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I like to read Honkai fan fiction because I want to no longer look at it from the perspective of a captain, who is like a bystander, but to really save and help [shy] (I like Xier, you know the author [smile])

Except for the protagonist's low intelligence, this is a very good work. I hope the author can bring the protagonist's IQ to a normal level.

It's not easy to read a broken novel. After reading it, I feel pretty good. I finally don't feel like Captain Salted Fish anymore. I just don't know if it will be a knife. Oh my, when I talk about Captain Salted Fish, I get angry. As long as the captain can move in the plot, I believe the plot will change significantly [laughter] At this time, a captain was holding the Void Manzo and the Heavenly Fire Sword and was preparing to do a big thing.

Ness, I finally found a broken novel✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I'm a stupid person and won't say anything good. I just feel that there are relatively few Honkai Impact articles, and the quality is high. In addition, the author is also very diligent in updating. Apart from being afraid of raising books and raising them to death, there are no shortcomings.

I am very optimistic about this book and hope it will be updated more often. This book will have higher achievements in the future, and there will be more books. More people will read it, and there will be more fans in the future.

There are many novels about collapse. But follow the plot like this. However, there are probably not many Honkai Impact novels that have been modified and don't seem to be repulsive. The author may go to Xiaopo Station to find inspiration.

The author's writing is very good, but I am very concerned about who the heroine is. Being a pure love warrior is not like seeing three thousand harems, but it is not easy for the author to code. I still insist on seeing what the author can write in the future! [Smile][smile]

This is the warrior from the darkness, the five stars given to you by Dark Diga [smile][smile][smile] Take a look at the reading time and take another look

The subject matter and content of the writing are very good, but I feel that the author's writing style may be able to write about true human nature without being limited by the plot, rather than simply being good at evil, just like the kind of Super Beast Arms where everyone is working hard for their own ideals and their own determined good (the above is my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The book is very good, the characters are very full, but the author is really a bit short.

I quite like it, but I just can't get enough of it, hahaha

So far, this book has no problems and is very good. At least the characters have not collapsed. Overall, it is very good. Good luck to the author [like] [laughing] The following is my personal proposal. Now that the protagonist has become a "monster", will he suffer a mental breakdown? So becoming a lawyer is a point that I pay attention to. Moreover, the protagonist's Honkai energy is now a very strong Judgment-level Chi You, which is already a very qualified Herrscher body. It makes sense that the protagonist wants Star to become the Herrscher. Approximately 70% of fan fiction today features the main character becoming a Herrscher. [Thinking] And there are only a few things that the protagonist can change into the Herrscher. I think the Herrscher of Wind or the Herrscher of Ice, and the Herrscher of Rock, I think these are very maneuverable. Anyway, everything depends on the author's intention so author, come on! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

I've almost reached Chapter 40, and the only thing I want to complain about is that the fight against Chi You was really well-received. I can't tell you very well, because I don't know why the main character of this book thinks in a way that I can barely accept, because I can also see what the author wants to express, which is an ignorant person who has traveled through time. It is a process for a boy to become more mature and stable, and to be able to think. However, first of all, the author should know that he is a time traveler, and should be able to know the impact of everything that happened in the collapse on other characters and himself. Therefore, I feel that if the fight against Chi You can be used, the protagonist's way of thinking can be understood. I think it would be better to become more subtle and introverted. Although there are systematic explanations of the plot and the reaction of the protagonist, which can show a relatively perfect logical relationship, what the author writes is still too abrupt. It may be that we have poisoned what the protagonist wants to express in this book, so my advice to the author is In the future, when writing about the protagonist's growth, it is better not to describe too much psychologically. It is better to be more direct and combine the environment of the surrounding characters with the protagonist's psychology. Don't be like when writing about Chi You, where the protagonist's psychological changes fluctuate too much. In short, this is a very good book, and I will keep reading it.

Overall it's very good. The characters in the plot all seem to be very individual. I can only say that they are not invincible. There is no beginning and they are invincible. They kill everyone in an instant. I think the writing is very good, because I am tired of reading those kinds of invincible stories. I can only say that this writing is very innovative and great.

