Fantasy: I Traveled to the Beginning of the World

A newbie has opened a book, and I ask for your support from all readers! I am also a person who has read novels for more than ten years. I have read more than 9,000 hours of reading time on Tomato. I understand all kinds of poisonous points and will try to avoid them here. Of course, sometimes the code is confusing, and there may be poisonous points. If you find out, the author will modify it in time. Although I read a lot, I am still picky when reading other people's books. But it was only when I wrote the book that I realized how difficult it was. I will try my best to write this book. In addition, I will listen to everyone's opinions, and you can share any suggestions you have. I will be grateful for good book reviews, and I will learn from the readers' lessons and correct them in time for negative reviews. I hope to write this book together with everyone. Thanks! I welcome all readers to give book reviews. I will be grateful regardless of the rating. Comments that point out errors will be corrected by the author. There may be errors in some chapters. You can point them out in the paragraph comments and the author will correct them. Any book review author will respond to everyone. Regarding the issue of the protagonist being restricted by the law of heaven with the help of the universe, it has been revised. This can be regarded as a poisonous point [face covering]

It's not bad, but the part about recruiting disciples doesn't feel good. Isn't it bad for the family's genius? It feels like cultivating an "outsider". There must be someone in the family who is more powerful and more talented than him. When you write like this, I feel that there will be few people in the future who will be more powerful than "him". Moreover, he has not grown up in the family since he was a child, so his mind will definitely drift. If you haven't revealed his bloodline yet, why are you hiding it?

So far, I think it's pretty good. I like to read interesting articles as much as I read Tomato, and this book falls into some of my favorite genres: Behind the Scenes, Group Portraits, and Invincible I hope the author can keep updating, but now it seems that the rating is too low, which is a bit dangerous.

I like invincible novels. The protagonist must be absolutely invincible. Also, what race is the protagonist? You can't always call it the Dugu family. The Dugu family is just a name for the family, not the race. Other creatures have racial names, such as the Guangyu Clan, Tianlong Clan, etc. The protagonist's family must also have racial names.

It's very interesting. Please update it more soon. It's best to be able to reach the point where concepts are neither born nor destroyed, that kind of thing.

It's good to read, but the new book has a few chapters.

It looks pretty good if you pat it on the head. Come on, I'll give you a five-star review.

Come on, it looks good, five stars.

Not bad, I think it looks good

Very good, I like [shy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. I like this theme.

It's pretty good, but I don't know if I can finish it.

The first ancestor of all heavens, the founder of the world, the most sacred in the innate world, the ancestor of Dugu: Dugu Lu The Dao Ancestor of Destruction, the Dao Ancestor of Final Yan, and the Chaos Demon Gods of the Heavens: My friends, my enemies, kill them all

Not bad, very good. I hope I can write what I want to see.

The beginning is not bad, I quite like the setting, but it is too little now, keep up the good work Forcibly making it more difficult for the protagonist

It's good to watch and I'd love to see more.

It's still easy, just skip some places.