[Transmigrate Into a Game + System + Sweet Romance + Goofy Comedy + 1v1 + Cultivation + Fantasy]
Luo Yunxi was thrown into a cultivation game by its customer service System after she complained about it, all so she could try it out for herself.
Other people transmigrate into the roles of wealthy heiresses or domineering queens. She, on the other hand, became a cannon-fodder character destined to be killed off before the ending.
Since she and the male lead were never meant to be, she might as well focus on making money.
So while the main cast went to cultivate at the Heavenly Dao Academy, she gathered herbs.
While they went on training expeditions, she sold pills.
While they fell in love and got together, she stole monsters from under their noses.
At the cultivation tournament, the good-for-nothing queen Luo Yunxi takes first place and finally escapes the curse of having to win over the male lead. But why is the man below the stage kneeling before her on one knee?
Luo Yunxi: “What’s with the male lead in this cultivation game? Why does he keep throwing himself at me?”
Well, how can I put it, give it five stars to give some encouragement, and I suggest you read more works with a score of 9.0 Or above. Also, after dying twice and practicing Taoism twice, I think the heroine will first want to become an immortal, and then counterattack, instead of just wanting to make money. Also, I think the heroine will If you feel a chill in your heart, you can use descriptive actions and thoughts to express it. For example, Xiao Ling lowers his head, with a trace of sarcasm and self-deprecation flashing in his eyes, thinking to himself, ha, this is the male protagonist who wants to eat shit. A toad wants to eat swan meat. Also, you can write about the efforts of the heroine and how you must be disgusted with the hero. It is not recommended to write about bugs that eat food, um, a vicious female counterpart. You can't just show the surface, but also have a certain psychological description. The heroine has too much psychological description, so reduce it appropriately and replace it with more expressions and actions.
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It's too ugly to watch. The content puts the cart before the horse and the details are inappropriate. The female characters and passers-by are described in detail, and key events and characters are not highlighted enough.