HP Help! I Fucked up Voldemort

This is the best HP fanfic I've ever read, but it's just a sword. Sure enough, we are not afraid of villains being bad but afraid of villains being too handsome. Tom can be said to be handsome in HP. He has had an unfortunate life and an unfortunate childhood. He has never been redeemed in his life. The only light has left him and he has fallen into darkness forever! Seeking again and again and despairing again and again are really too much.

Although I am not a fan of the original book, I have watched the movie many times. Taotao's character description is consistent with the original work. It ensures that all the characters are free of OOC and at the same time describes the love between Catherine and Tom. The final double ending is so cute! [Laughs] Fulfill all your fantasies! Taotao is the best! [Blowing a kiss] The most rare thing is that Catherine does not change the main plot of the world, and is truly a bystander. No one is qualified to interfere in their life, let alone outsiders. At the same time, Catherine's inner struggle is well written. I like Catherine's character change the most, especially the cheerful and cunning character after returning to Hogwarts as Weena, which is in sharp contrast to the initial negativity and indifference to life. In fact, this also implies that Taotao's efforts to get out of the trough are beginning to bear fruit, so cheers Taotao! You are the best! I will always support you! [Sending Hearts]

To sum up, I will torture the female protagonist first, then the male protagonist, and then I will be tortured throughout the whole story. I read a Harry Potter abuse novel before, and I burst into tears in the middle of the night. I couldn't forget it for a long time after reading it, and a large area of the quilt was wet from crying. This book is very strange. It was tortured to death, but I only cried twice. Most of the time, it felt like a Hogwarts was weighing on me, making me breathless. From beginning to end, the two of them were running in both directions, but sadly, they were never on the same plane. The so-called running in both directions was just drifting apart. The plot design is very clever. The heroine starts to have a soft temper and continues to hone her character in love. Unlike other heroines, she grows up subtly. The male protagonist is Tom Riddle. His character is well preserved. He is paranoid, calculating, heartbroken, and regretful. He vividly depicts Voldemort who lives in the darkness. What I admire most is that the author can integrate many philosophies of life into the plot. They are used as inner monologues of the characters and are not obtrusive at all in the article. It is as if these principles are derived from the plot and only play a supporting role in the article. The author has a thorough understanding of human psychology. The experiences of the male and female protagonists respectively correspond to certain people in life. The emotional resonance is really strong. When I read it, I thought of myself. This is probably the reason why most readers cried. Seeing the world from the perspective of the male and female protagonists respectively, I realized that some people are not unworthy of being loved, but are destined to never be loved. Don't you understand yet? Everything I look at and everything I think about is you. From the beginning to the end, you are the only one.

This book is really, really good. Don't miss it, my Tom.

This book deserves 10 points! This is the second HP fanfic that I think can be read. The analysis of the characters and the handling of the relationships between the characters are just right. The wife is attentive [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] The final ending is very reasonable, not he in the traditional sense, but it still makes people feel soft in the heart. The wife is really a very gentle person! ! ! ! !

This book is really good, but it is very logical, and it also embodies the inner journey, and it is very touching. Maybe I still don't like BE. I always feel that the ending is a bit rushed, and it cannot well continue the foreshadowing and foreshadowing. The heroine has done so much for Tom Riddle, but it seems that she did not get his feedback, so it feels like a part is missing. For example, there may be happy interactions in modern life, or you may tell the heroine who he is, but I feel that it is not good to make the heroine lose her memory. There is so much foreshadowing, what the heroine understands, or what the heroine knows. If these are lost, it feels a little unreasonable. I just want to see the reaction of the two of them, maybe I want to see it. There are more happy interactions. Then the logic of changing the heroine's name seems a bit unsmooth. I didn't specifically say why I changed it. It's because I still feel that the original name can better reflect her experience. Or there is no need to change the name on the tombstone. Or you explained a little less, or maybe it's because I want to see He. But overall, the rating is still worth 9.5 Points. It is a very good book.

