(The Virgin enters by mistake!) (No emotional line of the heroine) (Dark World) (Decisive in killing) (Traditional)
He was transported to the world of fantasy cultivation, and he practiced hard for three years but could not enter the cultivation gate.
At the age of sixteen, I finally activated the system and was able to view the life script.
Lin Luofeng
Characters: All living beings
Fortune: Ordinary
The latest twist: three days later, a child disappeared from the school, and the school was forced to close and had to work in the fields.
"What, as a time traveler, I am actually the backdrop?"
"I am not willing to be a mortal and do nothing for the rest of my life!"
"Bring me all your opportunities!"
Relying on the system, Lin Luofeng embarked on the path of cultivation, fighting for chance treasures and every powerful opportunity!
Fight with people, fight with all things, fight with heaven, and finally find your own way, leaving an eternal legend in the long river of time!
Reader comments
The five-star rating is just to encourage the author to continue writing, because this is the only good one in this genre, and the others are really unbearable.
Who knows how many kills are enough?
Yes, who knows how many kills are enough? Naturally, the more such power, the better!
With murderous intent permeating his body, Lin Luofeng walked out of the Barren Mountain step by step, with dead bones lying on the ground behind him.
ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔThe writing is good, the author must be an old fantasy person, and the plot is relatively novel.
Except for the problem of realm setting (foundation can open up a small world, which is quite speechless, this is the second realm, no matter how huge the world view is, it should not appear in the second realm), other problems are not big, it can be regarded as a rare good fantasy novel by Tomato.
There are novel ideas and plot. The characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the writing can stir the readers' minds in a few words. The language is magnificent without losing its beauty, just like unfolding an ancient picture scroll, which shows that the author has a profound foundation and is close to becoming a famous writer. However, some traces of imitation can still be found in some places, which can also be regarded as successful reference. Many plots feel fragmented, adding to the mystery.
Very good, I like this very much. Unlike some plot systems that seize the opportunity to build the foundation in two months and the Nascent Soul in half a year. This book of yours can be regarded as the true cultivation of immortality. Stealing opportunities from others to practice and upgrade faster than others, but not outrageously. I saw a book about signing in, and after signing in for two months, you will reach the realm of a saint. It's simply unsightly, and it's good to be like the author. I hope the author will keep it up and even have one or two big outbursts occasionally. As long as it's not too outrageous, it's good. I look forward to more updates from the author.
The system is about to come out and eliminate their opportunity to plunder. Super pretty.
It's not bad, I just feel that the Son of Luck is really smooth sailing. He doesn't have the hardships that the Son of Luck has. It's only when he meets the protagonist that he has some hardships.
It's okay, but I feel like this shouldn't be considered a dark text.
It's a rare traditional writing method. Come on, I will keep following up!
In the book, Pig's Knuckle has an excellent IQ, he is flexible and flexible in doing things, and he knows how to seize the right opportunity. This novel ranks among the top six fantasy novels I have ever read. It is great!
Is there a female protagonist? There should be no author, right? I should just come back.
If you stop, that's rock bottom. If you're still going, it's uphill. This is the best explanation I've ever heard about a low point in life. --Liu Tong "Your loneliness is glorious despite defeat"
Not bad, very surprising
A very nice book
Big cheers for the author
The subject matter is pretty good, but it's a bit mindless. You should be able to watch it happily without any brains. You can go to The Virgin Who Stumbled In, but changed it to The Cruel Man Who Stood In
Although the writing is average, I still have to give it five stars. After all, work hard on your homework.
It's very good, I hope it doesn't rot.
Raise a book, raise a book, the beginning is decisive and decisive, and I have my own feelings, but I still hope that the author can write about the harem and not be a dog licker! ! !
It's very interesting. I like the character at the beginning. It's much better than other books of the same type.
I don't know why the rating is only 8.4. Anyway, I think it's very beautiful.
