Fox Fairy Matchmaker: Starting Travel Frog System

Personally, I prefer more girls, so you know the author [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Why don't you leave Su Su to Yu Yue, and Hong Hong will take it by yourself [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Let me give you some decent advice. The latest few chapters updated by the author are all about single-player. There is no way around it. It's a fact that many people don't like to talk about it. Here are suggestions The dialogue can use more adjectives, just so-and-so followed by colons, which is very monotonous. You can try to enrich it, not only to practice your writing but also to shape your character. Secondly, there are sentences. There are many repetitive and unclear sentences. My suggestion is to write it down and review it a few times. You should be able to squeeze out this little time. If you don't have time, just pretend I didn't say it. Finally, it is about the emotional drama plot, which is very bland. Only when there is conflict can there be excitement. Please be aware that the emotional line between Rongrong and the protagonist is a bit deliberate. The latest confrontation between Yaya and Rongrong is also a bit deliberate, but the problem is not big. It can be corrected by strengthening the writing and description. And the last thing is, it's short, how many words per chapter? Is there two thousand, or is there just over one thousand? [You taste carefully] That's all for now. I hope the updates won't be interrupted or unfinished. If you see them, please reply [I understand]

I want both Yaya and Rongrong

Very well written, keep going

A single female protagonist is better

The author can do it, keep up the good work

Very interesting, good luck to the author.

Oh, after reading it, I looked at the title. Wocao? Is there a system?

This book is okay

At least the author's writing style is acceptable and the plot is relatively smooth, so I give it five stars.

Honghong is gone, so let's keep Yaya. That would be great

There is no need to say anything, the author is Sai Gao

It's very nice, I hope it won't be a eunuch. To be honest, I still don't want the characters in Douluo Continent to become fox demons

How many heroines does the author have in this book?

Although I don't know why I always feel a little uncomfortable reading it, but it's still pretty good.

How to say it. . . It seems like I just wrote whatever is available, and there is no plot at all. I feel like I wrote this book on a whim, but it is well written.

Come on, the writing is good, I like it very much, but the updates are too slow.

Not bad, keep up the good work, author

Writing a book is not easy, five-star praise

Yoxi, come on, the author

Very good keep up the good work

Not bad, all aspects

Give the author some stars. Recruit more people.

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome

The plot is okay I hope it doesn't collapse in the end Come on, the author is optimistic about you

The author chatted with me for a long time

This book is my ideal fox demon matchmaker

Why did the author write

Is there any kind-hearted friend? Tell me. Do you want them all or can you only choose one?