The plot is just right, there are human weaknesses and strengths, and everyone is not perfect, which should be relatively rare in novels. The love between Catherine and Tom is very touching, they should be childhood sweethearts❓I really like this type, come on, the author is great٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

The writing is so real, this book seems to be full of regrets, Tom lost Catherine, Because they loved each other deeply, but were separated for various reasons. In the ending 1, Hope lost Wei Na when he was ten years old. This was the best ending for them. Wei Na hoped that his side would be full of love and hope. She did not want him to become Tom again. She loved him deeply, so she spent her remaining ten years accompanying him, a real and regretful ending. Tom was not able to see Catherine until his death, which was really cruel (⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉) The author wrote so well, there is candy to eat, oh, maybe there is a knife in it Finally, this is a great book that I have read among the Harry Potter fanfics, and it is also the first book that I have read in one sitting. Keep up the good work, author! Also, this is the first time I have written so many words, so don't comment if you don't like it! Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the author (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥Good health~(Ξ◕◡◕Ξ)

I still don't know how to comment in detail, I will add more when the time comes. This book is awesome! The characters are well portrayed. The heroine Catherine, as a time traveler, sees and participates in Tom's growth. Catherine is a person who is restrained and repressed by the public. She longs for freedom, but at the same time suppresses herself and is afraid. Tom and Catherine can be regarded as two-way redemption. When Catherine can calmly say that Catherine is dead, she becomes stronger. She could face her fear - Tom's death - and have him. Author, come on, come on!

I cried 😭😭😭😭 This is the only book I have finished reading on 🍅. I read the others halfway through and gave up without wanting to read them. Only this one I finished. The author's writing is really good. It is the most beautiful Tom fanfic I have ever read so far. It also made me cry countless times for the love between Catherine and Tom. It's just a pity that Tom never saw Catherine again until his death. The relationship between Tom and Catherine was a complete love tragedy. However, maybe this is the classic part of be aesthetics. It has moved me to tears countless times [almost crying]. Fortunately, in the second ending, Verna and Hope replaced Tom and Catherine together, which is another form of perfection and prevents us from being so completely stabbed. Suddenly, I discovered that the song "Where's My Love—SYML" matches Tom Catherine very well, and the lyrics match both of them very well. The atmosphere of the song is also very suitable. It is highly recommended to accompany this song when reading, the effect will be better! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

This book is really amazing, and the author updates it on time. My mother no longer has to worry about me running out of food ~(￣▽￣~)~ It also makes me understand Lao Fu better (dog head saves life). The author's writing style is very good. Compared with other books, it is not particularly Mary Sue and harem. I love Lao Fu. In the early stage, the heroine felt that she didn't care about the world. In fact, the city is super deep and everything is under control. It's a big move of loving each other, okay! (⑉°з°)-♡ I hope Lao Fu has a nose behind me. Until now, I feel like today's update smells so vinegary~ There is no redemption, no enlightenment, just use your own way to be with the person you love. In your eyes, death means reduction and loss, but in eternal life, it is endless loneliness. The author works hard (ง•̀_•́)ง, and we will wait for the food to be produced_(:з∠)_

It actually has a BE ending, so touching. After reading this book, I wonder if the heroine would accompany Hope to the end if her lifespan in the magical world is not shortened. What is also difficult to reconcile is that Al likes the heroine, but the heroine is the male protagonist after all. The author's writing style is very good, because there are many foreshadowings, so everything seems like foreshadowing to me. Tom eventually turned into a terrifying Voldemort, but he still loved the heroine deeply. After the heroine, Here comes Zhao Tingya to maintain order. One is here for Tom, and the other is for Draco. It is like a cycle, but it cannot destroy the original development of things. Being a bystander is often the most painful. The author's writing is very good (✪▽✪), and the complex feelings are expressed in simple words. I hope more people will discover this good book (the above is my personal opinion, light spray, you can give me a thumbs up if you see that I have written so much, thank you) I am also waiting for the author's next good book..., But you can try to find sugar residue in the knife with this book. Sometimes it feels like the heroine falling in love with Tom is Tom's plan. From Tom's perspective (the author will write a sequel from Tom's perspective). In fact, Tom has fallen in love with the heroine, but he did not express it because Tom Tom doesn't understand love, so he expresses it in extreme ways and in his own way. I'm still thinking about what would have been their ending if the heroine hadn't left Tom. I hope more people will discover this good book. Maybe in the future I won't read any other books about this category as good as this one. This book will always be the White Moonlight in my heart.

