[Through the game + system + sweet pet + sand sculpture + 1v1 + cultivating immortals + fantasy]
Luo Yunxi was thrown into the game experience by the customer service system because she complained about a game about cultivating immortals.
People who travel through time are either rich or domineering queens, but she just becomes the cannon fodder who will be killed in the end.
Since she has no chance to meet the male protagonist, she might as well make money honestly.
So, when the protagonist group went to Tiandao Academy to cultivate immortality, she was digging for medicinal herbs.
When the protagonist group went to experience, she was selling pills.
While the protagonists were having sex with each other, she was robbing the monsters.
In the Immortal Cultivation Conference, the good-for-nothing Queen Luo Yunxi won the first prize in one fell swoop and finally escaped the curse of conquering the male protagonist. But what was the man in the audience doing kneeling down in front of her?
Luo Yunxi: What's wrong with the male protagonist of this immortality game? He always wants to turn against me!
Reader comments
Well, how can I put it, give it five stars to give some encouragement, and I suggest you read more works with a score of 9.0 Or above. Also, after dying twice and practicing Taoism twice, I think the heroine will first want to become an immortal, and then counterattack, instead of just wanting to make money. Also, I think the heroine will If you feel a chill in your heart, you can use descriptive actions and thoughts to express it. For example, Xiao Ling lowers his head, with a trace of sarcasm and self-deprecation flashing in his eyes, thinking to himself, ha, this is the male protagonist who wants to eat shit. A toad wants to eat swan meat. Also, you can write about the efforts of the heroine and how you must be disgusted with the hero. It is not recommended to write about bugs that eat food, um, a vicious female counterpart. You can't just show the surface, but also have a certain psychological description. The heroine has too much psychological description, so reduce it appropriately and replace it with more expressions and actions.
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It's too ugly to watch. The content puts the cart before the horse and the details are inappropriate. The female characters and passers-by are described in detail, and key events and characters are not highlighted enough.
Well, how can I put it, give it five stars to give some encouragement, and I suggest you read more works with a score of 9.0 Or above. Also, after dying twice and practicing Taoism twice, I think the heroine will first want to become an immortal, and then counterattack, instead of just wanting to make money. Also, I think the heroine will If you feel a chill in your heart, you can use descriptive actions and thoughts to express it. For example, Xiao Ling lowers his head, with a trace of sarcasm and self-deprecation flashing in his eyes, thinking to himself, ha, this is the male protagonist who wants to eat shit. A toad wants to eat swan meat. Also, you can write about the efforts of the heroine and how you must be disgusted with the hero. It is not recommended to write about bugs that eat food, um, a vicious female counterpart. You can't just show the surface, but also have a certain psychological description. The heroine has too much psychological description, so reduce it appropriately and replace it with more expressions and actions.
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It's too ugly to watch. The content puts the cart before the horse and the details are inappropriate. The female characters and passers-by are described in detail, and key events and characters are not highlighted enough.