Qin Dynasty**********

The content, style, and artistic conception are still as good as ever Colorful butterflies fly with wings, walking on the moon in search of plum blossoms Wild geese and butterflies have wings, and the fragrance of flowers fills the world That light blue note, carrying the faint fragrance of tulips that has not been stained by dust for thousands of years since ancient times, gently stretches in the depths of our memories. What can never be forgotten is that face that is untouched by wind and frost. It has always been here, within the intensity that our lives can bear.

The book is a good book, and it has created a handsome young man and handsome thief who behaves freely and freely. I would like to make some suggestions. In fact, I feel that I don't need to analyze so much when choosing. For example, if I choose the Lingxi finger section, if I like it and it suits me, I don't need to think about it, right? I also analyzed a section that felt a bit redundant. My personal opinion, it's well written.

Wc, good-looking, author yyds (single forever)

It's well written and the characters are well drawn! The plot is reasonable and has foreshadowing. It doesn't give people a very abrupt feeling. The fate of many characters has been rewritten. This is good, very nice! But I still feel that the First Emperor is still dead, which is a bit regretful (the author needs it for the plot, so I can understand it), but I haven't seen this boy's songs (embarrassing [laughing]). The boy who finished the story also buried Wu Gengji's trap. To be honest, Wu Gengji didn't feel very easy to write. Divine power, characters, underworld, gods, Qi skills, great swordsman, and there are many characters. It seems that there are quite a lot of girls, and there are many involved. I hope the author can write well!

From the title and cover, you can tell that this is a book that will make LSPs ecstatic, but I also like it very much. Evergreen, I will write more in the future. Am I the one who lacks that traffic? , Don't hide it, tell it in detail, I believe LSPs think the same way. (Of course I am not an LSP, I just want to give girls all over the world a warm home. [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]) Last Evergreen YYDS

I have read "Qin Shi's Thirteen Deadly Swords at the Beginning" before. This book is very good and awesome. The author of novels such as Qin Shi, originally written by Tomato, can be called the first author. I support the author and hope that the author can update it quickly. I can't get enough of it [laughing][laughing]

Although it has just begun, it is enough to give a glimpse of the leopard and make it everlasting.

A rare masterpiece in fan fiction! Other fanfics are basically mindless harems, which makes people's outlook completely ruined! My favorite character is Zi Nu. Anyone who has watched Tian Xing Jiu Ge basically knows that Zi Nu is very mysterious. She doesn't know her origins or even her real name. Of course, some people on the Internet guess that she is from the Yin Yang family... I hope the author can add more words to Zi Nu.

This is definitely a time travel, system, comic world, unlimited flow of the best, 10 masterpieces, a rare good book, worth recommending, don't enter if you are disgusted with harems

I always believe in you and look forward to your wonderful stories

This is the first book I have reviewed on Tomato. I have made an exception for you, the author, because your writing suits my taste! The author's last book was about swordsmanship, and this one can be completely different. After all, the martial arts that reflect the protagonist's handsomeness include more than just swordsmanship. For example, the Thirty-Six Luqi I mentioned before, Li Chenzhou's version is about boxing, and the protagonist can integrate other martial arts into it.

Li Changqing is nb I have enjoyed reading several of them, starting with "The First Sword of the Qin Dynasty", which was the first Qin Shi Mingyue novel I read, and the second one, "Tian Ling Gen", but why aren't they newer? This one is also very nice! ! Must be five stars! ! !

This is a review written with less than 100 chapters. How should I put it? I came here after reading The First Sword Under Heaven. I have to say that this book is not as good as I imagined. It is much worse than The First Sword Under Heaven. Even the narration and writing in some places are far inferior to that one. Maybe that book is the pinnacle of Evergreen? Reading this book sometimes gave me the feeling that I had changed the author. The characterization of the characters was not very good, and some parts even looked embarrassing. But I still gave it five stars. The five stars are for Chang Qing. I will continue to read this book. I hope Chang Qing will work hard.

It's perfect, it feels romantic and chic, and it feels like it wrote our childhood dreams😍😍😍

I particularly like Changqing. Apart from anything else, I also love the two updates, not to mention the writing is pretty good.

Very nice, thank you to the author

I just read the beginning and was hooked. It's great. Kudos to the author.

A very good novel, the protagonist is well described, and every action is written in detail. With the system, you are not immediately invincible, but become more powerful as you go later. The protagonist's personality is also the kind of demeanor that is sometimes dissolute and sometimes handsome. He has many beauties, is not unable to walk after seeing women, and is not a virgin. He has the memory of the Qin Dynasty and the moon. In this era, the protagonist can strategize and control his own destiny. This is a very good novel, highly recommended. . . . .

