Full Time*******

Love it, love it, why doesn't it get a score of 9.5 Or above? I didn't expect Tomato to have a fan of a full-time mage. The author wrote it in big letters and I really don't like it [Like] [Like] If the author can see this comment, can the original chapter where Mo Fan saves Tang Yue and obtains the spiritual seed be changed into the protagonist saving Tang Yue? ... Although it's a bit far-fetched, the plot of the original work is too bloody [Thinking], the protagonist's "sister" is best saved by the protagonist, or the fire spirit seed can be given to the protagonist. To strengthen it, the fire spirit seed can also be changed into dark matter. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] In short, I am a little disgusted with this plot of the original work. If you can use this to become a double heroine, that would be even better [laughing evilly] [shy] Come on, author, this novel will definitely become the originator of Tomato's full-time mage fanfic! ! ! [Love][Admiration] The original work mainly played a trick on Mo Fan in Lu Nian. The protagonist is a person who does not exist in the original work. It feels that it has little impact on the original world. Mo Fan is still a demon. He is alive as he should be alive, and is gone as he should be. The original work mentions this section of Mu. Ning Xue was going to get married, but Mo Fan saved her so it took time. The heroine of this book should be Mu Ningxue. The great opportunity to enhance their relationship was wasted. This paragraph can become a small climax. The protagonist and Lu Nian are older. The battle, whereabouts are unknown, Mo Fan still swallows the soul. If written like this, it will not affect the subsequent plot, and it will also enhance the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Otherwise, it will be difficult to have anything other than the original work. Since the protagonist has returned to the academy, you can arrange a period for him to go back to Mo Fan, and open a small hook for him, let the magic knife absorb part of the demon's soul, and then help Mu Ningxue block the marriage. It may be a bit fresh [Thoughts] (If there are any mistakes, please do not comment, just my personal thoughts [Send my heart] [Send my heart])

The plot is OK, but I hope Mo Fan's settings don't deviate too much from the original version. It feels a bit strange to deviate too much (personal feeling) and the two most important points are: update it quickly (just work hard, don't be lazy); don't have too many female protagonists, the best one can do it, if it's really not possible, at most two, but one of them will be treated as a sister╮( •́ω•̀ )╭

It's quite good, at least better than the novels I read online now. All of them are starting a harem. The author begs you, don't start a harem. Aran's character cannot be ruined! Well, after reading it for so long, I always feel that it starts to get boring towards the end of the writing, but the book is still worth reading. [Sinister smile]

Write quickly, although the rating is not high, it's okay!

Must praise! I have played "Versatile Mage" three times! Listen to it again, watch it again and remember it again! The kind that never fails to finish three thousand chapters! Fans must praise it! Hehe, the world view of "Versatile Mage" is huge! Come on! (PS: Is Tang Qi going to Pearl Academy? The second series is summoning? Astraea's Night Knight is so handsome!) Actually, when it comes to the heroine, I think Mu Nujiao is more suitable, because Mu Ningxue must be the official wife. Moreover, Mu Nujiao's character feels more in line with the image of the heroine, because Mu Nujiao is essentially a cold and arrogant goddess. But after Mu Ningxue fused with the Ice Crystal Evil Bow, she turned into a big ice cube! If it weren't for Mo Fan's shameless naivety, it felt like Mu Ningxue would never love her again. And everyone who has read the original work knows that Mu Ningxue is not strong, she is the heroine, she is the strongest. The reason why Mo Fan was able to win Mu Ningxue's heart was not because he was strong (although he ate cattle) but because he always stood with Mu Ningxue. They trusted each other and loved each other deeply. But! ! ! The reason why Mo Fan was able to get close to Xuexue and melt her heart was because he was confident enough and shameless😂 But! ! ! The protagonist's character is very cold at first glance. Oh my God, two ice cubes are together 😂 I really hope, forget it, I've written so much and I probably can't change it. Leave it five stars, I won't read it, hehehe😁

It's a very nice fanfic. I've read more fanfics about the full-time mage. This is the most innovative one. Others will just follow the same plot, but this book adds other diverse factors of my own imagination. It is unique even if it is not added systematically. It's just a bit short, anyway, come on, author

The rhythm is good, I like it better. Personally, I think if I keep writing like this, as long as I don't bring chicken soup to me to drink, it won't be a big problem to kill the fanfic.