Bewen indeed has its unique charm. After reading it, I felt sour and painful. I couldn't let it go for a long time. For Voldemort, the tragedy was what he deserved. But for the heroine, this love is too tragic. Love that flies like a moth to a flame. Love that goes against fate, love that predicts despair. Finally, there is the love that seems a bit false in the AB ending. As a reader, I initially blamed the heroine for falling in love with a heinous person under an unchangeable fate, but the author handled it well. She fell in love with Tom Riddle, and she left him when everything that belonged to Voldemort had just begun. She used her soul to give Tom Riddle a chance to restart, a restart without memory, neither denying evil nor denying love.

This is the first Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read, and it's also the best Harry Potter fanfic, bar none! I like the mix of sweetness and cruelty, and the author's writing style is great! I used up several packs of tissues after reading this book, and it's time to sprinkle it with sugar until I scream. It's just that the chapters are a little short, and after reading it, I still had a lot to understand and I didn't even come back to my senses. Don't be fooled by the title of the book. The content is really exciting. I have read it back many times. Until now, I still have a vague feeling that maybe there really was a girl named Catherine who accompanied little Tom during his incomplete childhood!

I thought it was a ghost, but I didn't expect it to be wonderful. The story is written from the perspective of Catherine (the heroine), and there is also a section written from the perspective of Voldemort at the end, which is very interesting. Mainly, I don't mention much about the content of the original work. It is still the author's original fan fiction content. A large part of it is about Tom Riddle and Catherine's acquaintance and gradual falling in love (maybe not very accurate). Anyway, it is very sweet and I enjoyed it very much. By the way, the heroine's values ​​and views on love are all very positive, and they are mainly reflected in the latter part. Be sure to check it out(¬‿¬)

It's very interesting. I stayed up all night to read it all at once. I read their confessions to each other in the middle, which made me cry all the time. In fact, I rarely read sadomasochism books, and I thought about quitting it halfway, probably because of the unhappy things that happened recently and the same bad experience I had with the heroine. Until now, I have finished reading this book. I may still regret that the ending is not satisfactory. I personally want them to have a good ending, and I want them to be truly together while they have memories of each other. I saw them consider each other, saw them misunderstanding again and again, and separated again and again. One sentence in the comment hit me: "Slytherin is good at missing lovers." Maybe that's the case. Nothing is always perfect, but I couldn't stop crying, and my heart ached with pain. I can't guarantee that I will have the courage to do it again, maybe later. This book is very well written, I underlined many sentences, and the stories in it also left a deep impression on me... I can't describe my mood at the moment. I don't know what I am commenting on now. Maybe it is still very regretful, or sad, about their final ending. I hope that in my dreams, they will always be together...

I finished reading this book in one day. Although I felt sad about this book, I didn't cry at all. Maybe it's because my tears are high. Let's talk about your thoughts after reading: The male protagonist and the female protagonist are the same kind of people. You think the female protagonist is a little fox, but in fact she is not, but a cunning little fox. In a sense, both people have the same paranoia (the wording may be inaccurate, please forgive me. This book is very real, unlike some books about bosses and little white flowers. Everyone has desires. For example, the female protagonist is unwilling to accept that the male protagonist is using her, (although the male protagonist's perspective says that it is a test) , but personally I think it still means whitewashing. Of course I didn't say that I hate Tom because of this, so please don't criticize me🙏🏻The ending of Be was due to the lack of communication between the two people, which led to the final ending. Of course, there are other reasons, but it may be because I forgot, so you are welcome to add ( ﹡ˆoˆ﹡ ) After reading this book, I have been thinking about this question. If the two of them communicated more, would it be different? Of course, I don't think so at the moment. Overall, this book is very beautiful, very real, and can give people a sense of empathy. (Of course, it may be because of the first person. I really like first-person books, but unfortunately they are rare. Highly recommended. In fact, I accidentally posted it just now, but I still have something to say. I really like the character of the heroine, and I also want to say one thing. No one is born a villain, but in fact, the hero later turned into a big, noseless egg. It was because of his childhood experiences that made him like that. Don't tell others to be kind if you don't know their suffering. I really feel sorry for Tom when he was a child.

