God Comes, Thriller Game

It's good to watch, but the ending made me sad.

Let me give the author some encouragement. This book felt to me to be very short, and the plot was not fully developed. It was finished in four copies. According to my experience in watching thrillers, generally ①② is considered the growth stage, ③④ is the recruitment stage, or having a few friends, etc. ⑤⑥ To carry out some foreshadowing left before. Some short ones can end here, and if they are long, you can add some other plots, or add the third and fourth copies I mentioned earlier, or write about interpersonal life and so on. This is considered unfinished in the end, be aesthetics shouldn't end in such a sloppy way. If possible, I really hope to write a little longer and write something about the days before Mo Li. Mo Li Moli, the cp name is also a good foreshadowing, showing that Yunyun and Mo Chen don't want to separate. In the end, to summarize, overall it's okay, but there are a little problems with the details. Come on, madam, I hope the writing will get better and better.

Finished reading! It's just so short! It's quite good to watch, but it's a bit regretful. Maybe everyone will regret it after watching it! I just hope they can meet again! (╥ω╥`) Love the author! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Why do you want to knife me?

Super pretty I will cry to death later [cry]

The ending feels like it ended in a hurry, and some regrets are unavoidable. There are very few emotional lines, but overall it is very good.

It's really beautiful! No loss in investment Hmm... Come on, author, see you in the next book

Very interesting, highly recommended, but I watched it too quickly and didn't understand much later.

I almost wanted to cry when I watched it at the end. Although there weren't many emotional lines, it was really touching at the end. I really wanted the ending to be that he found his god.

Is there no extra story? [Crying]

The ending of was so rushed that I didn't expect it to be be, but it was very interesting [shy]

Very interesting, see you in the author's next book! [Blowing kiss]

The plot is very compact, I like [blowing kiss]

It was pretty good, but the ending was so sudden that I couldn't accept it, so that's it.

It's good-looking, but the ending is a bit regretful. Come on

It was very interesting at the beginning, but there were few emotional lines, some things were not explained clearly, and it was a bit rushed at the end. The ending was regrettable, but it was interesting.

It's beautiful, I'm really looking forward to it. Good luck to the author.

The ending was a bit sudden, but otherwise it was okay, but there was no emotional line, so please give it a thumbs up from the author!

Jue Juezi, so beautiful, come and see it

It's great, very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The ending is very sudden.

Personally, I feel that the plot is exciting and full of ups and downs, and the ending of each copy makes me unexpected. The scene description is perfect.

I liked it so much, but there was too little, and the ending was rushed, but I still liked it very much [sending heart] Come on! Author!

It's so beautiful but I just can't get enough of it

To make up for it, each ending is unexpected and reasonable, but the later endings are a bit fast, but edible. Come on! ٩۹(๑•̀ω•́ ๑)۶