Well written, keep up the good work👍
Not bad, hope it doesn't end badly
Not bad, pretty good
It's not satisfying to watch it in one sitting
Not bad, you can take a look
Five stars, so well written (^0^)/
Haha, come on, the author
Although I haven't finished reading it, I just came here to criticize you for being a dark current, not a holy lady, and killing decisively. If you really do it, five stars will be appropriate. If it is what you said, then your book will definitely become popular. Whether it becomes popular or not is a matter of time.
The five-star rating is just to encourage the author to continue writing, because this is the only good one in this genre, and the others are really unbearable.
Who knows how many kills are enough? Yes, who knows how many kills are enough? Naturally, the more such power, the better! With murderous intent permeating his body, Lin Luofeng walked out of the Barren Mountain step by step, with dead bones lying on the ground behind him.
ʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔThe writing is good, the author must be an old fantasy person, and the plot is relatively novel.
Except for the problem of realm setting (foundation can open up a small world, which is quite speechless, this is the second realm, no matter how huge the world view is, it should not appear in the second realm), other problems are not big, it can be regarded as a rare good fantasy novel by Tomato.
There are novel ideas and plot. The characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the writing can stir the readers' minds in a few words. The language is magnificent without losing its beauty, just like unfolding an ancient picture scroll, which shows that the author has a profound foundation and is close to becoming a famous writer. However, some traces of imitation can still be found in some places, which can also be regarded as successful reference. Many plots feel fragmented, adding to the mystery.
Very good, I like this very much. Unlike some plot systems that seize the opportunity to build the foundation in two months and the Nascent Soul in half a year. This book of yours can be regarded as the true cultivation of immortality. Stealing opportunities from others to practice and upgrade faster than others, but not outrageously. I saw a book about signing in, and after signing in for two months, you will reach the realm of a saint. It's simply unsightly, and it's good to be like the author. I hope the author will keep it up and even have one or two big outbursts occasionally. As long as it's not too outrageous, it's good. I look forward to more updates from the author.
The system is about to come out and eliminate their opportunity to plunder. Super pretty.
It's not bad, I just feel that the Son of Luck is really smooth sailing. He doesn't have the hardships that the Son of Luck has. It's only when he meets the protagonist that he has some hardships.
It's okay, but I feel like this shouldn't be considered a dark text.
It's a rare traditional writing method. Come on, I will keep following up!
In the book, Pig's Knuckle has an excellent IQ, he is flexible and flexible in doing things, and he knows how to seize the right opportunity. This novel ranks among the top six fantasy novels I have ever read. It is great!
Is there a female protagonist? There should be no author, right? I should just come back.
If you stop, that's rock bottom. If you're still going, it's uphill. This is the best explanation I've ever heard about a low point in life. --Liu Tong "Your loneliness is glorious despite defeat"
Not bad, very surprising
A very nice book
Big cheers for the author
The subject matter is pretty good, but it's a bit mindless. You should be able to watch it happily without any brains. You can go to The Virgin Who Stumbled In, but changed it to The Cruel Man Who Stood In
Although the writing is average, I still have to give it five stars. After all, work hard on your homework.
It's very good, I hope it doesn't rot.
Raise a book, raise a book, the beginning is decisive and decisive, and I have my own feelings, but I still hope that the author can write about the harem and not be a dog licker! ! !
It's very interesting. I like the character at the beginning. It's much better than other books of the same type.
I don't know why the rating is only 8.4. Anyway, I think it's very beautiful.
Well written, keep up the good work👍
Not bad, hope it doesn't end badly
Not bad, pretty good
It's not satisfying to watch it in one sitting
Not bad, you can take a look
Five stars, so well written (^0^)/
Haha, come on, the author
Although I haven't finished reading it, I just came here to criticize you for being a dark current, not a holy lady, and killing decisively. If you really do it, five stars will be appropriate. If it is what you said, then your book will definitely become popular. Whether it becomes popular or not is a matter of time.