Tom Riddle is so infatuated. The details in this book are amazing. It is a prelude to the following, and it also shows that Tom loves the heroine from the side. It can also be seen that the heroine was sad because she could not change Tom's fate, and later dedicated her soul to Tom and worked hard. It can be said that the heroine loves Tom very much, and Tom also loves the heroine very much. They Although there are some misunderstandings, what is unchangeable is that they all love each other, but the ending is a bit difficult to reconcile. Although they are together in the ending 2, the author ended it too quickly. I haven't read enough. I hope the author can publish another book. I feel that the author's writing style is very good. I love it [sending my heart] [shy]

Finished reading on 2022.4.10.11: 35, It's pretty good. I recommend watching it. I'm just a little sorry that Tom and Catherine hid each other. Tom was not accompanied by Catherine in the years when he became Voldemort. I seemed to see that in the later story, Zhao Youxia and Hope remembered everything after they got married, and they cherished the only light in their lives.

Too many gorgeous words cannot express my love for this book. This book is really excellent. As a Harry Potter fanfic, it is close to the original work. As the author, my own hard work also expresses the author's own thoughts very well. This book respects the original endings of Merlin's characters, but it does change Tom Riddle and gives him a chance to start over again. It is not a cliché change due to love. Because of the background of Voldemort's birth and his experience, he is destined not to be a good person, but the reborn Hope can, and Catherine finally taught him to grow. Very delicate! Very good! ! Great! ! ! Great author, come on!

The be aesthetic of this novel is really unforgettable. I finished it in two days and felt so sorry for Tom. The heroine used the stereotype of Tom and said that he has no emotions. The misunderstanding and ambivalence and the heroine's escape are all very real. I feel that the author's writing is so delicate, as if he brought the two of them to life. Because I finished it all at once, from which chapter I started, I didn't stop crying until the ending. This made me sad. Maybe it was some scenes that I felt too much. My heart ached for a while, and I felt weak all over the next day [crying]. It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this one. It touched my heart. I was a bit sadder. Although the second ending is he, I feel like this is like a dream woven by the author for the readers. 1 Is the reality.

This book is really good🥹I stayed up late and read it all in one day. It is not long and the plot is very coherent and top-notch. The heroine has a very distinctive personality and dares to love and hate. After reading this book, I like the heroine more than the soup dumplings (the heroine is really written with soul!) In addition, I really didn't read the ending - oh hehe, I have to praise😝I hereby sincerely wish Mr. Hope and Ms. Zhao Youxia that they can live together well until death🫶🏻 The author really writes so well! Thank you for your hard work! I will never remove this book from my bookshelf. Just wait, I want more people to see this masterpiece🥳

Go ahead, this is the first fanfic I've finished reading. How can I really describe that feeling? Hiss, it's the kind of dense pain and a bit depressing. Whether it's for Kesselring or Tom, this relationship is too heavy, and it makes people unable to breathe. It's undeniable that they love each other deeply, but the ending is still such a pity. Maybe this ending is not bad, but Life is already so bitter, so you still have to eat some sweets. If you are in a bad mood and want to cry, don't read this book, because this book is a thin knife. It will not make you cry, it will only make people feel depressed. This is a masterpiece, but in my case, the author's literary talent is really great and admirable.

