There is no system, there is no love between children, it is just a dream about the old city before someone died.
And I just want to write the story of this dream. What else can be more comfortable than dreaming?
The first world is a different world that starts from scratch. The following worlds are still under consideration. I hope everyone can recommend it.
The places where there were knives in the first two worlds have been modified.
There will no longer be a tragic reincarnation from scratch, and the spirit cage Ran Bing will no longer become flesh and earth.
I will write some character stories from scratch, (such as Elsa's tragic childhood). The timeline may be a bit messy, but I will write it well.
Reader comments
Occupying a building (dog head∪･ω･∪)
Very strange. I can only say that the re fanfic is poorly written, and the depth of the characters is completely lacking. The flattening of characters is a common problem in online literature. It is obvious that the original characters of re are rounder and fuller. And this fanfic is pure flow. You can only act through "prophet". Emotions have no tension, no pain, no joy, no love, just plainness.
To put it simply, the emotions of the characters are not handled well and the events are not well understood. Of course it's for the writer. The main difference from the original 486 is the brain. 486 Was a pure idiot in the early days, but Wangcheng Film completed its transformation, gained friendships in the second season, and really grew up step by step. The protagonist in the author's works is like a puppet, always standing still at the bottom of the mountain. If you don't know the plot, you are a loser.
I can only say that I don't understand the plot deeply enough.
Feeling a bit messy
So good ah ah ah
It's great, keep it up. I hope to write more about the overworld and make the main line clearer.
Occupying a building (dog head∪･ω･∪)
Very strange. I can only say that the re fanfic is poorly written, and the depth of the characters is completely lacking. The flattening of characters is a common problem in online literature. It is obvious that the original characters of re are rounder and fuller. And this fanfic is pure flow. You can only act through "prophet". Emotions have no tension, no pain, no joy, no love, just plainness. To put it simply, the emotions of the characters are not handled well and the events are not well understood. Of course it's for the writer. The main difference from the original 486 is the brain. 486 Was a pure idiot in the early days, but Wangcheng Film completed its transformation, gained friendships in the second season, and really grew up step by step. The protagonist in the author's works is like a puppet, always standing still at the bottom of the mountain. If you don't know the plot, you are a loser. I can only say that I don't understand the plot deeply enough.
Feeling a bit messy
So good ah ah ah
It's great, keep it up. I hope to write more about the overworld and make the main line clearer.
Weird...