The Path of a Supporting Character Who Assists the Protagonist

It's almost finished. This is my opinion about this book. At least this time I can write the ending✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ Next, list the shortcomings There are many holes left unfilled Second, the writing style is still terrible. It feels like I am keeping a running account rather than writing a novel. The personality settings of the three characters are not distinct enough, and there are many typos and sentences in the article. 4. The rhythm is too fast, the rhythm is not well controlled, and the overall situation is boring and lacks interest. Five battle scenes are single and blurry, with repetitive sentences, words, and sentences. (That's all I've thought about the shortcomings for now, I'll fill them in if there are any later) I'm just a piece of shit

I hope the author doesn't mess up the story. I have to say that the subject matter is really good. It's not like other stories where he's a supporting character but always tries to steal the chance to be the protagonist, and the woman who was originally the protagonist just sticks to him for no reason.

Not bad, come on! 👍🏻

Can't read,,,

Beautiful, I like it!