Fantasy Ping-Pong

Very good subject matter. But this is probably the author's first time writing a novel. The dialogue writing is very white. Moreover, this table tennis skill and martial arts inheritance are learned very quickly, and it seems that there is less effort. Then there is also a sense of immediate vision of a divine writer. I hope the author will improve the details of table tennis sparring and should not omit them. Because both the title and your main subject matter have the word "ping pong" in them. Most of the people who come here to watch are people playing table tennis, and they all want to find a feeling. Hope you can adopt my opinion. Thanks.