
Building a Mobile Suit from the Start, I Leave the Land of Light Stunned
开局打造机动奥,惊呆光之国
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- 705k Words
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- 4y ago
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So far, there are no bugs in this book, and the author's writing style is also good. Of course, I personally feel that there are some cheats. Everything else is great 👍. 5 Stars is a must. Well, after thinking about it, I'd like to give you some personal advice. The protagonist's strength should be a little faster. I also personally think that the armor's light skill is a bit high. And finally, the system gives the protagonist something. Can the author give some explanation at the end of the chapter and where it comes from? Otherwise, people will have to search online, which is a bit troublesome😭
Awesome, the author will change the site as soon as possible, please remember to let me know
I can't understand it, but I'm shocked I haven't watched much of the arcade games, and almost all the ultra games, so that's all I can do. It made me confused, many things I couldn't understand, and even confused me. So it's the author, please work hard
Very beautiful, give the new author five stars
This book is relatively unique among the fanfics I have read.
It's very interesting, with unique ideas. I've read many books that use system or plug-in transformers. Only the one you wrote uses plug-ins to create drawings. There are very few books like this that are self-made or original.
The book is very good, so I won't make any comments. The only comment I want to make is that I think we can give the protagonist an Ultraman, or let the protagonist make a mobile Ultraman that can become huge, or make a Gundam. To put it simply, let the protagonist become bigger and fight.
The book is very interesting and the subject matter is novel [laughs] Personally, I feel that there is no problem in changing to the same Ultraman or becoming bigger. It is good to build a machine body and follow the mechanical army style. It is also good to build a giant space battleship (a space fortress is also acceptable) as a mobile (forward) base for future time and space travel to provide early warning and fire support when necessary, and a one-stop service for mining, production and maintenance. It's cool to see some teams' bases. To hide the base in a different dimension, you can directly call the base AI to throw whatever body you want to use. Different monsters use different bodies or throw them in a bunch and control them by the AI or develop an artificial intelligence system to have a righteous group fight.
It's been a while since I watched it, and I personally feel good about it. There's no big problem. I just feel that the emergence of large-scale mechas is too slow, and all they build are small mechas, and it's impossible for White Flash to use it all the time. All the authors put a Bull Gundam or a Unicorn. If that's really not possible, they can also put a Yuanzu ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )✧
Five stars, nothing to say. From the time I first opened the book until now, the author's writing style, plot, and character descriptions are all very good. Finally, I want to say, can the author write a few more chapters? It's not enough [face covering] Dear author, I still want to think about it. The recent chapters are a bit too mechanical, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. Mainly in terms of character creation and plot development, it's a bit too strong. It would be better if it could be worked on a little bit.