The author writes so well! I haven't seen such a good time-travel novel in a long time! The plot follows the original work, each world has a thorough understanding, unique insights, detailed character descriptions, and a happy ending in each world! The description of the fighting style ranges from martial arts to fantasy, and Shuangdian has it just right. I have learned the essence of fighting monsters and upgrading. The protagonist is three-dimensional, decisive in killing, and has an overall view. However, there is too little world travel. There are still many interesting Chinese comics and two-dimensional worlds to write about. Reading the whole book, although there are some flaws, for example, the life span of the new generation of gods in the Wugeng era is about three hundred years, and the holy king level can be hundreds of years longer, but the author writes that the great god Liuyue of Yube can live for tens of thousands of years; the ancient gods were killed by the Black Dragon Sky 100,000 years ago, and the new gods, except for the Angel Saint King, were all created by the black dragons using the divine energy of the ancient gods to combine with human bodies. They are considered new species and are not descendants of the ancient gods. If the author opens a new book, please learn more about the background setting of the world he travels through. Come on! Looking forward to your new book!

Evergreen old thief, if your health is better, I will update it soon, it's not enough! The ending of Sword Fairy is a bit rushed! This book is better written, but the daily update of 2 pages is a little bit short. Can you update 2 more pages?

This book is very interesting. The overall concept and writing are excellent. It is not boring to read. It is very touching and makes you unable to help but keep reading. It can be said to be the best book I have read in Tomato in the past few months. It can be seen that the author has thoroughly researched the Nine Songs of Tianxing. From the martial arts, it can also be seen that the author likes martial arts. This book can be said to be a semi-masterpiece. Recommendation number five stars Rating 9.4 Points

Great, this is the second Qin Shi novel I've read that can be called a masterpiece (mainly because it makes me feel good about "recording videos"!)

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update, because I I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up, I will update. No water, nothing is a problem, I am with you loyal readers Wait, I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and profound, without being polite. I said angrily, if you were included in the article, you would be an experienced interpreter Reader, I am the audience who enjoys the video. Your performance has arrived. Fascinating realm. Just like Jian Han watching. "Leohard's Fifteen" The status of "Day" is the same. If you watch one more episode, you will lose one less episode. If you want to watch it, I couldn't bear to part with it, and my contradictory and complicated feelings drove me crazy. I'm just a bored idler, aimlessly clicking on this short article Said, I didn't have the mood to finish reading him, but you succeeded and made me "Half" is finished. Now, I can only sigh with emotion! Only, in Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. Fortunately, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to your every A "next chapter."

It's very good. It's a rare good article written by Qin Shitong. All the women who should be included are included. The emotional arrangements are reasonable and the narrative plot is natural and smooth. My only dissatisfaction is that once I started traveling to other worlds, it became boring and boring, so I stopped watching it.

Evergreen old thief, I must support it, and this book is really good. Countless words flashed in my mind, but at this moment, I don't know what to say to describe the wonderfulness of this book.

It's from The First Sword of Great Qin. It's worth reading. The author's writing is good.

When I first read Gu Long, I fell in love with Jin Yong's novels and the martial arts genre. The bandit commander in "Chu Liuxiang" has an ecstatic demeanor. He is elegant, wise, courageous, calm, fastidious, and elegant. I have read many works with Pirate Commanders, and it is more appropriate to refer to the author's Pirate Commanders.

Shy, charming, mature and charming, with fair collarbones, concave and convex curves, slender waist, and straight and graceful legs. Dressed in red, she has a heroic appearance, long hair shawl, slim waist, round legs, beautiful eyes like water, charming and enchanting. The Purple Girl wears a purple-blue dress, which is noble, elegant and intellectual, full of the charm of a classical beauty. The intellectual charm of the Royal Sister is not only beautiful in the skin, but also beautiful in the bones. , Dressed in a fiery red dress, with slender legs that are flexible, long and straight, graceful, slender and flexible, with plump buttocks, A tall figure of over 1.7 Meters, with golden proportions, honey waist and buttocks, long legs, and chopstick legs that are long, white and tough. The long and slender waist is swaying, the waist is flexible and textured, the red skirt cinches the waist, and the metal armor covers the bust, squeezing out a more attractive silhouette. Hug her slender waist, which is warm, slender, slender, flexible and textured. The trendy banshee keeps her forward posture, bulging forward and backward, and steps her thighs forward and backward, making her graceful, plump, and enchanting. See for yourself how much water there is,

Changqing's writing is as excellent as ever, and the story is as exciting as ever.

The protagonist in the author's works is very consistent with my idea of ​​a chivalrous person, happy with revenge, romantic and suave, and the most important thing is that there are many female protagonists, hehehe...