Traveling through the world of Naruto, he unexpectedly became Naruto's twin brother. Thinking of Naruto's tragic childhood, he secretly vowed to protect this difficult boy. (During this period, I accidentally discovered that I had carried the Naruto mobile game system, and I could gain the skills to collect ninjas by myself)
Reader comments
Looking forward to further development😋
So far, I feel pretty good. I give the author five stars. Another thing is, can the author make our protagonist handsome alone? Women will only affect the protagonist's speed of drawing the sword [shy]
Come on, come on, author! The liver emperor is none other than you [KISS]
Let me give it 5 stars. Although this book has been suspended for a year, I admit that it is a very good Naruto novel. Because the protagonist Uzumaki Naruto and his brother Uzumaki Sento have opened up a different Naruto plot, it also makes up for a lot of regrets in the original work, but I hope the author will come back and write the complete story.
"The Punctuation Mark Runs Away from Home"
Great, add some emotional scenes between men and women
This book is very good, I like it very much, but it's a bit unreadable
Good review! Come on! Hope it doesn't end badly!
The writing is very good, the author is great, come on! (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)
The plot is very good, five stars!
The author insists on being good, the book is very good, but the punctuation needs to be paid attention to.
Very pretty!
I didn't steal Hinata, so five stars (ಡωಡ)
It's pretty cool, but can the speaking part be expanded with symbols like " "? You have to see for yourself which part is spoken,
At least it makes up for some regrets
It's so exciting. I like this book very much.
The author writes very well! 😙There is also a lot of room for improvement, that is, punctuation marks...
Five stars must be five stars!
The author needs to pay attention to punctuation, this is very important. Sometimes we have to make sentences ourselves
Very good, but there are no punctuation marks in the early stage
Okay, okay, but I remember it was Temari versus Shikamaru. Remember to change it, otherwise my little wife won't love him anymore [laughter]
I quite like the plot
Good looking, so damn good looking
It's fine as long as you don't change the plot of Hinata and Naruto casually in the first few articles [Read carefully]
Just add some punctuation and separate them [you taste carefully]
I can't comment yet. For now
My youth has never left
So far so good
It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. It's considered a masterpiece in my mind. Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to further development😋
So far, I feel pretty good. I give the author five stars. Another thing is, can the author make our protagonist handsome alone? Women will only affect the protagonist's speed of drawing the sword [shy] Come on, come on, author! The liver emperor is none other than you [KISS]
Let me give it 5 stars. Although this book has been suspended for a year, I admit that it is a very good Naruto novel. Because the protagonist Uzumaki Naruto and his brother Uzumaki Sento have opened up a different Naruto plot, it also makes up for a lot of regrets in the original work, but I hope the author will come back and write the complete story.
"The Punctuation Mark Runs Away from Home"
Great, add some emotional scenes between men and women
This book is very good, I like it very much, but it's a bit unreadable
Good review! Come on! Hope it doesn't end badly!
The writing is very good, the author is great, come on! (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)
The plot is very good, five stars!
The author insists on being good, the book is very good, but the punctuation needs to be paid attention to.
Very pretty!
I didn't steal Hinata, so five stars (ಡωಡ)
It's pretty cool, but can the speaking part be expanded with symbols like " "? You have to see for yourself which part is spoken,
At least it makes up for some regrets
It's so exciting. I like this book very much.
The author writes very well! 😙There is also a lot of room for improvement, that is, punctuation marks...
Five stars must be five stars!
The author needs to pay attention to punctuation, this is very important. Sometimes we have to make sentences ourselves
Very good, but there are no punctuation marks in the early stage
Okay, okay, but I remember it was Temari versus Shikamaru. Remember to change it, otherwise my little wife won't love him anymore [laughter]
I quite like the plot
Good looking, so damn good looking
It's fine as long as you don't change the plot of Hinata and Naruto casually in the first few articles [Read carefully] Just add some punctuation and separate them [you taste carefully]
I can't comment yet. For now
My youth has never left
So far so good
It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. It's considered a masterpiece in my mind. Keep up the good work.
This book is really well written.
Very well written, fast paced and refreshing.
Come on, author, it's very good.