Trainer Kaoping

5 Stars is pretty good. Although the story in this Pokémon fanfic is very good, the story in the plot line is still too long. But this book is really exciting. The protagonist Coppin goes through many adventures as a trainer, and his Pokémon partners grow together.

Fulfill your fairy dream give yourself an encouragement

The plot is a bit bloody, the journey of the protagonist is quite troublesome, and it doesn't look very pleasant to read! Writing other people's memories can easily dilute the main plot. Although this is to pave the way for the world view, it will also cause some readers to feel visual fatigue! I hope people will find the highlights attractive in the future!

The biggest problem with this book is that the author's writing is too protracted and the characters' confessions and storylines are too long. The content of the book is too complex and the main tasks are not clear. The author should appropriately reduce unnecessary nonsense (눈_눈), and the update speed is too slow, which is also the biggest failure of this book. I hope the author lets it go and the book will get better and better.

At the beginning, I felt a bit contradictory. When facing the Rockets and the Aristocratic Family, I hid whenever I could for fear of getting into trouble. I also treated the homeless man cautiously, but in the end I suffered a loss when I encountered the Sonic Bat. Later, everyone told me that there were more dangerous elves inside. How the hell do you dare to keep going in? Even a swarm of supersonic bats can cause the protagonist to suffer big losses, and then you tell me that the protagonist still takes the risk after considering it? Are all the precautions mentioned above feeding the dog?

How can I put it this way? I always feel that the protagonist is too desperate. He has mediocre strength but dares to move forward in any danger. Every time he escapes from danger, it is too blunt. There are no such stupid enemies in the wild and he always happens to meet a good person to save him. In the early stage, the protagonist has just gone on a trip and has low strength. He should not participate in too many battles between good and evil, because this plot arrangement will appear very unreasonable. In the early stage, you should write more about how to practice in the wild and how to fight against wild elves to upgrade. By the way, you can rely on past life memories and plug-ins to go to the wild to find more things and elves that can be sold for money. After making money, you can capture and train the elves with good qualifications. Only when your strength has increased to a certain level can you participate in the battle between good and evil. This will make it safer and more profitable, and the plot will also be better. It seems more reasonable. It is not like now that a noob who is only ten levels and knows nothing will encounter enemies in their 20s and 30s and then inexplicably someone sacrifices his life to save him. After being injured and comatose, he inexplicably encounters a person or elf who can save him. I prefer that as an adult who has traveled through time, he should act more cautiously. If he has no strength, You should first plan to improve yourself instead of taking risks. As a civilian trainer, you should protect yourself wisely rather than stand out with enthusiasm, because you don't have the capital to do so, let alone the real and dark world described by you, the author. It is unreasonable for a civilian trainer who even the people in the Alliance look down on you and doubt you at will to stand out with enthusiasm.

I hope it can improve Slowpoke's qualifications

It feels good, and there aren't many problems with the plot. Mainly the main character has some problems. How should I put it, the character of the protagonist, I don't know how to describe it, if I have to describe it. I just feel that there is something wrong with my brain. After all, he has lived two lives. In this real world, what is the prerequisite for getting benefits? Life! You have to protect yourself first before you can consider whether you can get any benefits. Also, the protagonist's character is not well developed. From the current point of view, the protagonist's character is probably cautious (personal guess). I personally suggest that the author let the protagonist experience real social dangers so that he can grow. There are also some supporting characters (important), and stories about them can be written as extras. Overall there are no big problems. As for my personal complaint, I don't really like the names given to Pokémon in the past, and one of them was really bad.

Wrote a piece of rubbish, wasting the opportunity to travel and wasting time.

It looks good, but can it be divided into more paragraphs? It gives me a headache when I look at it 🤦🤦🤦 Come on 😊, there aren't many articles like this