原神，我是一只杂毛鸟？

The writing is good, but the pace is a bit too fast. There are many places that should be described in detail, such as the fight between the emperor and the demon gods in the Demon God War, the final fight between the protagonist and the two demon gods, and the scene where Mond confronts the dragon later. Although everyone has gone through the plot and knows what it is like, there are always some friends who have never played Genshin Impact. They need to be written in more detail and the pace is slower to gradually understand the various settings.

I have read my favorite Genshin Impact fanfic, Xiaoyeye poked me www

Found a treasure book! It's very beautiful, but I'm a little tearful. I recommend it!

Although this novel is not particularly well written, it is pretty good. Although it has a few flaws, it doesn't matter.

I like this book, the author loves you so much (۶• ㉨ •)۶♡٩(• ㉨ •٩)

I read a book a long time ago, and today I suddenly saw a group that was finished, and he suddenly updated it. The book is a good book and pretty good-looking, but it's a bit high. And this last stab, you're a year away, you're like, eh.

I haven't finished reading the article yet, so it's best not to comment. Some people are convinced like **... Well... The author's writing style is still okay... But sometimes it's a little embarrassing (but not a big problem)... As for the five stars, I'll give them when I finish them. [Sinister smile]

Wait quietly for the extra chapter, I have enough time to wait for you. Our time... Is always enough. I hope I can watch the extras in my lifetime. Of course, the author also needs to take a good rest. If you have time, just write a little bit. I can afford to wait for it to come slowly. If I clock in for a month and the author hasn't published an extra story yet, then I'll write it myself! Since I'm not very good at writing, I'll wait a month to see if the author can publish it. But even if I wrote it, I wouldn't dare to publish it. Junior's writing skills are really limited.

This book is very good, the plot is so sweet, brothers [laughing]

@ Join in the fun (*￣￣) I feel like I could use more knives before, I'm not complaining, five stars is the proof, read a little and tell me your feelings first, you can learn from it in the next novel. In addition to being fast, accurate and ruthless, knives are also a bit unexpected. To tear the good things into pieces is the true meaning of the knife. I feel that if you want to write a good knife article, you must first write a sweet article. I feel that I have to first portray the beauty deeply into the knife, and then I will be more excited [smile][smile][smile] I can first write more daily stories about the protagonist who is careless and heartless, so as to deepen the impression on the readers first. In the end, it will be more profound when he is slowly transformed to death by the knife [shy][shy][shy] and I feel the misunderstanding between the traces and Ying in the previous It will be a bit stiff, and the misunderstandings I can accept are not explained quickly. For example, the protagonist is dying, forget it, let her misunderstand, let her hate me, so that she will not be so sad after death [grievance], and the classic crematorium [smile] This kind of relic misunderstanding, the plot feels a bit stiff, the intention is to make Noelle Don't help blindly. To be honest, the design feels like it has no soft use except being extremely dangerous. It's more like a test that deepens friendship. This misunderstanding makes me feel a little uncomfortable. After all, it feels like it has no soft use at all. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I wish the author to become the King of Swords [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] There are pictures in the comment area

The character's personality is well expressed, and I really like the last part of the be ending. I once again emphasize that Ye Yu's character is more gentle, but at the same time he is brave and brave enough to kill. He is both gentle and brave. The character's character is very impressive.

This is one of my favorite Genshin Impact books. The swear words spoken by minors at the beginning are still fresh in my memory. I have seen people around me keep leaving and slowly becoming mature. In the end, he died in the Demon War and was resurrected at the beginning of the main plot.

It has its own original work and also has similarities with the original plot, which is very distinctive.

Very beautiful, but the ending is a bit sad

I haven't rated it yet, but I suddenly thought of it today. The book was very good to read at the time, although the writing was a bit poor, but at that time when the world view of Genshin Impact still relied on guesswork, it gave everyone a very novel experience. Although it conflicts with the current world view, it still has a unique flavor. Maybe this is the beauty of early Genshin Impact fandom.

It's so exciting, Oye, I want to hide it and watch it secretly [laughing]

It is particularly exciting and beautiful. The character of the protagonist Ye Yu was originally carefree and lively, but after a series of things, he became mature and gained the power to protect others. However, Ye Yu was written to death at the end of the novel😭

I have read it three times. It really suits my taste. One of my favorite books. I don't know why, but the rating suddenly became very low, but I will still pursue it seriously. Thank you to the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

Five-star encouragement. It would be great if the previous scene of Ye Yu's sacrifice could be described in more detail, so that the atmosphere can be exaggerated to the extreme. This will also give people a shocking scene and make people feel regretful and sad. Some parts in the back lack details, please work hard!

So sweet, so sweet, so sweet, the cp is a hot girl, I'm posting all the time 🍬

The writing is very good, the author is too great, but can you promise me to resurrect Ye Yu?

This new writing looks much better than the previous one

It's good-looking. You'll be moved by the end.

Such a good book shouldn't be rated this low. The plot is pretty good and the details are spot on. This rating shouldn't be so low.

The last chapter is very good and gives readers space to think for themselves. Although the author often makes typos, the book is not bad at all. I suggest you start reading it from the resurrection episode.

Very good, it should be sweet, it should be sharp, and the knife skills are also very good Although as a person who is almost immune to knives, I will not be knifed to the point of crying, but this book is also one of the few books that can make me uncomfortable. All in all, it's wonderful, and there's nothing more to say. The only drawback is that there is no sentence break in the beginning paragraph, which seems a bit abrupt. But this does not affect the fact that this book is wonderful

This is the Genshin Impact book that I have seen that is most consistent with the original work. It is just a bit slow to update, but the author wants to learn! Academics are important Old fan, old fan, hey hey hey

The ending would be the finishing touch if it were written more. I really want to see how they react after Ye Yu passes away.

This book is super beautiful and very sweet, really sweet, very sweet. His ending is also very sweet, leaning towards lily. No matter what, he is very sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet. His extras are also very sweet. I hope new people can come and watch.

I finished reading it. Although it was very sweet at the end, the story was good, so I gave it five stars~