Five bucks for it, hey, this book is imaginative and innovative enough, and it can also bring real emotions to readers. After all, everyone knows the plot of Beng San. He either gets stabbed or is on the way to being stabbed. After all, all the old captains have been disgusted by Beng San's plan. For me, a new captain, I am going through hardships [face covering]. The author of this book wrote this book with heart and love. In short, please give it a try and hope that more and more readers will read this book. This book is excellent enough [laughs][like] Look how long I've been watching [laughing evilly]

Mainly because I like it. Secondly, he is not like other protagonists. He is so ordinary that he cannot be found in a crowd, and his personality is very popular. If there is no system, he may not even have a chance to be discovered when the collapse comes, which makes him appear to be ordinary. In terms of personality and temperament, he is also very "ordinary" - easily impulsive and discouraged. If the system hadn't forced him, he might have died. This is why I like him, he is very close to the public and has a sense of intimacy. (Purely personal opinion)

There is a saying that it is okay for an author to have a harem. The game is already full of regrets, so why do fans also have regrets? Urban harem novels or stallion novels, it's not that I hate that there are too many female protagonists, it's that there are too many, without any emotional foundation, and no foreshadowing. I take them one by one, and I almost forget about this character after a few chapters. This book controls the characters well, and it can be used as a harem. Don't limit yourself to just one or two. Watching fandoms is to have fun, to make up for regrets, and to watch the stars. , Kiana, Mei, Bronya, Ruoxue, Ruofeng, and Orlandale can all be considered. In contrast, for harem novels, there are not many people. Control the characters well so that they can all play their own roles and have their own roles. Even if there are too many, it may be difficult to control, so there is no need to limit it to two. Come on, author

When the world view is not established in the early stage, the plot feels a bit awkward. For example, you can know that Kiana has this character, but you still feel awkward. Later, I added many of my own settings and things to make the story complete, and I can still read different storylines even though I originally understood the plot. Although the protagonist has been added, the Yusan family still has their own new growth, which I really like. Then, the plot of the later chapters of Yae Sakura and Rin is really fast. After reading the supplement, I understand the idea of ​​​​you want to write, but I still want to say that it is really fast, and I didn't understand it before the supplement. 1. Why does Ling Ye admit that he killed the villagers? 2. Why do you want Sakura to hate him, just to let her improve her strength? Sharing memories with new powers and then taking Sakura away can also train them. Finally, I hope it will be published soon, and if I look at the speed of this chapter, I think the chapters will be around 500 to 600 chapters. (I hope this level will be maintained in the future) and then smoothly handle the relationship between Ling Ye and the supporting characters. Once this is handled well, it will be a huge plus.

Very good, I quite like it. I feel like there are far fewer Honkai Impact books than there are Genshin Impact books. I hope the author will not stop updating I feel like the rating is a bit low. I hope new readers don't mind. This book is still very good.

Very well written and a very good story.

How to say it? This is one of the better fanfics in the Honkai Impact series that I have seen so far. In terms of fanfics of modern civilization, it is the best. Give the author great encouragement...

I personally like the character of the protagonist very much. It may not be perfect, but it is very real. Human beings are inherently contradictory individuals. It is inevitable that there will be confusion. We cannot be perfect, but we can continue to get better.

A rare growth-type protagonist. Most of the protagonists are invincible all the way and rely on the system to be invincible. However, this book really writes about the growth of the protagonist's character and restores a real Bengbengbeng world. I personally feel that it is very good (except for the slow update)

It can be seen that the author's writing style is quite good, and the plot is also well-founded. However, the protagonist in the previous writing is particularly useless, which can easily dissuade some readers. You must know that the post-00 generation does not like the feeling of being manipulated. I hope to pay attention [Like]

The most awesome Tomato Hongkai Santong humanities, the world pattern is huge

It's not that it's amazing, but it does suit my taste. Some people say it's poisonous, but I think it's excusable, and it's quite right. Moreover, the author laid the groundwork well in advance. The most important thing is that it's comfortable to watch in three aspects. It suits me well, so I give it a high score hehehe.

It's good. The author's writing is good and he doesn't seem to be repulsive.

The plot is good, but the author is too slow to update. Sometimes there are only two chapters a month. Alas~

It's okay, I can watch it, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable watching it. I feel a little aggrieved. The more I think about it, the angrier it becomes. Forget it about Samsung.