This is the most exquisite full-time mage fanfic I have ever read. The opening chapter uses a lot of ink to describe the protagonist's life experience, and then gradually outlines the protagonist's childhood. Unlike most fan fiction, the life experience and childhood life are not mentioned in one stroke, and it goes directly to high school. Mu Ningxue did not fall in love with the protagonist at first sight. Pig's Foot is also different from most fan fiction characters. Compared with them, the author's Pig's Foot does not make nasty remarks, nor does it look like he has not seen a woman for hundreds of years. Although it only has about twenty chapters, it is very interesting to read. Finally, I hope the author will keep this novel from dying and keep writing it - as long as it keeps updating, it doesn't matter how fast it is updated:-) I hope Sister Tangyue will be the heroine hahaha ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*)

It's a wonderful novel, but I just can't get enough of it. I hope the author will update it soon. Come on.

Come on, author, write well. I personally feel pretty good. For other perspectives. I just want to say that we are all human after all and not perfect. I just hope you can keep up with the update speed, otherwise it will really crash.

The plot is good, and it is not the kind of flashy and exciting article. It should be easy to avoid being uncomfortable when it should be saved. It is a relatively novel article that directly integrates into the world instead of traveling through time. It is very interesting. The writing style is slightly lacking but it is still reasonable. It is readable and the thoughts are not cluttered. But I still don't understand the shadow system. Can it really only be used in the shadow? Why not give the protagonist a double-purpose talent? Anyway, the dual talents are already very strong. The protagonist has mastered himself to absorb the dark elements. Why not also practice flying knives, that is, almost controlling the mind with the dark elements, slashing with one knife, the blades scattering in the sky, and then come back to form a knife, etc. I hope you can imagine more.

To be honest, my eyes lit up when I saw a fanfic with a full-time mage in Tomato, but as the plot develops, I feel that as for the female protagonist, I prefer no female protagonist or the female protagonist is Tang Yue. As for Miss Mu, I personally feel that it is not good to steal Mo Fan's eldest wife. However, the plot and protagonist setting of this book are very good. I would like to give five stars to support the author.

This is the best full-time mage fanfic that I have seen so far that describes the emotions between characters. This alone can give me five stars. I won't go into other bonus points. Finally, I hope the author is in good health and doesn't stop updating.

Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good [Blow a kiss] [Cherish it carefully]

It looks good, but the author is lacking and needs to make up for it.

This book is quite good. The author wrote it slowly and did not seek quantity over quality. Although I very much hope that the author can publish more updates, I am afraid of the author's writing. Hey, I hope that it will not die prematurely - well, if it is not punished (I found a strange thing about this book, that is, some people will maliciously give negative reviews. Even if this book is not to the appetite of some normal people, it will not be rated one. Everyone understands) It's still one sentence. I'll update it slowly. I'll update it after I think about it and write it. The subject matter is very good.

Come on, author, I read Luan Pang's book when I was very young, and I even read the book "The Versatile Mage" straight away. It's a sentiment and a memory of the past. It's well written and not brainless, and there's nothing outrageous about the plot. All in all, it's a very good fanfic, but it's very slow to update. . .

I think it's very interesting, but it's a bit short. I finished it in one go.

Not bad! Come on, author! I have long wanted to read a fanfic of Demon Sword Thousand Blades in Full Time.

It's very interesting. I hope I can write it to the end.

It's good to read. I feel like there are too few Tomato Master novels. It would be better if the author published less songs [Like]

This is the best fanfic I have ever read, keep it up! It's still good to gain a wave of points, but it's just to gain points, otherwise the copyright will be pursued.

Very beautiful, I hope I don't suffer from amnesia

The writing is very good. The Thousand Blades of the Demon Sword has been integrated very well so far, and the plot is good. As an old bookworm who has been following the book Versatile Mage since it first came out (well, I have been following it for 4 or 6 years), I think this book is quite well written. Recommend

I think the character of the male protagonist is well written! But what do you think is the shortcoming? The protagonist seems to be at ease all the time, so there are less highlights and some very difficult battles can be added. Last but not least, please be sure to update more. It's not enough to read, the author, don't imitate Sanjiu! ! !

It's a fan fiction, directly canonizing the gods, it's really good, I like it very much.

Alas, after searching for so long, I finally have a French fanfic that suits my taste. Come on, author, don't be banned [Like][Like][Like]

A good novel, at least better than most of this software

Overall, it's a bit immature, but you can tell that the author wrote it carefully, keep up the good work! I hope the author can continue to break through himself, improve his abilities, and bring us more exciting articles!

I can still watch all the French fics. Really good