Step by Step, She Ascended to Immortality: Senior Sister, She Ascended Again

It has a very everyday feel, and the story of the protagonist is told in a eloquent way. I don't know why, but when I read it, I felt like the tranquility of time has passed. Instead of using that kind of cliche plot to create a compact power gap or other reasons for being bullied, and then escalate to a slap in the face. Sensen works very hard. In terms of writing, as a new author, there will definitely be some shortcomings, but it can be seen that he is still improving, and I believe it will be better in the future. The plot is not a fierce collision, but a gentle and gentle feeling. This description is a bit inappropriate, but this is the feeling this book gave me. Finally, a small question. Chapter 3 says that the heroine is 15 years old, Chapter 11 says that she is 14 years old, and Chapter 15 says that she is 15 years old. I think it may be a typo accidentally. The second small problem is that the whole text has an ancient feel, but some small details have a strong modern flavor. I hope to make it perfect from the beginning.

Finally found another novel without a male protagonist that is not mindless! However, there is one thing worth mentioning. When the heroine showed her strength in this article, the author still felt that the control of the scene was a bit lacking, and he did not really write about the strong charm of the heroine. But personally, I am still looking forward to this book! Come on, author! [Love] (Actually, the rating was relatively low when I first read it, so I didn't have high hopes, but it's actually pretty good. So I give the author a five-star rating and try to get more people to read this book)

Very, very good. I hope the author can write down the story of Liu Wanqing when he writes a novel about female channeling to immortality. After all, this book is really beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Give it a push! Although the ending is rushed and the writing in some parts is not very eye-catching, it is much better than those books that are so bad and long that you can't even finish it if you have the patience to read it. Encourage the author, come on!

Definitely praise it! Although the ending is rushed, the writing is indeed very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard~ I also wish you can have the beautiful life you want! [Sending Hearts]

It's not a clichéd plot, every character has a memory point, it's not a one-sided paper character. The heroine's life experience is not just miserable for the sake of being miserable. Highly recommended.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. Knowing that you are a young male author, I am very grateful to you for being able to write about a female protagonist! Although you did not take the college entrance examination, no one dares to say that you can only be successful if you go to college! If you like writing, just write well and look after you!

It's really enough for a new author. I still remember that I had a martial arts dream when I was in the second grade of junior high school. I also longed for the life of cultivating immortals and becoming gods. I also wrote a novel. Although I gave up the article after writing a few chapters [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart], so I think it is amazing to finish it. I hope the author will get better and better in the future.

Although the length is short and the writing style is a bit immature, it is the author's first book and it is still very well written. I hope that future female videos will see your non-CP fairy tales.

Yes, it's very interesting. I hope you will continue writing. Thank you, author!

Seeing the author working so hard, I give it to you [blowing kiss]

I hope you can continue to write Liu Wanqing's story. I'm waiting for you. As long as my original intention is still there, I will always be there.

It's a very good book. It's not frustrating. The heroine doesn't become too slow to become stronger. The pace is quite fast. Come on, author, we all support you. It's a pity that this article is unfinished. The cousin's identity is very weird, as is the heroine, and the ending is very hasty.

The writing is quite good, but it's not popular or has no flow. The author can't continue writing. If he continues writing, it might become a must-read for Tomato.

The ending was a little rushed, but it was really nice [blowing kiss]

Big cheers for the author!

It's good, but wasn't it at the Dzogchen stage of the Qi training stage at the beginning? Why did it become the 6th level of the Qi training stage?

After reading it, overall it was good. It was not clumsy or draggy, but the ending was a bit rushed. I hope the author will write better works in the future! Give you five stars!

This book is very good, keep up the good work~

It's very well written, I've finished reading it [laughs]

Very good, come on

My five stars are dedicated to Lu Zhijin, Bai Zongquan and Gu Feiyan [Wish you 99~]

It's watchable, but it's a bit rushed, and the characters' emotions and designs are a bit lacking. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I really like it, I hope there will be a follow-up

What a great book!

A very good novel [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's okay, please keep working hard

It's still good, although this book...

It's great to watch, but the ending is a bit hasty. Not enough.

Hmm... It's actually pretty good, but the ending is too hasty, and the character plot is actually very good~ Good luck to the author, I look forward to you writing a better book! ! [Blowing kiss]