I read it in one go. I thought it was a sweet story at first, but I never imagined that it would make me cry so much. In fact, I felt a little frustrated and uncomfortable when I saw the middle part, because Tom's beauty became more and more dazzling, and the heroine was no longer his only one (although he was pretending to everyone else), but I just felt unhappy. Also, that time with Ma Er, he was clearly outside, but he didn't take action. This is what made me the most angry. When I thought about it, Tom was taking advantage of everything. "The heroine," I really... I suddenly understood Catherine's departure (even though the author later explained it in the first person of Tom), but I have to say that this is a good article. The author vividly depicts the psychology of Tom, the Dark Lord, and describes his character vividly (thumbs up for the author [blowing kiss]). It is really amazing [like]. In this novel, I also realized many truths, and there are many golden sentences. It is not difficult to see that the author is a very literary person. All in all, recommended, go see it!

When I first watched it, I thought it was about abusing the heroine, but after watching it, I realized that it was about abusing each other. When I watched the first ending, I felt quite regretful. It also made me cry a lot. Ten years is simply not enough time! When I saw the second ending, it made up for all my regrets, and also made up for their regrets. Overall this book is really great! It is one of the best books I have read so far (there are only a few books that I think are good), and it is also the only novel I have reviewed so many times. I have a lot to say but don't know how to express it, so I can only say strong recommendation! Highly recommended! Highly recommended! ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥ "The author remembers to publish a new book"

In Chapter 31, I felt that the heroine felt a little stupid. Either she felt licked, or she felt overall stupid for some reason. In Chapter 35, Riddle said that he would not wait for her and would catch up with him, but instead of studying hard to catch up, the heroine was just jealous. It feels like if a madman falls in love with a normal person, the result will either be that the normal person becomes crazy. ; These are what I wrote after reading 35 chapters, and then posted the full text. Unexpectedly, the last sentence predicted [almost crying] [crying]. Except for these two points I wrote, almost the whole article is beautiful and getting better and better. This is the first time I have written so many comments. This article is really sweet [smile]

This book is really, really good. It is the only novel that I loved so much that I read it in three days! Between Tom and Catherine, I'm so sorry oooooooooo😭😭 In my opinion, they are the two closest people, but they have never fully understood each other.

I really like it. I don't remember how many times I read it. Many people may ask why the heroine keeps trying to please the hero. They feel that the heroine has a flattering personality, but the heroine will also lose her temper and stay away from the hero when she is in a bad mood. However, this is not a story about a big heroine. She has been like this since the heroine first came in. The soul of an adult is getting to know Tom, wishing him well, and falling in love with Tom unknowingly. From the beginning to the end, Tom has never done anything harmful to the heroine. Please remember that the hero is Voldemort, a product of love potions, which is destined to not be a sweet novel. No matter what, this is the top 1 love you author in my heart:)

The descriptive techniques, rhetoric techniques, and writing techniques are very good. The story is exciting and attractive. It is not a cookie-cutter sweet pet novel. It is much better than before. You can know the follow-up content just by looking at the title of the book. It is not the kind of content where you torture me a thousand times and I treat you like my first love. That kind of story makes people feel a little bit happy after reading it. The crooked feeling is that our deep affection is not worthy of a little heartache, and I kind of want him to be with the heroine, who has family status, a back figure, good looks, three views, can comfort people, is affectionate, and the hero's mother basically scolded her, and only a short sentence in the end cleared her up. Overall, it's not bad [blowing kiss]

It's so fragrant. The sweet part inside is so sweet that I almost screamed. Of course, the knife part is also very knife-like. There are two endings, one is be and the other is he. I think this one is quite good. You can choose which one you like. The character setting in the whole text is very good. Complete There is no OOC at all. The emotional expression is superb. When writing, the emotional description and development process are just right. The emotions of the male protagonist and female protagonist are really complex and delicate. I feel that the writing is very good. It also switches the perspectives of the male protagonist, female protagonist and supporting characters to narrate the story! I'm going to tear this expressive ability apart! That is to say, it's so beautiful that you can't miss it! ! ! If you are so good at writing, write more! I'm really looking forward to the new book (ps: whisper bb, can the new book be less expensive)?