultivate immortality (to improve his writing skills) and is not very proficient in human relations? Has he offended the Tomato anchor?

I have read almost 500 chapters. It is very well written and comfortable to read. I also like the protagonist's character and approach. The growth history of the little person who cultivates immortality is meticulous and smooth. There are only two points that I am not very satisfied with. First: In the world of immortality, there are no less killings and seizing. Why can't spiritual roots be used to replenish the protagonist's useless spiritual roots once in each realm [thinking] or what will be said in the future [something], second: there is no hot blood period at present, fierce battles are all narrative stories, but it seems good like this [making a face]

This real thing is really good, I recommend everyone to take a look (≧∇≦*) Wait, why did I get it wrong again? This voice

Yes, it describes the hardships of the little people very penetratingly.

The language is witty, IQ is online, fascinating, you can't stop, good writing

A good book, worth reading, the plot is very detailed. Not bad, the author will take a break and update later. I think this novel is a cross between the traditional cultivation of immortality and that of mortals. It's a bit like mortals cultivating immortality, but also a bit of traditional cultivation.

It's good to watch. The first part is indeed too slow and the pace is very slow, but the writing is good and there are no awkward parts. The author also knows that he has been unable to suppress the protagonist's strength in the middle and later stages. It is not so slow, but it is a bit unreadable.

Very pretty! It's a bit verbose, but just skip it! The outlook on life is pretty normal. There are no harem stallions or the like. There are not all bad people in the world, but there are also many good people! On this platform, it is considered an excellent work! Give five stars for encouragement and wish the author to write more excellent works!

It's very interesting, but there are some points where you can't jump to read, otherwise you'll suddenly be confused.

From newbie to skilled to seasoned. It's a little interesting if you take your time. I give you 4 stars for encouragement. I hope you will continue to work hard and write better and better.

Absolutely! The author is excellent, the words are cliché but the writing style is brilliant

Don't rush to read the recommendation. It's not a manual recommendation. This book was written by the author in his spare time. The center may have shifted in the middle and it's not very clear. First of all, the plot is reasonable and there is no big harem. The writing is very good, and the plug-ins are really ordinary. The fighting strength has not collapsed. Different from the current Shuangwen, I give it 9.8 Points, although he only has 8.8. Summary: It will be fun if you read it patiently. If you like the fun article, you can leave it.

Breaking past inertial thoughts, it is no longer an easy way to cultivate immortality by walking around with golden elixirs. The two hundred and six chapters tell you the difficulty of building a foundation and the difficulty of cultivating immortality. There may be some places that are not very good, but after making do with it, you will find that it is really good. To reach the extreme is not boring. The ordinary road is at your feet, and standing at the top is inevitable.

It's well written, I hope you can keep up the good work and keep it exciting.